Bygones! A MishBir Story - Page 16

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you notes:

Thank you Anna (@Ananya) for constantly discussing this story with me and helping me have clear thoughts. It was so much fun discussing with you! I wouldn't have been able to pull through this story without you. Thank you!

And Thank you Lubna (@Lubz) for always going through the story before it gets posted. Your encouragement means the world to me. Thank you for always helping me do better Guruji!!

And Thank you to all the readers for reading and leaving your awesome reviews behind!! Until next time.

And apologies for the extra long update!

Lots of love,

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Posted: 5 years ago

It so beautifully written and so emotional❤️. Best thing mishti didn't reconciled with karishma . Whatever may be d reason what karishma did was unforgettable. U wrote it so practically . 👏 but at d end mishri and mishbir bond was cute .

Now I will be waiting for Ur next story

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Posted: 5 years ago

OMG I loved this so much. Let's start from the beginning:

I am so happy Kuhu got to hear those comments about her own behaviour..it's been going on for too long and became completely untolerable.


Kunal is such a sweetheart for helping Mishbir.


The final showdown between Karishma and Mishti: I will always be on Mishti's side. My poor mishti had to go through SO much. Nothing can justify Karishma's side according to me. Thank you for making the conversation so smooth and impactful👏 Shekhar's last conversation with Mishti was really nice as well


Finally, I love mishbir and mishri bond. You have always depicted Mishri as a sweetheart and understanding person and thank you so much for that.


Ps: I am sorry that I was not able to express how much I love your story. I always look forward to the next chapter and I am going to miss it so much. Please tell me this is not the last update.

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Posted: 5 years ago

its wonderful ending...🤗

just loved the way how it has end...

its amazing and i love every part of update...

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Posted: 5 years ago

It's a beautiful end to the story.... I thoroughly felt the emotions written in every words....

Thank you...

Take care

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wonderful ending ❤️


I’m so glad you didn’t have everything magically fall into place!


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: angelfire78

Wonderful ending ❤️


I’m so glad you didn’t have everything magically fall into place!


daya...this writer never write magically everything fallen into place...

its very realistic and awesome... perfect blend of everyone's emotions...

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Posted: 5 years ago

I just loved it. Simply superb dear.👏


Mishti didn't accept Karishma's apology is the best thing happened in the last part. 👍🏼 It's unacceptable for a child to see his/her mother leaving him/her to have a better life.Similarly a mother has to be a heatless person to leave her child for a better life.I totally support Misht's decision here.


Abir,Mishti and Mishri.... these trio Loved the last part.


I will be waiting for your next story.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarcastic_me

It so beautifully written and so emotional❤️. Best thing mishti didn't reconciled with karishma . Whatever may be d reason what karishma did was unforgettable. U wrote it so practically . 👏 but at d end mishri and mishbir bond was cute .

Now I will be waiting for Ur next story


Thank you so much. Yah I guess I didnt believe in making Mishti hate Karishma but I also believed that just for that reason, she doesnt need to accept her too. She can forgive her and keep the distance.


I am very glad you liked it <3

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumaiya27

OMG I loved this so much. Let's start from the beginning:

I am so happy Kuhu got to hear those comments about her own behaviour..it's been going on for too long and became completely untolerable.


Kunal is such a sweetheart for helping Mishbir.


The final showdown between Karishma and Mishti: I will always be on Mishti's side. My poor mishti had to go through SO much. Nothing can justify Karishma's side according to me. Thank you for making the conversation so smooth and impactful👏 Shekhar's last conversation with Mishti was really nice as well


Finally, I love mishbir and mishri bond. You have always depicted Mishri as a sweetheart and understanding person and thank you so much for that.


Ps: I am sorry that I was not able to express how much I love your story. I always look forward to the next chapter and I am going to miss it so much. Please tell me this is not the last update.


Hello Sumaiyaa!!


Hahaha! I guess after the resort incident, I myself wanted Kuhu to get an earful so I added it my way haha.


I think with Karishma and Mishti, I wanted to keep it simple even though it could be complicated. Mishti is not someone who can hate. She can be upset, she can be mad but she cant hate someone. So I kept it rather realistic that she does forgive her but doesnt accept.


Mishri is my fav too haha!!


And please dont apologize. I am just glad you always read and left your two cents. Trust me! Every word matters. And unfortunately it is the last update. This story is done!

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