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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: rmahi25

That show was way to funny🤣


Its one of the best written shows in ITV. So planned and well written and brilliantly executed. ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Why pm? Is it forbidden for us? Post it in forum.

I posted it in CC first, then I PMed her. I didn't want to post anything incomplete in MF and spam. Yeh maine kaunsa ganja phunk ke yeh ajeeb o gareeb cheez likhi thi, mujhe khud bhi nahi pata.smiley39smiley39smiley39

I'm sharing it here too. Also joote, sara hua anda and tamatar are wholeheartedly welcome.

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS A PIECE OF TRASH PROCEED WITH CAUTION.


[ALTERNATE UNIVERSE!]


HER SHRIEK PENETRATED the sound of crashing waves in the air. The surface of water slammed into her body like concrete and reverberated through her muscles, and she wanted to plunge below until everything was drowned in silence once again.



The powerful waves, she had always loved them. And when they are roused, they could toss ships like toys, smashing them on the rocks.



She breathed in the salty breath of the oceans which only emanated poignancy. "I can't live like this," she cried.



The moment her foot would slip from the cliff's edge, she knew she was going to die. She knew her madness wasn't ceasing, it was only increasing. She returned her gaze to Aniruddh. Feeling the salty taste of the air on her tongue and the scent of the sea in her nostrils, she closed her eyes to evade the pain that tagged along.



Biding him a goodbye was difficult. After all, he was her husband, her guide, her rock, her everything...



"No, Bondita." Aniruddh caught her by wrist, making her turn on her heels, so that she's no longer facing the cliff. He tried to explain her, pacify her but nothing worked! Her forever expressive doe eyes, now glassy and pained. "This is not you. These are the pills talking. Throw them when we reach home, Bondita..." he choked out.



Bondita cried helpless, and she could remember Ophelia from Shakespeare's Hamlet in that moment. Her madness was synonymous to hers. Maybe that's why she decided drowning was the best option to kill herself. She had always idolized her, after all!



Ophelia had drowned herself. Just like she was going to do.



She wanted her story to scramble with the final words:


Bondita drowned.


Ironically, so did Ophelia.


For a moment, she forgot about Aniruddh's presence; but when she looked at him, she couldn't help but smile, but that smile was laced with pain and insanity. "You saved me Ani, You saved me countless times, from my asshole dad, from Abir and from every other evil and I- I", she croaked breathless, "I love you Ani, I love you so much that it pains, but if you love me let me go..."

Edited by Briti1107 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujz


Of course! Why else would I go? 😃

Yep. I knew it. This is all time favourite of ours. This show is ❤️ This is the only show in ITV which I watched till end.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Briti1107

I posted it in CC first, then I PMed her. I didn't want to post anything incomplete in MF and spam. Yeh maine kaunsa ganja phunk ke yeh ajeeb o gareeb cheez likhi thi, mujhe khud bhi nahi pata.smiley39smiley39smiley39

I'm sharing it here too. Also joote, sara hua anda and tamatar are wholeheartedly welcome.

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS A PIECE OF TRASH PROCEED WITH CAUTION.


[ALTERNATE UNIVERSE!]


HER SHRIEK PENETRATED the sound of crashing waves in the air. The surface of water slammed into her body like concrete and reverberated through her muscles, and she wanted to plunge below until everything was drowned in silence once again.



The powerful waves, she had always loved them. And when they are roused, they could toss ships like toys, smashing them on the rocks.



She breathed in the salty breath of the oceans which only emanated poignancy. "I can't live like this," she cried.



The moment her foot would slip from the cliff's edge, she knew she was going to die. She knew her madness wasn't ceasing, it was only increasing. She returned her gaze to Aniruddh. Feeling the salty taste of the air on her tongue and the scent of the sea in her nostrils, she closed her eyes to evade the pain that tagged along.



Biding him a goodbye was difficult. After all, he was her husband, her guide, her rock, her everything...



"No, Bondita." Aniruddh caught her by wrist, making her turn on her heels, so that she's no longer facing the cliff. He tried to explain her, pacify her but nothing worked! Her forever expressive doe eyes, now glassy and pained. "This is not you. These are the pills talking. Throw them when we reach home, Bondita..." he choked out.



Bondita cried helpless, and she could remember Ophelia from Shakespeare's Hamlet in that moment. Her madness was synonymous to hers. Maybe that's why she decided drowning was the best option to kill herself. She had always idolized her, after all!



Ophelia had drowned herself. Just like she was going to do.



She wanted her story to scramble with the final words:


Bondita drowned.


Ironically, so did Ophelia.


For a moment, she forgot about Aniruddh's presence; but when she looked at him, she couldn't help but smile, but that smile was laced with pain and insanity. "You saved me Ani, You saved me countless times, from my asshole dad, from Abir and from every other evil and I- I", she croaked breathless, "I love you Ani, I love you so much that it pains, but if you love me let me go..."

@bold: This cracked me up 🤣

It's good yaar. Complete it and post it in the forum.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Yep. I knew it. This is all time favourite of ours. This show is ❤️ This is the only show in ITV which I watched till end.

IPKian too. OMG it was my first ITV show ever. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujz


Its one of the best written shows in ITV. So planned and well written and brilliantly executed. ❤️

This show is full of fun, emotions, romance, passion, love, family values everything. ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

@bold: This cracked me up 🤣

It's good yaar. Complete it and post it in the forum.

I'll try. 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Briti1107

IPKian too. OMG it was my first ITV show ever. 🤗

🤗

Mine too. And it's the only show which I watched till end. Mai bahut kam shows dekhti hoo. I have high hopes from BB too.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Try and bina gaanja fooke 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

🤗

Mine too. And it's the only show which I watched till end. Mai bahut kam shows dekhti hoo. I have high hopes from BB too.

BB brought me back to ITV. 😃It's special.

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