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I took pg 100 to myself ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

All comments ek saath ๐Ÿคฃ


๐Ÿ˜’ I will write my comment.



O k

O k

O k

O k

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Hmm where do I start? smiley44

Kitna kuch kehna hai mujhe smiley44

Essay ho jayega smiley44


Ek ek character leke

First

Meneka

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Iske bare mein kehna padega

๐Ÿ˜’

First time I liked her. ๐Ÿ˜’

Bahut zyada. ๐Ÿ˜’

๐Ÿ˜’

Especially choti wali meneka ๐Ÿ˜’

Aww cute meneka ๐Ÿ˜’

Her magically appearing was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her knowing all the staff was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her knowing everything was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her picking up kuki in her arms and cleaning her was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

The way she said she was okay for all and just wanted moments with them was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her being with kuki when she needed the most was nice ๐Ÿ˜’

Her controlling herself was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her baby self was nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Bachpan wala pyaar was also nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her giving kuki chocolate was also nice. ๐Ÿ˜’

Her conversation and taking care of Masi was also nice ๐Ÿ˜’

Best person wohi nikl. ๐Ÿ˜’

๐Ÿ˜Š



Next character

Maasi.

๐Ÿ˜”

Poor maasi ๐Ÿ˜”

Very poor maasi ๐Ÿ˜”

Ek toh age ๐Ÿ˜”

Upar se yea ๐Ÿ˜”

At least she is repenting ๐Ÿ˜”

Her concern ๐Ÿ˜”

Her anxiety ๐Ÿ˜”

If not for meneka pata nahi kaise kuki ko handle karti ๐Ÿ˜”

Beti bhi nahi Adi bhi nahi ๐Ÿ˜”

Her love for her nephew ๐Ÿ˜”

The way she cared for him ๐Ÿ˜”

The way she cared for Kuki ๐Ÿ˜”

She stopped Meneka ๐Ÿ˜”

Nahi karna chahiye tha ๐Ÿ˜”

Her getting angry at prerna ๐Ÿ˜”

Bechari maasi ๐Ÿ˜”

Her after knowing the truth ๐Ÿ˜”

๐Ÿ˜Š


Next

Kaun ayega smiley37


Okay next Kuki

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My baby kuki ๐Ÿ˜ญ

My poor poor poor baby kuki ๐Ÿ˜ญ

My little baby kuki ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She didn't want to leave daddy ๐Ÿ˜ญ

My baby ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Me cries buckets ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her turmoil and pain no one understands ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Sab apne apne se concerned hai kisi ko uska trauma nahi dikhta ๐Ÿ˜ญ

This update belonged to her only ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her frustrations her turmoil her trauma to reach her dad ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She had to see him that way ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Why God ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She wet herself on top of it ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Poor poor poor baby ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her reaction to everyone else ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She recognised her biological mom unconsciously ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She wanted prerna ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her meeting her papa ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her wanting to be with him ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her hug and kisses to him ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her words of prayers to him ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her wanting her dad only ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her requests to Prerna ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Mere dad ke bhi dost bano na ap ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Her anxiety ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Aise toh usko PTSD na ho jaye ๐Ÿ˜ญ itna trauma hai uski zindagi mein ๐Ÿ˜ญ

But she was a brave child ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Very brave child ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Next kaun ayega smiley44

Prerna

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Yea aurat smiley44

smiley44

Iska baby steps bhi itna slow hai smiley44

Nidhi ke saath smiley44

Khud ka turmoil smiley44

I don't know but she is learning hopefully smiley44

That Ba had her smiley44

At least she decided and was firm she wasn't going to leave Kuki ever smiley44

๐Ÿ˜Š


Next kaun ayega.

Rastogi uncle ๐Ÿคจ

Yea uncle kitne purane hai ๐Ÿคจ

I really wanna know. ๐Ÿคจ

But it's good that he prioritised Bajju and family over everyone ๐Ÿคจ

He knows a lot about Bajju ka family and life ๐Ÿคจ

I like him a lot ๐Ÿคจ

Very much infact ๐Ÿคจ

More than Mehra infact ๐Ÿคจ

Bajju is in safe hands because he is there or else kya hota ๐Ÿคจ

Also a little mention on how he always takes extra care of Bajju . Very cute ๐Ÿคจ

๐Ÿ˜Š


Ab baki kaun

Rani ๐Ÿ˜…

Mommy Bajju makes an entry ๐Ÿ˜…

Mommu bajju gives me Dilshaad vibes ๐Ÿ˜…

How cute mommy bajju ๐Ÿ˜…

I love her already ๐Ÿ˜…

๐Ÿ˜Š


And now the one I had been delaying for ๐Ÿฅบ

Bajju ๐Ÿฅบ

My poor poor poor bajju ๐Ÿฅบ

Poor bajju is in so much of pain ๐Ÿฅบ

He wasn't even able to breathe ๐Ÿฅบ

Him not leaving kuki ๐Ÿฅบ

Him assuring her in that state ๐Ÿฅบ

Him not responding ๐Ÿฅบ

Him vomiting so much of blood again ๐Ÿฅบ

He is in such a terrible state ๐Ÿฅบ

It hurts to see him this way ๐Ÿฅบ

So much of pain he is in ๐Ÿฅบ

Baby bajju ๐Ÿฅบ

How much he loved his mom ๐Ÿฅบ

So much of pain he used to take in for her ๐Ÿฅบ

Him saving his mom since first ๐Ÿฅบ

His first love M ๐Ÿฅบ

His nightmare ๐Ÿฅบ

He saw his mom who relaxed him ๐Ÿฅบ

Poor poor baby boy ๐Ÿฅบ

Rona aaraha hai uske liye ๐Ÿฅบ

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For you ๐Ÿ˜˜

You ๐Ÿ˜˜

Who will say you are not a writer ๐Ÿ˜˜

Who like who ๐Ÿ˜˜

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How nicely you wrote the turmoil ๐Ÿ˜˜

In such easy words ๐Ÿ˜˜

๐Ÿ˜˜

A big round of applause for incorporating Die Basu episode + past in such a beautiful way ๐Ÿ˜˜

The way you connected everything ๐Ÿ˜˜

Prerna slowly taking up Ara's place. ๐Ÿ˜˜

The way everything is connected ๐Ÿ˜˜

The way you don't need a villain to mess it up all and the Concord discord so beautifully done๐Ÿ˜˜

I am so proud of you ๐Ÿ˜˜

๐Ÿ˜Š

Take this as my comment too pls.๐Ÿ˜› Ankie I'm churaoing ur comments ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

My poor baccha Kukki n Daddy suffering so much ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I so want Prerna to declare herself as Mrs. Bajju n take charge but nhi jb duniya lut jayegi tab jaagegi madam. Itni slow kyu ho Mrs.Bajju aap??

U have a competition n possibly a tough one. Jaag jao before it's too late๐Ÿ˜ก

Meenakshi U r a fabulous writer my friend.๐Ÿค—

Waiting for the next one ๐Ÿค—

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Take this as my comment too pls.๐Ÿ˜› Ankie I'm churaoing ur comments ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

My poor baccha Kukki n Daddy suffering so much ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I so want Prerna to declare herself as Mrs. Bajju n take charge but nhi jb duniya lut jayegi tab jaagegi madam. Itni slow kyu ho Mrs.Bajju aap??

U have a competition n possibly a tough one. Jaag jao before it's too late๐Ÿ˜ก

Meenakshi U r a fabulous writer my friend.๐Ÿค—

Waiting for the next one ๐Ÿค—

๐Ÿ˜ churao ramya deedi ka comment ๐Ÿ˜

Btw my advice to Prerna is same same same.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

๐Ÿ˜ churao ramya deedi ka comment ๐Ÿ˜

Btw my advice to Prerna is same same same.

That's an update in itself๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
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Posted: 5 years ago

God I was so tensed reading this update... Thank god Bajaj was stable in the end...

Whatever said and done... I just cannot seem to warm up to Menaka... even though she means well and has not done or said anything in the adverse so far... still...

And this Prerna seems to possess the slowest processor ๐Ÿ™„ how does she not figure out what Bajaj means to her... why any thing related to him makes her go hyper!

Kuki the girl is adorable and the most sane and consistent character... I want to hug her and protect her...


I hope the next update comes faster ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved this part.but menaka n prerna ek saath๐Ÿค”.masi also doubt prerna is d reason for his sudden illness.loved d way u wrote abt kukki's luv for her dad.little girl loved him very much.don't make menaka prior in kukki's life.let her always be prerna's angel,plzz.as always waiting for d nxt.make it fast dear๐Ÿคฉ

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I was supposed to clean my art stuff but I re read the update again ๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Woahhhhh!!!!! ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•


First of all, Hey! How are you doing?!


The update was fabulous. Loved each line of it. Everyone's concern for Rishabh was beautifully presented. Maasi, Chandu, Kukki, Menaka, Nidhi, Rastogi Uncle, Prerna -just everyone. I loved each and every scene of Menaka and Kukki. As told before, one of my most favourite characters of your story is Menaka. I love her even more than Prerna.


Kukki was so scared. It was heart-wrenching to even imagine what she must be going through. She's just a little child afterall. It was only yesterday that Rishabh promised her that he wouldn't leave her and today she has to face this. She's almost sure that even he'll leave her until Menaka makes her understand that he'll be fine.


Kukki warming up to Menaka was so overwhelming. Maasi and Menaka's little conversation was great. Maasi found a great support in her. It was becoming too much to handle considering her age.


Rastogi uncle was fab too. He's just a family member to all of them. I also liked the way he was equally concerned for Kukki.


Chandu's one line to Menaka showed hiw mich he still respects her. Also shows how Menaka still remembers each of the staff members.


Prerna sometimes annoys me too much just like the show. It's although great to see her finally taking decisions that she's not going to regret in the future. Her conversation with Nidhi was awesome. Nidhi is just too loyal to her boss and wouldn't budge. Loved how she silenced Prerna. Also great to see that Prerna was genuinely concerned for Rishabh this time rather than being jealous of Menaka's presence in the hospital.


The flashback scene was brilliant! Rishabh as a child has endured too much pain on life. Don't give him more. I somehow feel that "M" was Menaka. Would want to see more flashbacks.


No more pains to Rishabh please!! Update soon. Waiting!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine


hey love that you take the time out to go through the and comment on my comments, very appreciated plus it's nice to know someone else feels or thinks similar to me. looking forward to all what's coming, will be very interesting.

I love alllll the comments as they are like little treasure for me honestly. Idea mines I can say. A gateway to know if things are working or not.. so deserve all the attention ๐Ÿค—Same here we are kind of on the same track.๐Ÿ˜Š

Regarding RB, I'm glad your looking back for inspiration & that your story has nothing to do with the current track. A little relief else I would have been so confused that RB will not change & stay KSG's version forever.... hyyyyy thinking about that wasted potential is ๐Ÿฅบ..i totally agree.. sheer waste.. oh well there is your story to look forward to ๐Ÿฅณ.stories are there but watching RB om screen alag hi tha. I am sad now that original RB will never get a closure.. ๐Ÿ˜’

i love making the comments as well hun, it's like having nice little conversations. i know what you mean, setting him on-screen was just & the RB closure thing is such a damn shame ๐Ÿฅบ.

the reboot could have been so much but instead it's like a balloon without air. the only reason it's still on-screen is because of the fanbase of the leads. it's such a shame when the story fizzles down to a couple & no story. it's not hard to make a good story based program, if they need inspiration all they have to do is stalk this forum lol. (here i go again ๐Ÿ˜†)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved it amazing update

The turmoil of kuki was wonderfully written

Hope he gets fine soon and prerna and Rishab gets together.

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