My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Sakshi_04

Finally saare pulav ek sath padhe and it was soo good👏

Kya entry thi ashok ki neil ne aapne sasurji kya seva kari 😊

Mini ka gussa uffff sahi bola tha neil iska gussa 😆

Hamari angry young girl😆

Isha toh 🤬

I'm proud of my mineil❤️❤️

Mini Isha ki band bajaegi maja aaega

Thank sakshi. ...🤗

Neil hi to jhelta hai uska gussa 😆

Isha to gayo....

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Update😆

I knew it that u will be asking for update before opening the thread to see ur post.... 😆

Will update today..... 😆

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

I knew it that u will be asking for update before opening the thread to see ur post.... 😆

Will update today..... 😆

Mineilians can sense each other😆

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Mineilians can sense each other😆

So true... 😆

Part 15

Neil said what had just happened to the elderly ppl….

NB. Satyanash…jiska dar tha wahi hua…keede pade us isha pejo mere bachon pe aise ilzam laga rahi hai…use khatmal kha jaye…aur sookh jaye….

M. Are are dadi amma bas…chodo yaar use…franly speakingmeine aisa hi kuch expect kiya tha use….after all I have attacked her ego…

N. U r right minni….isha kisiko importanc de ya na de apne ego ko bohut importance deti hai…wehve attacked her ego by filing a case for visitation rights….

B. Nahi Neil bhai mujhe na sirf case kka chakkar nahi lagta….woap dono ko frame karke khud duhiyari banna chahti hai so that court wont snatchkeya from her…aur minni villain ban jaye….

Neil just sat on the sofa with a thud sound amost allwere shocked seeing him like this….minni understood what is he thinking…minniran towards him and sat on her kneels holding his hand softly….Neil saw hereyes which were very strong unlike his which were just filled with guilt andfear….

M. Neil…mein bilkul thik hoon…u know I don’t care ki kounkya sochta hai until I am right…please neil not again…don’t blame urslf forthis…wo janti hai ki agar wo mujhe hurt karegi to tum emotionally weak ho jaogeand will stop fighting….its all her plot yaar to just gain sympathy….we have tofight till end….

N. this is not right minni…mein tumhari badnaami kaise dekhsakta hoon that too bcoz of me…I have to tell her to stop all this….u don’t knowabout her…she is way too dangerous…wo apna ego satisfy karne ke liye kitni bhidoor ja sakti hai…no no…I cant let this happen to you…jaise pehle socha thadivorce process waise hi kar lete hai…

M. Phir keya ka kya…

N. That’s ok minni…keya kounsa mujhe pehchanti hai…use to 10din pehle pata chala ki mein uska baap hoon…agar mujhe uski visistation rightnahi bhi mile to koi difference nahi hoga..

M. Aur tum Neil…

N. tum aur arya ho na…mujhe aur kisi ki zaroorat nahi….kaltak mein jis family ke lie taras raha tha wo mujhe tum dono me mili hai minni….howcan I let someone hurt my family….no…arya ko yeh sab pata chala to wo bohutdisturb hogi…no no no…let me call isha for mutual….(saying that neil takes outhis phone but minni snatched it from him)

M. kisi ko call nahi karoge tum…aur na hi tum peeche hatoge…tokya hua keya nahi pehchanti tumhe but tum to jaante ho na ki she is ur daughter…andrah baat meri…u know me right…I don’t care about all this agar hum saath hai…uwill fight for ur rights….isha cant play with ur emotions like this…I wont lether do this to you again….yeh mera wada hai tumse…

N. samjho mini…arya ke baare me socho…she cant be able takethis all….

Just then a voice gets everybody’s attention and they lookat the direction from where it came…and to their surprise it was arya…..whichmakes both minni and neil tensed …yes minni thought she will explain arya aftershe makes neil ready for this situation but seeing arya there was a shocker foreveryone….

A. Neil….

N. Choti madam….

A. kya hua…tum kyun sad ho…aur mein kya nahi samajh paoungi…

M. chutanki…wo kya hai na neil na ek decision nahi le paraha

A. kyun…

M. bcoz use lagta hai ki u wont be happy with that….

A. oho Neil idhar dekho…(Arya made neil look at herholding his chin)..i love you ….aur agar tum humare saath hi rahoge na tomujhe tumhare kisi bhi decision se bura nahi lagega…

N. par choti madam…agar use tum hurt hui to…

A. uffo bola na…jab tak tum saath ho mein hurt nahi hongi….

N. sach…

A. haa baba sach….ab chalo mere saath mujhe na tumhe bohutkuch dikhana hai…aaj school mein na painting competition hua…chalo na….(Sayingarya held his hand and dragged him to her room)

Both arya and neil left the room….minni was still lookingat the direction neil and arya went….minni was still not cvinced whether neilis convinced or not….what if he calls isha for mutual divorce…what if again hehave to go through all the pain….her love for him should be his strength nothis weakness….lots of things were going on her head just the dadu touched hershoulder…making her turn towards them

M. Ji dadu…

D. maaf karde bacha…

M. kya hua dadu…

D. maine phir se tujhe galat samjha….jaise babita ki waqt sochatha..

M. Dadu yaar…ab aap shuru mat ho jao…neil kam tha jo ab aapbhi…I cant handle u guys yaar…

D. tu mera sher bacha hai….mujhe fakr hai tujhe pe…Neil kobhi galat samjha meine…jabi uski to koi galati hi nahi hai….

M. ab to sab thik hai na dadu…ab chodo un baton ko…mitti pao…

Nb. Chup kar nigodi….sach bata tu thik hai na…ki neil kobehlane ke liye koi farak na pdne ka natak kar rahi hai…

M. dadi amma…aapko kya lagta hai mein natak karungi to neilko pata nahi chalega….wo ek second me pakad leta….mein kisi e saamne bhi natakkar sakti hoon lekin uske saamne nahi…he can sense me….

Nb. Kya…sense…

Preet and bobby were smiling and minni was thinking yehkya bol diya meine dadi amma se and was glaring her friends who were smilingmischeaviously…..

M. arey kuch nahi dadi amma….use chodo…ab yeh sochna hai kiis isha ka kya karna hai….naak me dam karke rakha hai….

Precap: Neil gets a call from someone…..

That’s it guys….hope u all like it….

This was Lovely..MiNeil talk so good and it was so Mini and Neil style and Arya coming there made the scene more strong. Update next part soon .

Beautifully written lata..👏👏

Mineil bond and family ka dhere dhere samjhna.

Waiting for nxt update.

Beautiful.

MiNeil together as each other's support system ❤️..

Loved it...

Update soon😊

This was beautiful. MiNeil handling each other was beautiful. Trio scene was beautiful. Can't wait to read next .Update soon

Originally posted by: sub_94

This was Lovely..MiNeil talk so good and it was so Mini and Neil style and Arya coming there made the scene more strong. Update next part soon .

Thanks yaar..... 🤗