FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 57

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Sara abhi ro loge to 34 wale ke liye aansoo kaha se ayenge?

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Thoda tears bachakw rakho

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Ohh I again miss my laptop. Can't post GIFs 😭

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Sara abhi ro loge to 34 wale ke liye aansoo kaha se ayenge?

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Hello hello.. thank you again for surviving a super long update.. though you like longer ones 🤗

wow that was some . loved the entire flashback portion & P's interaction with Shivi. her thought process whilst reflecting the past & then analysing it was brilliant. Yeyyyy.. i am reaady for a hoola dance. I was worried if this would make sense or not as i sat on that part for 3 days. I am so happy and relieved 💃 I'm soo glad you did this, retrospect is so important for any character as it gives us a chance to really relate to their thought process, emotions & connect with them. Reading this makes me feel happy . Very happpy. Not just that but courage to go a little crazy too without worrying if readers will connext. I think a bridge has been built and now we can read each other a lot more better, isliye you connect with the angle that I have in mind while writing 😘KZK's Prerna was unfortunately never given this chance making her unlikable & hard to connect with. I agree on this unconditionally. Not just RB related things; she was never given a closure for anything at all. hence i wasn't a hard-core PreRish supporter, that's why I'm glad you did, i feel you've redeemed her in my eyes making her likeable & a possibly deserving match for RB. still a while to go yet. You said this basss I am on 7th sky now. I have the same sentiments as yours as far PreRish are concerned. I did not see S1 but this season it was so incomplete. I was a stage where I would have beem happy if Prerna went back to.Anurag and makers had just shown Bajaj ka story. But prerna ne wo bhi nahi kiya rather it all became a tennis match instead😒

Still holding out on who i want with RB simply because we don't have all the pieces of the jigsaw yet. Hold on for sometime. I hope future track.makes sense. 😊

loved all the other interactions as well & it was brilliant to see Mr Bajaj at work thank.you much. I dunno why but I like writing him in businessman mode. Guess that's what was so amazing about him other than his bond with Kukki... 💔 to see Kukki's reaction big that's to be expected. It was needed to bring a change in Prerna and RB too as he has always kept everything on priority then himself. Also he now know to what level fear has made a house im Kukki's mind. so that plays a bit of role im next update ka confessiom wala part. you ended on a cliffhanger.... naughty you 😉i know. But I wanted to focus om revelation wala part next update without any break isliye stopped here. Next mein it's events leading for him to know the truth.. I'm sure P will make an outburst of her emotions, she tends to bottle up then explode at possibly... not the best of times. these kind of interactions between her & RB make me nervous, i know what to expect from her. so kudos for writing her so well (&consistent) that i can almost predict what she'll do. can't wait for the revelations and the reactions. I will let the next update speak for itself. I just hope Prerna surprises you a little.. bas itna thoda sa hi sahi

p.s take care x

You too.. lots of love🤗

hey thanks for analysing my comments analysing the chapter... what a mouthful . i agree with everything you're saying, theirs been no decent storyline for anyone & everyone (except mohini) have been written so inconsistently. They have shafted P's character soo badly this season, in a time where were used to strong female characters she's been such a dissapointment. don't even get me started on what they did with RB 😔 such a waste of a golden opportunity to make KZK great. The whole reboot had been a MISTAKE of epic proportions. At least i can look forward to your fic, can't wait for the next chapters. 😃

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😔 tab karan wala rotlu post karenge

Ohhh...fir theek hai... bacha ke rakho

Originally posted by: oa2019

hey thanks for analysing my comments analysing the chapter... what a mouthful .

I got carried away I guess 😆 My problem.. once I start I can't stop 🤣

i agree with everything you're saying, theirs been no decent storyline for anyone & everyone (except mohini) have been written so inconsistently. They have shafted P's character soo badly this season, in a time where were used to strong female characters she's been such a dissapointment.

Every word is nothing but TRUTH. Prerna was a huge disappointment. Huge lessons for what not to do. I am saying that they should have made her look like 'I know it all' wala FL jo sab khud karte hain. But she was written then that. I should shut up nahi to fir se I'd get detached with her and story mein reflect hoega.😆 it's hard writing her 😒

don't even get me started on what they did with RB 😔 such a waste of a golden opportunity to make KZK great. The whole reboot had been a MISTAKE of epic proportions.

I agree..''waste of golden opportunity" theFACT. it's like 3 idiots wala dialogue. Sab kuch ready tha.. gadi gate par khadi thi? Bas ek baar himmat kar li hoti (cvs) ne to life ( KZK) kucj aur hoti.. 💔

At least i can look forward to your fic, can't wait for the next chapters. 😃

Working on it...🤗

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Well first things first - I am sorry but I dint understand what Shivani was trying to say. I really did not. I read it so many time but the result was still the same what was she trying to say. Was she trying to get prerna to understand she was jealous of Menaka or she was just trying to say that she was not.😒

I hope this got a clarity. Glad you shared yout query and hopfully I was able to answer 🤗

Moving on to the better part -

1) Loved the beach scene between Risabh and Prerna. It was a different feeling altogether as if you can feel the calm between them. I had read it so many times but I still feel the same. There awkward but not to awkward conversation was a treat.

I am sòooo happy to hear it. At times I begin looking at scenes in different light after reading comments. Yeah they are hesitant and awkward, but they have come a long way and usse bhi zyada aur cover karna hai

2) For the first time I loved maasi,I know Prerna had said it many times that she feels bad for what she did to Kukki but the way that maasi placed it downright and truthfully was brilliant. Prerna needed to hear that she really did.

Masi is going to get a few more chances in next to next update omwards. Masi has seen Kukki in a mess, Rishabh is going to have his own breakdown putting Masi in a tough spot as she is all by herself right now. She will turn a few tables and chairs post revelation. She will see her family in worst possible situation and do what she feels is right. Thay may not be im Prerna's favour directly but indirectly it will be. :)

3) I am loving that now how Prerna is getting intimidated by Mr Bajaj when she had literally lived with him for so many days and still she didn't know what a force he is to reckon with.

She lived with Bajaj aur wo bhi Basu Badi. Sab uske hisab se chalta tha and she never valued that. She kept on hurtinh people sply those who respected her. Ab wo uske zone mein hai. She is guilty and it's her own realisation. Koi aake usko kuch bola nahi hai. So she is hesiyant and reluctant. He is no more.listening to her like he did back then. She has to work to get what she wants.

4) Rishab and Aditya scene was nice, its fun to watch fun and manipulative Rishab sometimes

Thank you. Yes manipulative he is and he is goof at it 😎

5) For the first time in my life I was angry at both Prerna and Rishab for what they have done to that little girl knowingly and unknowingly.

I agree what elders did impacted a child in the worst manner. So both are responsible, can't blame only one.

6) Also the flashback scene and the light scene with Dr Rastogi was brilliant.

Glad you liked it Rastogi is the doorway to his Mom's and his childhood.

7) Prerna is thinking way too much and doing a bit less but at least she is realizing her mistakes and getting a clear mind.

She is thinking a lottt... and she will be in this mode for somemore time till it gets unbearable for to stay put. And she does what she needs to do.

Can't wait for the next update as we will finally get the much awaited confrontation scene. How will Rishab react I just cannot wait to read.

Ohh that makes me a bit nervous now. I will try my best and let you guys be the judge of it like always 😊

Originally posted by: MR21

Hailaaa.. this is an OS itself. And am I complaining about it? I am not that stupid, am I 😎

Thank you so muxh Ramya for reading and sharing your thoughts with me 🤗

Shivi, for the first time I appreciate your love for Anurag. Her point of showing how much Prerna did for Anurag being Mrs. Bajaj showed a mirror for Prerna now.

Shivi, aise kaam future mein karte raho bacha..see how much you are getting 😃 Apne Anurag knowledge ka aise hi prayog karte raho.. prerma ko Bajaj ki taraf push karte raho 🤭

Shivi talked about jealousy too saying she is the Komo in Bajaj & Menaka's life😃😆

Shivi jo.kehti hai sach kehti hai. Saxh ke siwa kuch nhi kehti hai 😛

And she asked a perfect question, whether Bajaj felt/said anything to her when she always used to be with Anurag👍🏼

Aur kya. She had a free ticket to everything and now she had prob with Menaka because she cared for him

Fine, she started again her unless comments on Bajaj being heartless, but I am ignoring it just like Prerna. As she made sure Prerna realizes what she did in the past, which she never would have realized on her own.

Prerna knows behas ka koi fayda nahi hai. 😊 her thoughts on Bajaj won't change so easily.

So, finally, the realization of all the wrongs she did in her blind love of Anurag on Bajaj & Kukki.

Yessss. Bhuat episodes dekhe by God sara kuch wapas yaad karne ke.liye. haye haye main to thak gayi

Kukki all restless as her father is still sleeping and she couldn't talk to him😒

Ek to papa ghar hai upar se she can't talk because he won't get up.

My heart melts when Kukki does something like this, sitting beside him, and then sleep looking at him🥺

Awww...same feelings.. ❤️

The FB of Rishabh, Menaka, & Kukki is so sweet. Such a beautiful bind between Rishabh & Kukki❤️

They have been connected for a loooonggg time, even before she was born.glad it showed what I wanted to portray through this

Does Reddy's have any role in the past of Ara/Adi?

No..just family connections.

Mr. Negotiator😎

Mr. Planner😛

Yes yes.😊

Prerna thinking about her double standards👍🏼

Didn't she have double standards. Koi aur kare to saza milna chahie bur Anurag ne kiya to 'wo dil kr bure nahi hai'🥺

She started to relate Komo as her father's murderer too.

Yeah it was alwsys a mystery for me. Sonalika ka pata chalne ke baad bhi wo bas Anurag ka sochti thi. Baba ka to koi zikra bhi nahi.. collateral damage ban gaye baba

Bajaj & Dr. Rastogi's convo, he used to hide his pain from childhood💔

He did.. 'Mission- Rishabh did it again' se connect hoga.😊 his mom and dad.

What happened in the past that he almost lost his life twice😲

He did .. will disclose.. one incident abhi next 2-3 updates mein second wala a bit later :)

Prerna started to read him and his behavior, while one look is enough for him to know that she is not fine.

Ab to karna padega. Fast learner to hai. Jaldi se seekh jati jai bas ek reality check ki zaroorat hoti hai ..

OMG!! Mr. Rishabh Bajaj in his mode in the meeting😎😈

He was back being Bajaj.

Prerna saw his this version for the first time and she is so damn impressed.

She was indeed and she also gets an idea how he is always projected so wrong by world outside.. aage wale.updates mein ye bhi 😛

Her lie is caught🤣

Wo kaisa nahi pakadta . But she made him blv that she did a good job because then her job was to keep an eye on him. Which she did. Bajaj acknowleged too with a smile.

Kukki deserves to have both mother & father love. And the fear of losing her father just like he lost his mother is so much that she kept all her fear inside her until she met him😭😭😭

She deserves all the happiness in the world. She loves everyone.but they leave. She can't let go of her father.

DAMN!! This is so so emotional. Kukki brought all his medicines with her. Her need you🥺

She is the sweetest daughter Bajaj could ever ask her for. His mother worked hard leading to her death and she saw something similar happening with him so she couln't bear it.

Her fear of losing all her loved ones is so great. He is the constant in her life and she doesn't want anyone apart from him😭🥺

So true he is the only constant and she can't lose him. Only the thought triggered such fear in her.

Maasi👌, she so perfectly showed Prerna why Kukki is so worried that she would lose her father. I LOVED what Maasi said to Prerna.

Yeyy masi.. she will get more such chances soon.

Kukki needs many more reassurances from her father to let go of her fear💔

She did. She needed to hear it to believe it.

Prerna saved him from Kukki's questions and his pain from his past.

Prerna.will fill in the gaps that his life has.

They had a really good talk. She said about their hit-and-miss meets the last time she was here and also her appreciation for him in the meeting.

Baar shuru ho gaya.. ab badega hi band nahi.hoga.. hua to Prerna will find her way.

Finally!! he will get to know her past. I was waiting for this from some updates.

Next update is all.about that.

But you had to stop it at that point🤔

Because I thought without break hoga sab isliye..

Fine!! But next chapter her past should be out completely without any secrets from her side now & without any disturbances from anyone, well except Kukki.

I assure when she tells him.. it's just them not even Kukki. So no disturbances, not even phones.

But this update is special because I am happy about Shivi for the first time for what she did.

Hahaaa..I will convey this to Shivi with a pat on her back 😃

And finally Kukki, she made me so damn emotional, I still can't get over it.

Hug for.you. kukki is yet to see the worst.. is all I have to say for now.. 😃

Awesome update Meenakshi, continue soon.

Thank.you for this. Loved it 🤗

Wow reaallyyy nice update 👌👍🔥

Bekaar me u were thinking so much...

Though the update was long but you left it at cliff hanger 😂😂 ... I like it.. now I am waiting for next one...

Prerna and shivi conversation actually opened prerna's eyes ... Finally.. I hope she realizes that she loves bajaj too not just kuki.

Again masi and prerna conversation was also a reality check for prerna. .. Is prerna going to tell everything about her to bajaj?

I wish she tells him everything 😂😂😂.

Waiting to see bajaj' s reaction on prerna's revelation .. I m excited for next update...🤗🤗👏👏👏👏