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Subhadra Haran (Part 1)
Mishti entered inside the room and saw a beautiful sight. In front of her stood a beautiful lady in green and white dress looking lost staring at the flute in her hands.
Mishti smiled seeing her, she remembered the state of hers during her wedding days with Nishant, how she always silently prayed kanha ji in her sub conscious mind for reunion of her and Abir, to make her Abir come back to her. Her heart cried for Abir all the time, she craved for his love and finally her Kanhaji bestowed her with his blessing.
Her Abir came back to her, she and Abir got united again, they got married and started their life full of bliss. She smiled again thinking about her and Princess Subhadra's situation's resemblance.
She took a deep breath and called her
M-Rajkumari Subhadra
Subhadra who was lost in her thoughts jerked a little and turned to look who called her.
She got little shocked seeing a girl standing in front of her with wierd dress and hairstyle.
Mishti smiled seeing her shocked face, she knew this reaction was coming
S-aap kaun hai
Mishti introduced herself
M-mera naam Mishti hai
Subhadra got more confused and making a wierd face asked
S-kaun mishti
She took a deep breath and prepared herself for the explaining session. She started telling all about the happenings and how she and her family became a part of Kanhaji's Leela which he's doing to marry his own sister with his best friend Rajkumaar Arjun.
Listening to all this Subhadra was shocked, she was not able to believe that the lady standing in front of her was from a whole other Yug. But slowly all information started sinking and the happiness started appearing on her face, tears of relief started flowing from her eyes.
She is relieved now, she don't have to marry Duryodhan now and on top of that she could marry the love of her life. She started crying not able to control her happiness.
She joined her hands in front of mishti but mishti was quick to avoid that and coming forward she hugged her tightly. She can understand her situation, she has been in the same situation, it was horrible but her Kanhaji never left her side by being her confidant and her inspiration all the time.
Now he has given her chance to do something for him, something for his little sister and she will make sure that she don't disappoint him.
Lord Krishna has been their secret keeper for whole life, they don't even have to say it out loud, their minds and hearts are always connected to him, he of course read his sister's mind, the love her eyes had for his dear Parth.
Mishti broke the hug and wiped the tears from her cheeks shaking her head telling her not to cry. Subhadra smiled nodded.
Mishti then told her the plan Subhadra got shocked, she didn't expected that
S- mishti, kya ye thik hoga humara matlab agar koi bhool ho gayi to
Mishti sighed and said
M-mera vishwaas kariye sab thik hoga
Subhadra thought for a while and then nodded her head in agreement. Mishti smiled widely and said in excited tone
M-yess I am so happy thank god aap maan gayi
Subhadra smiled a little seeing her jumping in happiness but confusion was clearly written on her face. Mishti after celebrating her small victory looked at her and realized that Subhadra didn't understand a word she said as she said in English
M-um mera matlab accha hua aap maan gayi ab mazaaa aayega
Subhadra again frowned and said
S-mazaa?
Mishti got little nervous realizing that she still didn't understand what she said and asked
M-mazaa hindi shabd nahi hai kya
Subhadra smiled a little seeing her nervous face, she looked like a baby, she then said in loving tone
S-humne kabhi ye shabd nahi suna kintu hum uska arth samajh gaye, aap yehi kehna chahti hai na ki aapko bahut aanand aayega
Mishti smiled and nodded her head
M-ha bahut aanand aayega, chahiye chalte hai
Mishti forwarded her hand, Subhadra took a deep breath and held her hand. They both smiled and went outside.
Reaching down the stairs Mishti tried to search Abir but he was nowhere. Subhadra was confused and asked
S-mishti aap kise dhundh rahi hai
M-um wo mere husband I mean mere pati Abir ko
S-unka naam Abir hai?
Mishti nodded, Subhadra also started looking here and there, she of course didn't knew how he looked like but could identify by the wierd dress, thinking his clothes will be different too from other clothes which men wear. Her eyes landed on a lady coming towards them, she was dressed in pink ghagra choli.
Subhadra frowned seeing her walking style, she was walking weirdly, and her physique was looking too strong to be a woman. She was looking at her suspiciously but got shocked hearing Mishti's word
M-Abir
Mishti was shocked seeing her husband in this look, his face was covered with veil but Mishti of course recognized him, she had seen him in this look before too. She was confused that why Abir disguised in this.
But Subhadra was more shocked than Mishti, when she heard Mishti calling the lady Abir she got petrified, she was just looking at the lady...means man up and down trying to figure out the look. Gulping a little she turned towards mishti and asked
S-mishti bura mat maaniyega ki hum aapse ye puch rahe hai, par kya Kalyug mein purush is tarah ke vastra pehente hai
Mishti's eyes got big hearing this, she shook her head rapidly in denial
M-nahi nahi Rajkumari Subhadra, aise vastra to Kalyug mein kanyaaein bhi kam pehenti hai
Subhadra then asked
S-to fir ye...inhone aise vastra kyu pehne hue hai
Till that Abir had reached to them, he looked at Mishti who was looking at him with confused face
M-Abir ye tumne aise kapde kyu pehne hue hai
A-arey mishti main agar Rajkumari Subhadra ke saath jaate hue dikhunga to sabko shak ho jaayega, Isliye maine socha thode time ke liye apna roop parivartan karke apne aapko stree bana du
And winked at her, Mishti rolled her eyes at his humourless joke but Subhadra giggled grabbing abir and mishti's attention. Seeing both looking at her she lowered her head but still smiled, she recalled her Bharata Krishna's story, where he had told her about Arjun disguising in Stree Roop to help him in abducting her Rukmini Bhabhi
Abir was looking at her and a companion filled in his heart, he looked at Mishti who smiled and nodded her head telling him that she's indeed Princess Subhadra, his partner's sister.
Abir smiled and by using his hands cracked the evil eyes from her, she smiled lowering her head. Mishti also smiled, she knew Abir will instantly developed soft corner for Subhadra, after she's his partner's sister.
Abir in her female masculine fake voice said
A-aap par kisi ki buri drishti na pade Rajkumari Subhadra
Both Subhadra and Mishti giggled hearing his voice, Abir smiled and then in his real voice said
A-aap chintit na ho Rajkumari, mera pariwaar aapki shaadi Rajkumar Arjun se karwa ke rahega
Subhadra blushed and in overwhelmed voice said
S-dhanyawaad
Abir immediately shook his head and said in his dramatic voice
A-Rajkumari Subhadra, dosti mein no thank you no sorry
Subhadra again made a confused face and Mishti again made a face
S-ji?
And mishti said
M-Abir tum Maine Pyaar Kiya ke dialogues maarna band karo and chalo, agar Duryodhan waapas aa gaya to hum sab phas jaayenge
Abir cleared his throat and nodded his head, the three started walking in the corridor.
Mishti and subhadra giggled seeing Abir trying to walk like a female but failing miserably. He hearing the giggling voice turned towards them and glared at mishti, Mishti suppressed her smile and by her hands cracked evil eyes from abir as he had done with Subhadra.
M-haaye kisi ki nazar na lage
And giggled more, subhadra also laughed a little and Abir felt little embarrassed
On the other side of Palace
Duryodhan was pacing to and fro in the room and Dushasan was standing at one place with tension on his face.
Dur-hume vishwaas nahi ho raha ki tum satya keh rahe the, Arjun jaisa dikhne wala Dwarka mein vo bhi Vasudev Krishna ka atithi, vichitra se vastra pehne the usne aur uski patni ne
Dus-keval vahi dono nahi the bhrata shree, unke saath aur do the, chaaro hi bade vichitra the, humne chaaro ko Vasudev Krishna ke saath mehel ke andar pravesh karte hue dekha tha
Duryodhan's face became stern
Dur-Agar vo Krishna koi shadyantra rach raha hai humare aur Subhadra ke vivah mein baadha daalne ke liye to hum aisa hone nahi denge
Dushasan also nodded in agreement.
Duryodhan suddenly frowned and turning towards Dushasan asked
Dur-mama shakuni kaha hai
In some corridor of Palace
Shakuni was looking at the duo with little nervous expression, like it is said, most dangerous enemy of us is the one who is unknown.
Kunal and Kuhu were looking at him with displeased expression but they controlled their anger as they know they've a task in hand.
Kunal cleared his throat and said
Kun-aap Dulhe ke mama hai na
Shakuni frowned thinking how come he knows that
Sh-hum kaun hai ye hum aapko baad mein bataayenge pehle aap bataiye ki aap kaun hai
Kunal got irritated instantly, he don't like when people back talks with him, till now only his family has right to question him back, no one else.
He gritted his teeth controlling his anger as he don't like Shakuni mama already and now he has to bear his tanturams too. He replied in a sarcastic voice
Kun-hum Vasudev Krishna ke vishesh atithi hai
Shakuni frowned more hearing Krishna's name, he is already suspicious about this marraige, he can't digest the fact that Vasudev Krishna agreed so easily and now these wierd humans coming as special guest is raising his suspicion.
He then asked
Sh-accha, par aapko to pehle kabhi nahi dekha, Kaunse rajya se hai aap log
Kuhu immediately repled- Rajkot
Kunal looked at Kuhu with big eyes and Shakuni frowned hearing the wierd name, he never heard of this name before. Kunal said to kuhu in hushed voice
Kun-kuhu hum rajgarh ke the, Rajkot ke nahi
Kuhu bite her tongue realizing the mistake she did, she gave a sorry look to kunal who blinked his eyes reassuring her, turning towards Shakuni he cleared his throat and said
Kun-iska matlab hai rajgarh
Shakuni was still not satisfied, seeing their clothes and hairstyle he was feeling wierd, very wierd.
Kunal noticed that he's gonna ask another question so he quickly said
Kun-ab ye mat sochiye ki humne aise vastra kyu pehne hue hai, Kyuki hum jo aapko batane waale hai vo isse adhik aavashyak hai
Shakuni raised his one brow thinking what he is going to say but Kuhu opened her mouth in shock, leaning little towards Kunal she asked
Ku-Kunal tumne Hindi ke itne heavy heavy words kaha seekhe
Kunal who was smirking looking at Shakuni suddenly frowned at Kuhu's question, he cleared his throat and leaned little close to Kuhu
Kun-kuhu abhi in sab baaton ka time nahi hai
Kuhu pouted and said
Ku-but kunal
"Kuhu", Kunal reprimanded her cutting in between
Shakuni rolled his eyes at their wierd behavior and to grab their attention cleared his throat. When they both looked at him, he said
Sh-aap hume batayenge vo aavashyak baat
Kunal and kuhu gave each other a secret smile and Kunal said
Kun-Maharaj Shakuni hum dono Aapse ek rasma ke baare mein baat karne aaye hai
Shakuni frowned and asked
Sh-rasm, kaisi rasma
Kunal answered
K-joota churaai ki rasma
On the other side of the palace
MishBir and Subhadra were still walking, going to the backgate of Palace as told by Krishna. They turned left to move but stopped dead in track hearing the voice calling out Subhadra.
The three quickly hide behind the wall
They again heard the voice "Subhadra"
Subhadra's eyes got widened as she recognized the voice and whispered "Bua"
Abir and mishti both heard what subhadra said
A-Rajkumari Subhadra aap jaanti hai inhe
Subhadra nodded and said
S-ji ye humari bua hai, Rajkumar Arjun ki maata Maharani kunti
They both nodded in acknowledgement. The voice started coming closer and the 3 started panicking. Mishti looked at Abir and said
M-abir mujhe jaakar unhe distract karna hoga, tum Rajkumari subhadra ke saath yehi ruko
A-mishti are you sure, Main chala jaata hu yaar
Abir said with concerned filled voice
M-abir mujhe hi jaana padega, tum jaaoge to unhe shak ho jaayega
Abir sighed and nodded
A-okay
Mishti nodded and left. Subhadra was looking little nervous and Abir was very tensed. He turned towards her and asked
A-Rajkumari Subhadra kya mehel se nikalne ka koi aur raasta hai, koi aur maarg, kyuki agar hum isi raaste se gaye to abhi maharani kunti ne dekha hai baad mein koi aur dekh lega
Subhadra also nodded agreeing to him, it's highly risky. She started thinking about any other way and suddenly she remembered her secret escape, in childhood she used that secretly escaped from Palace to wander around the city as she liked meeting different people and discovering new things. As princess it was not possible so she always used to get dressed up like a commoner with the help of his bhrata shree and then roam around the city.
Her face lit up remembering that escape and she happily turned towards Abir and told him about the same.
Abir's eyes turn big listeining to this, he excitedly said
A-wow Rajkumari Subhadra, aap kitni adventurous hai
Subhadra frowned again, not getting a single thing of what he just said, Abir realized it and said
A-mera matlab ki aap kitni..
But suddenly he stopped realizing that he don't know the hindi word of adventurous, he started opening all the dictionaries present in his mind but not got a single word to explain.
Subhadra was looking at him expectantly, waiting for the answer. When he didn't said anything she herself asked
S-Abir aap kya keh rahe the
Abir cleared his throat and said in a cute kiddish voice
A-kshama karna vo mujhe adventoruos ka hindi shabd nahi pata
Subhadra chuckled hearing his voice and said
S-koi baat nahi
Abir smiled lightly and then excitingly said
A-par aapko pata hai main bhi aap hi ki tarah hu, humesha ghar chodke bhaag jaata tha jab tak meri shaadi nahi hui
Subhadra cleared her throat feeling little embarrassed ,she also said in kiddish voice
S-hum humesha ghar chodkar nahi bhaag jaate
Abir bite his tongue realizing that he made Princess Subhadra embarrassed
A-nahi nahi mera matlab tha ki, Mujhe bhi alag alag logo se milna, alag alag vastuon ke baare mein jaan na accha lagta hai
Subhadra smiled at that, Abir being said in his enthusiastic voice
A-high five
And raised his hand, but Subhadra got scared and took two steps back
S-humne kya kiya, aap humpar haanth kyu uthaa rahe hai
Abir's eyes got big as he realized that she misunderstood his action, he immediately said
A-no no no, I mean Rajkumari Subhadra main aapko maarne nahi waala tha, Main to bas high five ke liye haanth uthaya tha
Subhadra still nervous asked confusingly
S-kiske liye?
Abir realized what he's doing, how come she'll know the meaning of high five
A-high five yaani mera ek haanth aur aapke ek haanth ka upyog karke taali bajana
Subhadra frowned more, thinking why will they do that, such a wierd action
S-kintu kyu
Abir thought for sometimes too searching for any logical reason so he can explain her, but then realized that there is none so just said
A-ab uska kaaran to nahi pata, par Mazaa aata hai, high five
And again raised his hand, Subhadra nervously raised her hand and slowly slapped her hand on his. After doing that she felt funny and chuckled and Abir also laughed a little witnessing her nervous high five
TBC
Precap
Suspense 😉
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Glad you enjoyed 😆
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Originally posted by: MishBirStruck
"Parth, ek kanya ko kisse vivah karna hai iske chayan ka adhikaar bhi usi ka hota hai, subhadra duryodhan se vivah nahi karna chahti, tum dono ek dusre se prem karte ho isliye yahi karna thik hoga" kanha explained arjun, making him understand that by abducting his sister he's not doing any adharma.
Arjun was still not sure because he don't want to raise his weapon against Dwarka which he have to do if he abducts Subhadra. He loves Subhadra but he could never raise weapon against his Madhav, he will of course surrender in front of him which will lead to cancellation of Raj Suya Yagya which is important to make Indraprasth independent.
But he can't let Subhadra marry Duryodhan too, he could never imagine Subhadra with his Evil cousin, her life will be ruined plus if Subhadra gets married to him then also Arjun had to raise weapon against dwarka, as Duryodhan will for sure revolt against Raj Suya Yagya and Narayani Sena with Balraam and Krishna will be on his side.
He was in dilemma and just when he was going to put forth his dilemma in front of Madhav he heard a loud crashing sound.
He got startled and lookef at Krishna who had a mischievous smile on his face, seeing the smile he got to know that something really unbelievable but interesting is going to happen.
He went towards the direction from where the noice came with Krishna and what he saw made his eyes came out of the socket.
He saw a giant thing in front of him, he guessed its made of metal, he was not able to understand what is that thing and for which purpose it is used.
He turned to look at Krishna who was having a bright smile seeing the CAR in front of him.
Arjun realized that Krishna knows about this, just when he was going to ask him he heard a sound of lady.
He turned again and got shocked when he saw the women coming out of that giant thing.
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The car did a crash landing in the lawn of Palace of Dwarka. The four got fainted, abir on steering, mishti on headboard and Kunal and Kuhu on the back seat. No one was visible from the front wind shield.
Kuhu woke up first and was startled seeing the other three. She started seeing here and there and found the whole surrounding alien.
Ku(in mind)- ye kaha aa gaye hum log
She decided to come out of car. Kunal mishti and abir also came in senses that time and got startled seeing the surrounding
M-Abir ye hum kaha hai
But Abir didn't answered as he was also an confused as the other three.
Their eyes came out of socket seeing a man wearing sanyaasi cloth targeting kuhu with his Bow and arrow.
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"Devi aapne ye vichitra se kapde kyu pehne hai"
Kuhu frowned listening this
K-dekhiye Mr Shakuni Mama whatever, first of all mera naam kuhu hai devi nahi and secondly sap mere kapdo pe comment kar rahe hai, khud ke dekhe hai, so bright and gaudy colors, don't have fashion sense at all
Kunal chuckled shaking his head, trust kuhu to make any damn situation funny
Gandhaar Raj Shakuni was looking at them shockingly, not able to decipher what the lady in front of her just said
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A-oh hello Mr meri biwi ko ghurna band kariye, varna mujhse pehle ye aapko maaregi
Duryodhan chuckled and said with mocking tone looking at the Chotu mishti
D-ye...ye humein maarengi
Abir glared at him
A-aapko shayad pata nahi hai but meri biwi ke paas magenta belt hai
Mishti chidded him by slapping his arm and said in hushed voice still glaring at Duryodhan
M-brown belt abir, magenta nahi
Abir whispered back seeing Duryodhan's confused face
A-kya fark padta hai mishti, mujhe nahi lagta inhe magenta ya brown kisi bhi belt ka matlab pata hai
TBC
So what you guys think
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And please it's a pure fiction no offence
It will be a humorous tale of Max 4 shots
Don't worry I will update it after my Rhesha stories
Vaishu, you are so creative yaar.. this is an interesting one
abir and subhadra are rocking...
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just in love with it..
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