SERIAL WRITING (PARTICIPANTS PEEP IN PG. 1) UPDATED STORY🎬 - Page 28

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

I rushed to Garden area only to ease myself and in search of Ragini...

But there I could Yudhishthirji's brother yelling up in the Place... I approaced to inquire his pain...


There I could find Yudhishthirji too approaching there.... And I had no option to move myself away as I cannot left someone in pain...


Kya huwa aapko? Aap theek toh hai...? I asked in low husky voice...

I couldn't say anything. My foot was hurting badly. Too bad. I swear I will punish her severely for injuring me. My vision started to blur.

I felt dizzy.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

I couldn't say anything. My foot was hurting badly. Too bad. I swear I will punish her severely for injuring me. My vision started to blur.

I felt dizzy.


I went by his side, pretending like I didn’t know what happened. I asked Sapna if she knew anything and she nodded in a no.


I felt so relieved.


Now I just have to make sure that this langoor doesn’t remember anything

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

I couldn't say anything. My foot was hurting badly. Too bad. I swear I will punish her severely for injuring me. My vision started to blur.

I felt dizzy.

Arey...kya huwa aapko? I got really scared? I started to yell loudly calling out for help.... Koi hai yahan pe...??? I screamed high forgetting about everything...
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Arey...kya huwa aapko? I got really scared? I started to yell loudly calling out for help.... Koi hai yahan pe...??? I screamed high forgetting about everything...


I noticed that his leg seemed to fall by itself like it had not strength to hold it l.


Did I fracture his leg? Shit shit shit


I left that place and called Yudi and his mom there, telling them about the Siddharth.


They looked at me wide eyed and hurried towards the garden

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

I couldn't say anything. My foot was hurting badly. Too bad. I swear I will punish her severely for injuring me. My vision started to blur.

I felt dizzy.

Awaaz sunke mai v bahar aa gayi. Aur ake dekha SSR ko dard se karahte huye. I was shocked acha bhala tha abhi, achanak kya ho gya? Aur yaha aspas koi chij v nhi dikh rahi. Achanak najar Ragini pe padi to dekha wo kuch ghabrayi si dikh rahi. Mujhe laga kya gdbd ki ab isne. Mujhe jitna gussa aa raha tha Ragini pe usse jyada SSR ke liye taklif ho rahi thi. Abhi tak jitna maine SSR ko dekha he is little child aur jb kisi bachche ko chot lage to dard sabhi ko hota hai. Maine YSR se kaha ap doctor ko bulaiye mai aur Sapna SSR ki madad karte hai.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Iamth

Awaaz sunke mai v bahar aa gayi. Aur ake dekha SSR ko dard se karahte huye. I was shocked acha bhala tha abhi, achanak kya ho gya? Aur yaha aspas koi chij v nhi dikh rahi. Achanak najar Ragini pe padi to dekha wo kuch ghabrayi si dikh rahi. Mujhe laga kya gdbd ki ab isne. Mujhe jitna gussa aa raha tha Ragini pe usse jyada SSR ke liye taklif ho rahi thi. Abhi tak jitna maine SSR ko dekha he is little child aur jb kisi bachche ko chot lage to dard sabhi ko hota hai. Maine YSR se kaha ap doctor ko bulaiye mai aur Sapna SSR ki madad karte hai.


From the corner of my eyes, I noticed Naina looking suspiciously at me. I composed my self and tried to act like I was not involved in this at all.


Aaaggggghhhb


This siddharth had to faint now. Stupid.


Ab mera kya hoga

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Posted: 5 years ago

With the changes in emotions on one side and evil trap entrapping other side, where will this changes lead to... ??? To know, stay tuned.


End of Episode 5....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Precap for Episode 6 :

  • Sapna's and Naina's acts of Wisdom.
  • Ragini's envious plot against Sapna
  • Yudhishthir starts noticing evil acts
  • Siddhart's Master Plan to expose Ragini
  • Siddhart tries to interact with her would be bhabhi so as to ensure the right choice for his brother.
  • Yudhishthir's first informal interaction with her would be wife.
  • Brothers cute interaction with fulfilled and hearty conversation.
  • Mother's haste to know their children emotions..


End of Maha Episode 6....

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Here you go today's Maha episode 6 @ 9pm..



THREAD CLOSED..

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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We were now in Siddharth’s room. The doctor had come and was checking siddharth.


My heart was beating so loud. What the heck? What am I supposed to do now? First of all, this dude will definitely punish me and second of all, I will have to leave this house.


But I haven’t even talked to Yudi yet. Maybe I had a chance with him.


Oh how much I hate this bandar. Weak man. Ek heels bhi handle nahin kar pata.

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