II Chahat II: Rudhita SS // Last Chapter Updated @Page 49 // - Page 30

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Posted: 5 years ago

OMG !!!! 😲😲😲

CHAHAT update......🤩❤️☺️😘

Mei toh gayyi..😇

@Sujz....😘😘😘😘😘 ...you are a sweetheart..❤️❤️❤️ ... update nahi dene wali ne achanak se update de diya,ische badi baat kya ho sakti hain..🤗🥳😘

Let me finish it,then will come to comment

Edited by TinkiGogoi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Finally we got Chahat. Sabra ka fal meetha hota hai. Thank you for this meetha fal.

Loved the starting part Bondita in Anirudh's arms and the emotions of Ani that time.☺️

Ani is more handsome here.😍🙈 Junior Binoy reading newspaper 😆

Saudamini's dance and Ani's reaction seeing this 🤣

Ani giving back Mini and Binoy.👏

Som and Batuk is taking Roshogolla for their boudi. 😃

'The sindoor refilled stood in all its glory, screaming out to whom she belonged.' I always love the way you describe sindoor.

She belonged to the one, the one who belonged to her. ❤️

Edited by Prit_007 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Are waah kya declaration tha barrister babu ka

Awesome update

Loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello one of my most favourite writers of this forum smiley31

This warm hug is just because i know you were reluctant to write the update and not in that mood but surprisingly you updated it and that too such a long update smiley3🤩..so thanks a lot for your effort ❤️😘..

Now coming to your story..just now come to know that i did not comment on your previous update.or may be it did not posted.I am actually confused. am not going back to that but merging my view in this.

Sujz,in my honest opinion,you got your form back in this update..I don't know may be due to long term disconnection you lost the grip,i could not connect that much with your last update that much.Or may be i was expecting more due to the eagerness you created in your lockdown update where Ani challenged Bon that she will fall in love with him in 2 days..(That was completely my opinion,i may be wrong here or was overexpecting😆)

In this update,you got your form back..the start..OMG..how beautifully you penned down the thoughts of Ani 👏this..this was the writer for whose writing i was craving..story kickstarted there and it just goes up and up..👍🏼

Loved how Bon noticed Ani's change in physical appearance in these years to his resemblance with his dad.Never thought these two could have matched in this way..newspaper 🤪..Ani adoring her beauty specially the Sindoor and how it belongs to him..your lines are magical...

So Ani is taking slow steps to break the awkwardness between them by holding hands..these little little steps are neccessary to convey his emotions to Bon as she is so oblivious to his feelings 🥺

Your descriptions about Sauda's karnama was so so funny specially him slaping himself in mind 🤣bechara Arnab..this mini is not khushi..poor guy might have compared mini with her 🤪

Mini is so cruel..cannot imagine her worst version than this.But i loved Ani's reply to her..that was the best part of this update🥳the way you describe the whole reply of Ani..my..my..be it how her own marriage is a business deal but not a heartily relation..how she is just a mistake..specially how he described the importance of Bon in his life.."woh meri pehli ya dusri nahi..meri zindagi ki eklauti choice hai " ..i got goosebumps Sujz..what a whisleworthy dialogue it was..🥳👏..how beautifully and clearly you describe this whole conversation 👍🏼..but sad part is Bon never overhears the good convos ..even som-batuk hears but not Bon.. otherwise she would have already be with Ani..I loved Som-Batuk's convos too..but wondering why they are going to get Roshogulle ki handi's 🤔?? May be to manao Bondi..😉

Overall i loved it a lot and now waiting for the last and the most romantic part..and you have to make it the best as you promised ☺️..


Bass itna hi..thak gayi mein likhte likhte..comment ka hi update ho gaya yeh toh meri tarsf se 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Unresd my comment 😳

Eagerly waiting for the next update 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amaging work dear 👏

The whole story till now is so beautiful. And this update is best in all forms. Be it romanticism or explaining the emotions of Anirudh,you are so well in explaining, like how you wrote this - "Just like sun was the most attractive part of the horizon during a sunrise, the dark sindoor filling her partition enhanced her ethereal beauty. " or

the details how Ani shattered Mini and Binoy with his word specially Mini. 'kam se kam business ke liye hi sahi koi toh shadi kar raha hai" and that Iklota choice dialogue 👍🏼 mini ki bolti bandh. But i feel sad for Bondita that she had to go this way. Loved this side of Ani's bros.

Next chapter is last so i am expecting lots of romance ☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sujz my loveliest sweetheart. IDK where to begin from... I just read Chahat in one go and my mind blown away sweetie. The way you captured the very essence of Rudhita this beautifully make my heart go all mushy. Also I would especially mention how well you handled the briefest moments of jealousy! An emotion portrayed right, instead of making it toxic. Kudos! When a jealous Pati Babu realised his love for Banu, I swear, I melted like Olaf. Also wassup of Ani getting flared up by guys whose name are Niranjan!! First for Kuch Nahi (all the danger bells chime, wrong person), and now again a certain Niranjan knocked sense into our sweetly buddhu Pati Babu. 🤣 Was it intentional tho? 😉 I love love love the way portrayed Somnath here. The Devar Bhabhi Trio are all heart. ❤️ The Bondita of your universe is exactly how I picture her to be too. 😳And I loved the way you have presented this story. Also when she fought to stop another Bondita, almost, in making, I swear I went all weepy. Ani raised his protégé so damn well, he must be so proud of his wife. Also our hero's heroic entry made me clap in glee. Ahhh the beauty, have you ever felt like drowning in an ocean of blissful, soothing and exceptionally well written masterpiece? Because, I surely feel like drowning in Chahat. Also go to hell Saudamini, you never ever understood what love is! Shameless lady flirting with Ani with to be hubby in sight. *pukes* Also how dare you taunt our girl you foul loathsome, evil little cockroach? (in Hermione's voice) Get lost. Ani ne toh Soda ke saare bubbles ko hi tod daale. Woah. I love this man. Ouffff. Once again, excellent story luv. I'm totally enamoured by your amazing writing skills. Soar higher and higher luv. Stay blessed and happy.🤗

Edited by Briti1107 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome sujz....

Ani waking up with boni in his arms....intentional or not ....but serene☺️

Ani's reaction on seeing soda dancing🤣

God.....ye mini bhi naa. ...I think she is the same in both show and the story....pagal

Bondu's not so surprising types reaction on soda's dance🤣

Soda's to be husband's reaction on her😆it's very heartwarming to see ani's realisation that bondu was never his second choice but only choice....hayeee

Pati babu going to patch up with his bondu.....

Somnath understands his dada well.....impressive👍🏼

Beautiful sujzz....eagerly Waiting for the next part....

A little bit sad since it's going to be the last part ....but something lovely and memorable is going to happen😳


Please let us all enjoy with your beautiful stories more❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Update the last part soon plz

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Posted: 5 years ago

Plz update the chapter soon

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