PreRish OS : Just Perfect 27/11 - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

This was beautifully done. The silent smiles, the frustration and gradual understanding, her complaints and his realisation of her sour mood. It's just perfect. Touched to the realistic bar.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tranquility07

This was beautifully done. The silent smiles, the frustration and gradual understanding, her complaints and his realisation of her sour mood. It's just perfect. Touched to the realistic bar.

thank you so so so much tranquilityšŸ¤— i like to keep my fictions realistic thank you so much for the comment šŸ¤—i hope it was worth your time šŸ¤—
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

yes ayega toh Zarur. Give me some time šŸ¤—

Ja simran ja.. jee le apni zindagišŸ˜Ž

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

who do i see who do i see who do i see where are you my dear? I miss you the mostest 😭 especially whatever you write. My daily dosage of PreRish, i miss you so much 😭😭

Thank you so much ā™„ļøšŸ¤— i am so glad that you are happy with the outcome, you out of all people who gave us such Beautiful stories ā™„ļøšŸ¤— hope it was worth your time. Thank you so much ā™„ļøšŸ¤—

I know I am being very inactive nowadays... But the new college, studies, new city all are keeping me extremely busy my dear šŸ˜”

And I have stopped watching the show as well after our Bajaj left with a proper closure... I hated to see him go

And of course your OS was awesome my dear... Never think that your work is not worth anyone's time

I love you for your great stories 😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

I know I am being very inactive nowadays... But the new college, studies, new city all are keeping me extremely busy my dear šŸ˜”

And I have stopped watching the show as well after our Bajaj left with a proper closure... I hated to see him go

And of course your OS was awesome my dear... Never think that your work is not worth anyone's time

I love you for your great stories 😘😘

i miss you so much šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ’”
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Poor RB and poor Mehra,, victim of Lady Boss' wrath... btw was the story written as diary entry? aagey kya hua.. How RB pacified his lady boss?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Poor RB and poor Mehra,, victim of Lady Boss' wrath... btw was the story written as diary entry? aagey kya hua.. How RB pacified his lady boss?

he didn't. 🤣 that wink was enough 🤣 well no it wasn't a diary entry rather a first and second person narration thank you so much. Meri daat kha ke you read this OS but thik hai you read it šŸ˜Ž
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

he didn't. 🤣 that wink was enough 🤣 well no it wasn't a diary entry rather a first and second person narration thank you so much. Meri daat kha ke you read this OS but thik hai you read it šŸ˜Ž

No actually I started reading it before then I put it on hold and start wandering on AT phir tumhari daant khaakar socha pehlay Ankie ka OS hee padh liya jaye warna ladki mujhe kahin ka nahin chhodegi🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

No actually I started reading it before then I put it on hold and start wandering on AT phir tumhari daant khaakar socha pehlay Ankie ka OS hee padh liya jaye warna ladki mujhe kahin ka nahin chhodegi🤣

🤣🤣🤣 how cute šŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
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We can still get to see this dynamic between them. There’s hope to get a scene like this in the show, Right?!

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