My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 61

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


Waiting for the update i am like-


Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar

Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar

Meri Subahon Ko Teri Shaamon Ka

Meri Shaamon Ko Tere Vaadon Ka

Meri Raaton Ko Tere Khaabon Ka

Meri Neendon Ko Teri Baahon Ka

Mere Jazbon Ko Teri Chaahon Ka

Bahaki-Bahaki Si Kuchh Khataaon Ka

Khoobasoorat Se Kuchh Gunaahon Ka

Intezaar Intezaar Intezaar Intezaar



Update de do😭


🤣 This sr is like ekta kapoor serial sr wait or pregnancy wait 🤣 it will go for 2years minimum 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Krithzz



🤣 This sr is like ekta kapoor serial sr wait or pregnancy wait 🤣 it will go for 2years minimum 

The longest wait for sr🤣

Posted: 3 years ago

Here is your wait over....finally got time to write the update.....


Part 34


Soon the day of Roka came….whole haveli was in a festivemode…..full of flowers…..Beeji was continuously instructing everyone to makeeverything perfect….Arya was chirping all over haveli adorning a ghargra…..daduwas screaming on Bobby who was having fun instead of getting things done….itwas like some big festival…

 

Nb. Haye haye roke me aap log itna halla macha rahe ho…shaadike din to poora ghar sar pe utha loge…

Be. Arey Naembi meri poti ki shadi hai itna halla to hoga hi…

D. haa aakhir shammi ji ka sapna jo poora ho raha hai…

Nb. Sahi kaha aapne Khurana saab….

 

All were stunned looking at the Dulha…Neil adorned asimple cream color kurta and kepyt his look simple….he was smiling by the waythe eldders were looking at him….

 

N. Kya hua…acha nahi lag raha kya beeji….yeh mat kehna kimein aapki poti ke layak nahi…

Be. Chup kar….humari hi nazar lag jaani hai…

B. Neil bhai…inka yeh haal hai to aapko is avtar me dekh keminni se to control hi na hoga…

Nb. Chup kar nigode…humari umar ka lihaaz kar yeh sab bolnese pehle.

 

They were distracted by the noise and all turned on the directionfrom where it was coming….to their surprise it was mini who was climbing downthe stairs fully dressed up….she wore a Red color Anarkali dress with matchingbangles…Neil was awestuck to see mini in traditional attire…and was standing mouthwide open….

 

B. Muh to band karo uncle….

N. Chup kar…wo to mai…wo…

P. haa haa….tum…tum..fida ho gaye na minni ko dekh ke…

N. Haa….nahi….ahh haa…

Be. Meri bachi…tujhe aise dekh ke barso ho gaye…achi lagrahi hai….

Nb. Haa shammi ji ….

 

Soon Pandit ji came and instructed them what to do in theritual….Beeji made Neil and mini sit……Dadu and beeji did teeka of Neil and didall other rituals….then lala and geeta did the chunri chadhayi rasam for minifrom Neil’s side….soon all the rituals were done and all were relaxing….

 

A. Mujhe bh shaai karni hai…

B. haye haye arya teri behen shaadi kam nahi jo tu karnachahti hai….

M. chup kar bobby…aw mera baby kyun shaadi karna chahta hai…

 

Arya comes and sit between Neil and mini and says…

 

A. tumhe tumahar prince charming mil gaya na….mujhe bhichahiye…..

N. acha….Aapko kaisa prince charming chahiye….

A. bilkul tumhare jaisa….

M. Neil jaisa kyun…

A. Kyunki wo humesha tumhare peeche rehta hai na tumhesupport karne…kyunki wo tum par ttt trust karta hai isiliye…..

N. Oh ok…noted choti madam…jab aap badi ho jayengi na bilkulwaisa hi prince charming layenge…

A. tab kyun …abhi kyun nahi…

M. Kyunki dadi amma tum dadi amma nahi ho….

 

All had a great laugh at arya’s demand of getting princecharming……

 

Soon all left the haveli and even beeji was insistingneil also to come along….but mini wanted to spend sometime with him as he wontbe staying at haveli at night……she cant say this directly as dadu was observingthem continuously…..

 

M. Ah Neil…wo Nay order aayi this na kal uske baare mediscuss karna tha to tum thodi der ruk jao…

N. Ahhh…abhi…

M. haan…

N. thik hai….

D. Kyun abhi…kal subah restaurant me discuss kar lena….

Nb. Arey Khurana sabb kal ka to kaam hai isiliye abhi hikarna padega….aap chaliye…

A. Naembi mujhe bh aana hai….mein montu keg har jaungi chalona…

Nb. Thik hai chal…mein aati hoon shammi ji…

Be. Ji…

D. acha…thik hai mein bhi rukta hun…shammi ji aap jayiye…

 

Mini and Neil got uncomfortable when dadu said he willstay back….minni saw beeji helplessly…

 

Be. Arey Khurana saab kya aap bhi…aapki dawa ka waqt ho gayahai…aur mein baar baar ghhoom nahi sakti….to chaliye ab….

 

Saying beeji dragged dadu with her leaving Minni and neilalone at Haveli….

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by zalima


Lata 🤗

Kahan hai yaar ? 

Yahan sab pyaase aatma log wait  kar rahe hai sr ka☺️

Image


🤣🤣🤣


Update kar diya.... 

Posted: 3 years ago

Lata🤗hope you are doing good . Finally you updated.  This was beautiful. 😳  MiNeYa moment was nice .Mini in bridal dress 

Posted: 3 years ago

Finally finally finally upadated🥳😆

Intezar ki ghadiya khatam hui😆

Loved it

Aisa laga jaise pb ka episode chal raha ho❤️

Emotional kar diya pb ki yaad dila kar😭

Kamina chanel🤬

Bahut hi sundar tha👏

Posted: 3 years ago

Omg!!!!!!!!!!

Finally u updated..

We thought now we have to come back after a rebirth to read it...

BDW awesome update..

Mineilyaa moments was❤

Loved it...

Ess baar please update soon💙

Posted: 3 years ago

Hayee Meri Mini ethnic wear mein kitni pyaari lagegi 

Aww Arya tu mere paas aaja , mai dhundugi tereliye prince charming kyuki teri veerbalika aur genie kisi kaam ke nahi hai, tere liye ladke dekhne ki umar me ye log aur bache produce kar rahe honge.... I will get you a perfect prince charming 

Dadu chod do akele na MiNeil ko

Loved the update

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Krithzz


Lata🤗hope you are doing good . Finally you updated.  This was beautiful. 😳  MiNeYa moment was nice .Mini in bridal dress 


I am good krithzz...🤗


Thanks yaar.... 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


Finally finally finally upadated🥳😆

Intezar ki ghadiya khatam hui😆

Loved it

Aisa laga jaise pb ka episode chal raha ho❤️

Emotional kar diya pb ki yaad dila kar😭

Kamina chanel🤬

Bahut hi sundar tha👏


Awe... Thanks Anjali... 🤗


Sony will go to hell yaar i just hate that channel.... 



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