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Hi I am updating today.
Hello everyone. 🤗
So finally I am back with part 5 of my story. I know I have kept you all waiting for so long. I was trying to write it for so long and its the longest I have taken to write something.
I know you all will think this is so chhotu update but here , I have divided this part into two sub parts A and B as I don’t want all of you to keep on waiting until I write the other half.
I need to watch some old episodes to refresh my memory and some inspiration but couldn’t find any time doing so. ( I hope I can do this on next weekend n finish writing as well )
Happy reading..
Part 5-A:
Kalyani returns to AN with Moksh and Malhar. Anupriya sees them. And she is so happy on the return of her beloved daughter.
Anupriya - Kalyani..
Kalyani- Aai.
And Kalyani goes towards Anupriya and hugs her.
Anupriya - Kalyani tum thik to ho naah?
Kalyani - Haan aai main bilkul thik hoon.
Malhar was happy on seeing mother and daughter re-union.
While Kalyani and Anupriya were talking Aao Saheb entered in the verendah and sat on her swing.
AS - Kalyani kahaan thi tum? Aur thik toh ho naah?
Kalyani - Ji aao saheb main thik hoon.. woh main woh main Pune apne puraane ghar par thi.
AS - Pune?? Woh bhi akele?? Kalyani tumhe zara sa bhi andaaza hai ki tumhe kuch ho jaata toh Anupriya, Moksh aur Malhar ka kya hota? Tum kisi musibat mein bhi phans sakti thi.
Kalyani - Sorry Aao Saheb.. main ab kabhi aisa nahi karungi. Woh bas mujhe thoda gussa aa gaya tha aur bura bhi laga tha.
( in her mind ) - Musibat ? Huh .. saari musibat ki jad Malhar ji hai. Galti kare Malhar ji aur daant mujhe pad rahi hai. Gusse par kya sirf unka copyright hai kya? Mujhe bhi aata hai gussa. Aap ko itni aasani se maaf nahi karne wali main Malhar ji. You have to pay for this.
Breakin her chain of thoughts Aao Saheb told her in stern voice.
AS - Bewakoof ladki itni si baat ke liye koi aise bina bataaye ghar chhod kar chale jaata hai kya?? Tumhe pata hai hum sab ka kya haal tha?? Arey apne baare mein nahi toh Moksh, Anupriya aur Malhar ke baare mein toh sochti.
Kalyani - Sorry Aao Saheb.
AS - Tumhare sorry se kya sab khatam ho jaayega? Anupriya ne ro ro kar apna kya haal banaya tha pata hai tumhe? Aur Moksh tum jaanti ho ki woh tumhare bagair nahi rehta, kitna roya hai woh baccha pata hai tumhe? Malhar ne tumhe gusse mein kuch kaha toh humse aa kar baat karti . Hum samjhate use.
Kalyani (in her mouth) - Kaise samjhati aap jab ki atom bomb already phat chuka tha toh aapke upar bhi phatata..
AS - Kalyani tum sunn rahi ho ya nahi ki hum kya keh rahe hai ?? Kuch samajh bhi rahi ho ya nahi?
Kalyani - Ji, Aao Saheb. Next time aisa kuch nahi hoga.
Malhar (intervenes)- Aao Saheb isme saari galti meri thi aap Kalyani ko mat daantiye..
Kalyani (in her mind) - Haan, haan ab toh aap acchhe banenge, yahaan sab ke laadle ban gaye ho naah. Bade aaye mahaan banne. Abhi bade sayaane bann rahe hai, sayaane nahi malhar ji aap toh shaane nikle.. Jab gussa aata hai aapko tab aap ko kuch nahi dikhaayi deta. Galti aap ki phir bhi mujhe sunna pad raha hai.
AS - Anupriya is ladki ko samjhao ise pata bhi hai ki baahar zamaana kitna kharab hai ek ladki ke liye? Iski chinta mein hum sab ka mann kitna ghabra gaya tha ki agar iske saath kuch bhi bura bhala ho jaata toh kya hota? Yeh to bappa ki kripa se kuch nahi hua par phir bhi.
Anupriya - Ji, Aao Saheb.
AS - Aur Kalyani bappa ka dhanyawad karo ki tumhe Malhar jaisa jeevansathi mila hai. Agar koi aur hota toh tumhari inn sab harkaton ki wajah se tumhe kab ka ghar se nikaal deta.
Kalyani (in her mind) - Haan , haan bas saari galti meri hai .. Malhar ji ki toh zara bhi galti nahi hai iss sab mein. Aap sab milkar Malhar ji ki aarti kyun nahi utaarte.
AS - Kalyani hum tumse baat kar rahe hai. Tum sunn bhi rahi ho hum kya baat kar rahe hai?
Meanwhile Malhar’s uncle Saarthak who was standing there and listening all this intervenes. He understood that Kalyani doesn’t like the scolding by Aao Saheb because it was Malhar who was at fault not Kalyani.
Saarthak - Kalyani , Aao Saheb bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Beta tum thik toh ho naah?
Kalyani likes Saarthak as he is the only one after her aai who understands her.
She likes the way how he changed the topic.
Kalyani - Ji kaka, main thik hoon.
While they were done talking aao saheb turns to Malhar.
AS - Aur Malhar tum bhi sunn lo aaiinda se apne gusse par tum kaabu rakhoge. Aur koi bhi paristhithi (situation) ho pehle tum unhe samjhne ki koshish karoge yun bina koi baat Kalyani par toh kya kisi par bhi gussa nahi karoge. Aur haan ek aur baat tum saamne wale ka paksh bhi sunoge aur uske baad hi faisala loge.
Malhar - Ji Aao Saheb.
Saarthak (glaring at Malhar)- Bilkul sahi keh rahi hai aap aao saheb. Malhar, aao saheb ki baat tum dhyaan mein rakhna..
Malhar - Ji kaka main dhyaan mein rakhunga.
Saarthak understood that if Kalyani would stay there any longer then Aao Saheb will get angry on her n that would make Kalyani more agitated.
Saarthak - Acchha Kalyani beta tum thak gayi hogi ab tum jaa kar aaram karo aur Moksh ko bhi apne saath le kar jaao.
Kalyani - Ji kaka.
Anupriya too liked that how Saarthak has handled the situation.
Anupriya - Haan Kalyani jaao tum kamre mein jaa kar aaram karo. Moksh bhi thak gaya hoga use bhi jaa kar sula do.
Kalyani - Thik hai aai.
Kalyani goes to her room with Moksh.
Anupriya - Aao Saheb aap bhi thak gayi hongi kal se aur subah se aap Kalyani ki chinta mein lagi huyi hai aap bhi aaram kijiye.
Aao Saheb gets up and goes to her room.
Everyone gathered in the hall eventually dispersed.
Only three people left there. Saarthak , Malhar and Anupriya.
Anupriya - Malhar tum bhi toh thak gaye honge kal se tum lage huye the Kalyani ko dhundhne mein , raat mein thik se soye bhi nahi the aur aaj subah bhi jaldi uthkar tum Pune jaane ke liye nikal gaye the toh tum bhi aaram kar lo thodi der.
Malhar - Nahi maai itna zyaada toh nahi bas thodi si thakaan hai.
Anupriya - Tumhare liye abhi chai bana kar laati hoon. Saarthak ji aap chai lenge ya coffee?
Saarthak - Anupriya ji aap Malhar ke liye chai bana rahi hai naah toh akele sirf hum dono ke liye nahi aap apne liye bhi chai bana kar laaiye. Hum sab saath milkar aaj chai piyenge.. Kyun Malhar, thik keh raha hoon na main?
Malhar - Haan kaka , maai kaka bilkul thik keh rahe hai aap bhi aaj chai humaare saath baith kar hi lengi.
Anupriya- Arey nahi nahi Malhar.
Malhar- Kyun nahi maai aap bhi Kalyani ki chinta mein lagi huyi thi toh aap bhi chai humaare saath hi lijiye.
Anupriya- Thik hai Malhar pehle main chai toh bana loon.
Malhar - Thik hai maai.
Anupriya goes from there to make tea for them.
Malhar wanted to talk to Saarthak about something important in private.He took him out of the house in the backyard.
Malhar - Kaka mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai.
Saarthak - Haan, Malhar bolo. Kya baat hai??
Malhar - Woh kaka , Kalyani abhi bhi naaraz hai. Woh sirf maai aur Moksh ki wajah se ghar par waapas aayi hai. Maine bahut koshish ki use manaane ki par woh shaayad abhi bhi mujh par gussa hai aisa mujhe lag raha hai. Aur upar se aap ne dekha naah ki Aao Saheb ne bhi use daant diya. Jab ki galti saari meri thi aur woh meri hi wajah se ghar chhod kar gayi thi.
Saarthak- Hmm, Malhar tumne Kalyani se thik se maafi nahi maangi hogi. Tumne usse sorry kaha tha?
Malhar - Kaisi baat kar rahe hai aap kaka. Maine Kalyani se dil se maafi maangi thi. Aur kayi dafa sorry bhi kaha. Par shaayad meri dil se maangi huyi maafi bhi Kalyani ki naarazgi dur nahi kar paayi hai abhi tak.
Saarthak - Malhar mujhe lagta hai iss baar Kalyani tumse sach mein bahut zyaada naaraz ho gayi hai. Use manaane ki koshish karte raho. Aur jab tak naa maane tab tak manaate raho. Aur haan pyaar se manaana hai. Dobara agar tumne gussa kiya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hai tumhare liye.
Malhar- Par kaka main use kaise manaau? Aur woh kya mere bolne se ya mere manaane se maan jaayegi??
Saarthak - Arey Mere Aurangabad ke singham. Galti meri hi hai ki maine tumhe ladkiyon se kaise baat karni chaahiye woh nahi sikhaya. Tum bas singham hi bane rahe bas gurrana (growling) aata hai tumhe, par kabhi kisi ka mann padhna nahi sikha.
Malhar (with a shy smile and shaking his head lightly) - Kya kaka aap bhi.
Saarthak - Malhar abhi Kalyani ke mann mein kya chal raha hai woh toh humein nahi pata par at least humlog koshish toh kar sakte hai yeh jaan ne ki. Hum isme Anupriya ji ki madad le sakte hai.
Malhar - Maai ki madad? Maai ko isme beech mein lana zaroori hai kya?
Saarthak - Haan bilkul zaroori hai. Kyunki Anupriya ji Kalyani ki aai hai. Ek maa apni beti ki har khushi ya har dard acchhe se samajh sakti hai . Aur ek beti apni maa se hi khul ke apne mann ki baat kar sakti hai. Isi liye sirf Anupriya ji hi hai jo humari iss maamle mein madad kar sakti hai.
Malhar - Par Kaka, maai se baat karega kaun? Aap?
Saarthak - Arey Malhar tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho.? Main nahi tum baat karoge Anupriya ji se.
Malhar - Main?? Nahi nahi kaka main nahi kar paaunga.. Aap hi baat kijiyega.
Saarthak - Malhar tum paagal toh nahi ho gaye?
Malhar (in his mind) - Abhi tak toh nahi hua, par agar Kalyani ke saath raha toh bahut jald ho jaaunga.. Pagli mil gayi hai mujhe bhi.
Saarthak - Ab tum kis soch mein doob gaye? Anupriya ji ko tum apni maai kehte ho naah unhe apni maa jaisi maante ho toh ek beta apni maa ke saath apne mann ki baat toh keh sakta hai naah..Ya phir maa ki madad nahi le sakta?
Malhar - Le sakta hai madad . Par kaka kaisa lagega jab main maai se yeh sab baat karunga? Aur maai kya sochegi?
Saarthak - Arey Anupriya ji kuch bhi aisa waisa nahi sochengi tumhare baare mein. Ulta woh tumhari madad karegi Kalyani ki naarazgi ki wajah jaanane ke liye.
While they were talking Anupriya with tea tray called them to get in the outhouse .
Anupriya - Yeh lijiye chai.
While they were having tea Saarthak nudged his elbow in Malhar’s torso and signals him with his expressions to speak.
Malhar (hesitantly) - Woh maai mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi.
Anupriya - Haan kaho na Malhar isme itna sochne wali kaunsi baat hai?
Malhar - Maayi woh mujhe lagta hai Kalyani kisi baat ko le kar abhi bhi naaraz hai. Mujhe uske mann ki baat aur naarazgi ki wajah jaan ne ke liye aapki madad chaahiye.
Anupriya - Haan Malhar bolo. Main tumhari kaise madad kar sakti hoon?
Malhar - Maai, aap jaanti hai ki Kalyani waapas ghar aa gayi hai par woh abhi bhi mujhse kisi baat se naaraz hai. Aur main uski naraazgi ki wajah jan na chahta hoon. Agar maine puchha toh woh mujhe bilkul bhi bataayegi nahi . Aap hi hai jo usse woh naraazgi ki wajah puchh sakti hai. Aur shaayad main uski woh naarazgi door kar saku.
Anupriya - Malhar, main koshish kar ke dekhungi. Par Kalyani ko to tum jaante hi ho.
Malhar - Maai, aap chinta mat kijiye. Aap koshish kijiye aur main bhi aapse vaada karta hoon ki main iss baar Kalyani ki har naraazgi door kar dunga.
Meanwhile Malhar gets a call and they all dispersed. Anupriya decided to talk to Kalyani. She knows Malhar is genuinely sorry for what he had done. But Kalyani being a stubborn won’t understand or won’t forgive him so easily. She knows when it comes to his family Malhar always protects it by any means. He didn’t mean to hurt Kalyani but that is his short tempered nature that keeps his anger flared all the time. This time it was not his anger it was his worry and fear that came out in the form of angry spat. She knew that Malhar must have tried everything to ask Kalyani for her forgiveness and he will never fail to do anything in getting it. But she need to help him to get to know the reason for Kalyani being upset . She went to Kalyani’s room and knocked the door.
Anupriya - Kalyani.
Kalyani- Arey aai tum. Mujhe laga Malhar ji hai.
Anupriya - Moksh so gaya?
Kalyani- Haan aai, woh pillu aaj itna bahar ghuma toh thak gaya tha. Dudh pite hi turant so gaya.
Anupriya - Woh Kalyani mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.
Kalyani- Haan bolo na aai.
Anupriya- Yahaan par nahi, akele mein.
By saying that she signaled towards the backyard of the house from the balcony.
————————— Thank You ————————-
Thank you so much all for your patience and again I heartily apologize to keep you guys waiting for long.. 😊🙏
Please forgive me for any typos or grammatical errors as I entirely typed this on my phone and I haven’t proof read at all.
I also want to thank all the silent readers from the bottom of my heart for liking and loving my story. Thank you again and again ..🥰❤️
P.S. I might not able to reply all your comments personally but I read them all. Thank you all for your appreciation and motivation. I need it the most right now.☺️
Love you all 😍❤️ 🤗
Darshi.
Loved it. Bechaari Kalyani, I'm with her on this ...galti malhar ki and AS ki daant zyaadatar Kalyani ko mili. Unfair. I hope mallu does something sweet to show kallu what she means to him. Look forward to reading the next. Please next update mein ITNA zyaada time mat lagao.....I know you have other things in life like all of us to do but this update took forever! Please write soon. Will be eagerly waiting....
Originally posted by: neeraja91
Loved it. Bechaari Kalyani, I'm with her on this ...galti malhar ki and AS ki daant zyaadatar Kalyani ko mili. Unfair. I hope mallu does something sweet to show kallu what she means to him. Look forward to reading the next. Please next update mein ITNA zyaada time mat lagao.....I know you have other things in life like all of us to do but this update took forever! Please write soon. Will be eagerly waiting....
Hi Neeraja. 🤗
Thank you for loving it and sorry for keep you waiting.
Since starting galti kisi ki bhi ho sunna Kalyani ko hi padta hai. 😆 show mein bhi n idhar bhi.
I hope too that I can make Mallu do something sweet to get the long pending forgiveness from Kallu.
Show ka jo hua woh hua I need to write it with a clean slate now.
I will try not to take forever to write the next part. I can not promise the timeline but this time update will be sooner. I am working on the field no WFH so I don’t get the desired time which I had earlier when I was a homemaker. But your wish is my command.
Thank you for waiting patiently. N sorry again I kept you waiting for so long. I just need to finish this so that I can have some inner peace .😆
Lovely update. Enjoyed reading it and totally worth the wait.
Take your time but do give the next update. Would love to read how Malhar makes up to his Kalyani.
Originally posted by: rekha_crm
Lovely update. Enjoyed reading it and totally worth the wait.
Take your time but do give the next update. Would love to read how Malhar makes up to his Kalyani.
Thank you dear for loving it. And sorry to keep you waiting.🤗
I will start working on next update this weekend. I would love to make this Malhar make up to his Kalyani in his own style.😎
Singham on a mission manaofy his ruthi huyi sherni.😆
Aww!
Beautiful update Darshi di
Ye AS bhi na
Kalyani ko kitna sunaya
But Sarthak kaka handled the situation well
SarMal bonding❤️
Felt bad for Malhar ji too❤️! He is genuinely feeling bad and wants to repent❤️
Excited to read next part where Malhar ji will make Kalyani happy!
Thanks for update
Take your own time
Very beautiful ❤️
Waiting worth
I like Kaka conversation with kalma
I want to know how Malhar manofy kalyani
Please update soon waiting for your lovely update
Thank you for your lovely update
Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius
Aww!
Beautiful update Darshi di
Ye AS bhi na
Kalyani ko kitna sunaya
But Sarthak kaka handled the situation well
SarMal bonding❤️
Felt bad for Malhar ji too❤️! He is genuinely feeling bad and wants to repent❤️
Excited to read next part where Malhar ji will make Kalyani happy!
Thanks for update
Take your own time
Thank you bhagu..🤗
AS ke bali ke bakre 2 hi toh hai AnuYani..😆
I loved kaka from the start abhi kaise hai raam jaane.
this kaka-bhateeja jodi is kamaal...😆
Abhi mallu ji ka aisa hi ki ab pachhtaaye kya hot jab chidiya chug gayi khet...😆
abhi he need to work hard to manaofy his sherni..so lets see he fails miserably or passes with flying colors ..😳
I will take some time as many things running altogether. but I promised myself that this time it wont take forever and I need to finish what I have started.😃
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