My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 38

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Vishal_m.neil


Amazing update...


There emotional talk and small antics, top notch...


Waiting for update...


Thanks Vishal... 


Will update shortly.... 

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful😳 this is MiNeil. Update next part soon plz

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 23


Minni woke up first listening to the birds early morningchirping….she realized that she is still in neil’s room…she saw him sleepingpeacefully like a innocent baby….caressed his hair and then realized that raniwill come at any moment so she released her hand fro his and stepped out of theroom and to her surprise preet and bobby were still there in the haveli andwere sleeping there in the hall itself…minni thought she will freshen up andthen wake them up but while going in a hurry the vase at the dresser falledmaking preet and bobby come out of their sleep…

 

B. arey mini tu uth gayi…

M. Haa….sorry yaar meri wajah se tum logo ki neend kharabhui….

P. chup kar bada ayi sorry bolne wali…ab Neil kaisa hai….

M. Hmm…abhi to so raha ha…sone se pehle bhi thoda betterlaga…

B. chalo thik hai….

M. Dadu beeji aur dadi amma kaha hai….

P. unhe raat ko hi bhej diya humne…pareshan the rukna chahtethe…but phir tension aur tabiyat kharab kar kenge isiliye sone bhej diya…

M. Acha kiya…thank you guys…

B. ab bohut ho raha hai ha….dekh tu agar dhakka marke nikalbhi deg na tab bhi tujhe chodke nahi jayenge….

M. Jaanti hun…chhipku ho dono….

 

All three had a big laugh on that…Rani was alreadythere….she came early….

 

R. Didi chai bana do aap logo ke liye….

M. Rani di aap aa gaye jaldi…

R. haa aap sab so rahe the to mein doosre kaam kar rahithi…muhjhe laga aap kamre me nahi the to walking gaye ho….

M. haa wo di…

N. Rani chai bana do please…

R. ji bhayya abhi ati hun…

B. kaise ho Neil bhai….

N. Tum log itni subah subah..

P. wo kya hai na neil hum kal yehi ruk gaye…socha tum logoko agar kuch zaroorat ho to…

Neil and minni looked at each and all that happened innthe court flashed infront of Neil once again and got fresh tears in hiseyes….but he controlled his emotions as he understood that its waste cribbingon it now…

 

N. oh okay…thanks guys…

B. Kya bhai aap bhi shuru ho gaye…friends ke liye itna tokar sakte hai na….

M. chalo tum log fresh ho jao rani di chai lati hogi…

N. Mein bhi fresh hoke aata hoon…aaj ek important meetinghai..yaad hai na tumhe…

M. oh haa…mein to bhool hi gayi…mein bhi ready hoti hoonjaldi….

 

Saying all 4 dispersed to get ready….soon after havingtea preet and bobby left for their home and Mini and Neil went torestaurant....they had a meeting for lunch service for a corporate office ondaily basis…it was a bvery good opportunity for them to grow so mini was allnervous about it….there Neil was cooking something unique to impress them…justthen he heard a big sound and soon everyone ran to from where he heard thesound….

 

M. Siimpy di...yeh kya kar diya….

S. who minni madam….

M. aap ko pata hai na aaj kitna important meeting hai andsee what have you done….

S. Mere haath se choot gaya…sorry…

M. sorry ka kya matlab hai…u know clients 10 min me aa rahehai aur aapne restaurant e beecho beech ande gira diye….kaha baithaui unhe….

N. Minni calm down…

M. Calm down…neil seriously..yeh tum bol rahe ho…

N. haa…ab ispe simply e chillke koi fayda nahi hai….lets doone thing we will take the guests to your cabin wahi meeting kar lenge…

M. and what if they insist to see the restaurant…

N. Tab tak it will be cleaned….

M. Are you serious Neil…

N. Yes miini… trust me the meeting will be a bigsuccess…dekhte rehna….

M. Ok fine….i want clean in 15 min

S. ji mini madam….thank you sir…aapne bacha liya…

N. thanks nahi kaam pe dhyan do…aaj to maine bacha liya agarphir aisa kiya na I m sure mini madam will not listen too me also….

G. haa simply tujhe hazar baar bola hai dhyaan de par tukaha sunti hai….

 

Neil rolls his eyes and leave from there…

 

S. waise geeta didi aaj is khadoos ko kya hua jo mujhesupport kar raha tha…

G. Pata nahi…jo bhi ho acha badlav hai….

 

After 5 min Neil enters mini cabin with cup and sees minipacing in the room and he got to know that she is being nervous….

 

N. Coffee…

M. No neil....not now…

N. Kuch aur chahiye….

M. Neil…should I blush now…

N. ok if you want you can…

M. Neil yyaar…

N. Have this coffee… you will feel better…

M. no…

N. Minni…piyo ise…and relax…sab acha hoga…don’t be nervous…

M. But…this is a very good opportunity for us…

N. I know minni…

 

He hands over the coffee mug and continues…

 

N. and u can crack it…relax….

M. yeah….thanks for the coffee…

N. anytime madam…

M. Waise what happened to you…how are you so composed…simplydi ko bh support kiya…

N. bcoz mujhe samajh aa gaya ki jo ho gaya uspe roke koifayda nahi…that’s why…

M. really…

N. yeah…why..

M…ahh

Sundar. Mini madam client has come……

 

Precap: MiNeil Shocked

 

 

 

 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by sub_94


Beautiful😳 this is MiNeil. Update next part soon plz


Thanks dear...


Updated....

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Chalo finally neil came out of trauma

Par ab ye naya client kaun hai hope koi aur villain na ho

Posted: 3 years ago

Today in both stories Neil is out of past  baggage and also at end there in Anjali's FF we have kidnap and here client . Suspense ðŸ˜†

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by sub_94


Today in both stories Neil is out of past  baggage and also at end there in Anjali's FF we have kidnap and here client . Suspense ðŸ˜†

Mineilians thinks alike😆

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful update....


Client ashok toh nhi hai ??? 


Waiting for update..

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


Nice update

Chalo finally neil came out of trauma

Par ab ye naya client kaun hai hope koi aur villain na ho


Thanks Anjali... 


Villain nahi hai... 



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