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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Yaar aisa lagraha hai cliff hanger pe chod diya ho

Is this ended or u ll continue???

Wish we have a happy ending for ariya

That poor soul doesn't deserve a life like this

Her father just used her all the way for his betterment only

For world riya is a traitor n roshini is also alive great

Glad she killed sikky at least

In the end, arjun is really there??? Gun was pressed by whom???

Nice story

Plz cont soon


Gun is pressed by terrorist/someone from Sik side. Guess I was not clear enough, sorry about it.


It won't be continuing, the cliffhanger to let the readers imagine what they want. Riya might be saved, or she might find solace in death.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Mind-blowing...no words cn describe it...wot a OS...u got amazing writing skills..hats off..šŸ‘šŸ˜„..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

This Story made me breathless,I didn't know someone could write this beautiful conveying each emotions to the point.When started reading I thought this is going to be normal love story or something thriller to spice it up but it turned out to be a masterpiece.šŸ‘

My heart wrenched for that poor girl ,I didn't know that was Lavanya or Riya but a woman all her life stood for someone happiness wasting her whole life.😢

If you have planning to continue this ,plz do write and atleast give that poor girl a happy ending life.

This story is going to linger in my mind little longer than I expected or maybe forever.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Rii take a bow my girl...this is so good...like I don't even know what to say...all her life she was used by her father so that he can prove himself...and it was only in ETF did she start getting to know what she wants for herself...and setting rosh free with Arjun... even though a teeny tiny part of her wanted arjun to chose her...but she knew the reality..and my god the end...she finally got the freedom that she always wanted even though it was in form of her death...

I just loved loved the story... it's beautiful šŸ’•

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Anchal91

Mind-blowing...no words cn describe it...wot a OS...u got amazing writing skills..hats off..šŸ‘šŸ˜„..

Thank you so much, glad you liked it!
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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: everestlove

This Story made me breathless,I didn't know someone could write this beautiful conveying each emotions to the point.When started reading I thought this is going to be normal love story or something thriller to spice it up but it turned out to be a masterpiece.šŸ‘

My heart wrenched for that poor girl ,I didn't know that was Lavanya or Riya but a woman all her life stood for someone happiness wasting her whole life.😢

If you have planning to continue this ,plz do write and atleast give that poor girl a happy ending life.

This story is going to linger in my mind little longer than I expected or maybe forever.


This idea made me breathless too šŸ˜† Came suddenly out of nowhere and I just had to write it down. It's like those rush I had when I was first into this Fandom and was running 5 stories parallelšŸ˜†


Her life was tragic with very limited choice, the consolation was at least she could take some decision which was entirely hers and had solace in them. It was going to be tragic/open ended story, you can chose the ending you feel like. Either she survived like how Irene Adler survived in BBC sherlock or she did not.


@ bold- that's probably what every writer aspires to be. Thank you so much, and please know your story does the same to me. I and Bitterbrry talks about your story so much and always read whenever we get the notification.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Rii take a bow my girl...this is so good...like I don't even know what to say...all her life she was used by her father so that he can prove himself...and it was only in ETF did she start getting to know what she wants for herself...and setting rosh free with Arjun... even though a teeny tiny part of her wanted arjun to chose her...but she knew the reality..and my god the end...she finally got the freedom that she always wanted even though it was in form of her death...

I just loved loved the story... it's beautiful šŸ’•


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Thank you. Your comment meant a lot, and I am surprised you got this even if I did not tell you about this.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil


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Thank you. Your comment meant a lot, and I am surprised you got this even if I did not tell you about this.


šŸ˜…šŸ˜…I try n keep tab on your stories but then real life hits and other things take a pause... So sorry for that...but rii seriously, you are a terrific writer and I love reading your stories šŸ’• keep writing more stuff and I will try and stalk you more *wink* *wink*

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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil


This idea made me breathless too šŸ˜† Came suddenly out of nowhere and I just had to write it down. It's like those rush I had when I was first into this Fandom and was running 5 stories parallelšŸ˜†


Her life was tragic with very limited choice, the consolation was at least she could take some decision which was entirely hers and had solace in them. It was going to be tragic/open ended story, you can chose the ending you feel like. Either she survived like how Irene Adler survived in BBC sherlock or she did not.


@ bold- that's probably what every writer aspires to be. Thank you so much, and please know your story does the same to me. I and Bitterbrry talks about your story so much and always read whenever we get the notification.


Haha,I guess everyone must have gone through that phase where reading all the stories in IF.šŸ˜‚

I kinda of accpeted her fate or may be I'm happy that finally she found peace in death.Whatever it is she is better off without that life.Now My mind started to roam around that woman and her choices again.šŸ’”

About the last comments I'm very happy you guys liked my story.Thank you so much and this meant a lot.

you and Bitterberry is sistergoals in IF.😃 I really love your bond.ā¤ļø

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil


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Thank you. Your comment meant a lot, and I am surprised you got this even if I did not tell you about this.

Why are you surprised of her stalking skills 🤪

This woman stalks šŸ¤“

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