Hello one of my most favourite writers of this forum 
This warm hug is just because i know you were reluctant to write the update and not in that mood but surprisingly you updated it and that too such a long update
š¤©..so thanks a lot for your effort ā¤ļøš..
Now coming to your story..just now come to know that i did not comment on your previous update.or may be it did not posted.I am actually confused. am not going back to that but merging my view in this.
Sujz,in my honest opinion,you got your form back in this update..I don't know may be due to long term disconnection you lost the grip,i could not connect that much with your last update that much.Or may be i was expecting more due to the eagerness you created in your lockdown update where Ani challenged Bon that she will fall in love with him in 2 days..(That was completely my opinion,i may be wrong here or was overexpectingš)
In this update,you got your form back..the start..OMG..how beautifully you penned down the thoughts of Ani šthis..this was the writer for whose writing i was craving..story kickstarted there and it just goes up and up..šš¼
Loved how Bon noticed Ani's change in physical appearance in these years to his resemblance with his dad.Never thought these two could have matched in this way..newspaper š¤Ŗ..Ani adoring her beauty specially the Sindoor and how it belongs to him..your lines are magical...
So Ani is taking slow steps to break the awkwardness between them by holding hands..these little little steps are neccessary to convey his emotions to Bon as she is so oblivious to his feelings š„ŗ
Your descriptions about Sauda's karnama was so so funny specially him slaping himself in mind š¤£bechara Arnab..this mini is not khushi..poor guy might have compared mini with her š¤Ŗ
Mini is so cruel..cannot imagine her worst version than this.But i loved Ani's reply to her..that was the best part of this updateš„³the way you describe the whole reply of Ani..my..my..be it how her own marriage is a business deal but not a heartily relation..how she is just a mistake..specially how he described the importance of Bon in his life.."woh meri pehli ya dusri nahi..meri zindagi ki eklauti choice hai " ..i got goosebumps Sujz..what a whisleworthy dialogue it was..š„³š..how beautifully and clearly you describe this whole conversation šš¼..but sad part is Bon never overhears the good convos ..even som-batuk hears but not Bon.. otherwise she would have already be with Ani..I loved Som-Batuk's convos too..but wondering why they are going to get Roshogulle ki handi's š¤?? May be to manao Bondi..š
Overall i loved it a lot and now waiting for the last and the most romantic part..and you have to make it the best as you promised āŗļø..
Bass itna hi..thak gayi mein likhte likhte..comment ka hi update ho gaya yeh toh meri tarsf se š¤£