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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Drabble 5 was awesome šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ”„

Anjali šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Mineil scene was amazing šŸ˜ā¤ļøā¤ļø

thanks yaar

kash aisa ho jaye show meinā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Nayaab_Cheez

You are very good at romance. Show ph should hire you šŸ˜‰ Enjoyed this .

thanks for appreciationšŸ˜³šŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

thanks yaar

kash aisa ho jaye show meinā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Nayaab_Cheez

You are very good at romance. Show ph should hire you šŸ˜‰ Enjoyed this .

Haha.. this is true .Anjali offscreen is over now please join and serve us onscreen alsošŸ˜‰

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Haha.. this is true .Anjali offscreen is over now please join and serve us onscreen alsošŸ˜‰

You know its my secret desirešŸ˜†

I dont know how to venture into this field or else i would have quit my boring job years ago

I have no contacts and experience in entertainment industry.....i really enjoy writing but i have heard that its not a permanent thing and the income is not stable. Its my dream to work in this field

But I come from middle class family and I am in govt. Job which gives me security and steady income so i am stuck to it since 8 years now.....but no creative satisfaction.

Only these writeups give me some encouragement to jhelofy my jobšŸ˜†


Waise bhi its a sad reality that kids from indian middle class families dont get to live their dream🄱 they are always motivated for grabbing secure jobs.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

You know its my secret desirešŸ˜†

I dont know how to venture into this field or else i would have quit my boring job years ago


Anjali dm check kar

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa


🤣 Everyone are irritated 🤣 hope Nithin or Ritwik , Hrithik whoever it is come soon and take his product and go 🤣

Are but he broke up or guest broke up with himšŸ˜• so will he accept his haddi ??

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rebalove

Are but he broke up or guest broke up with himšŸ˜• so will he accept his haddi ??

May be it was their plan to get Neil's house or Ritwik himself don't know haddi was his or he might have not agreed to accept it and that's why she made it Neil's

Edited by N_sharmaa - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Hii

After a long time I have come with a drabble. Here MiNeil are married and Mini is expecting their first child and Babita and HS are also alive.


-:DRABBLE 6:-


Mini was 6 months pregnant and enjoying all the attention she could get from the family members. She was always cranky because of her mood swings and throwing tantrums every now and then. Her babes and Neil were at the receiving end of it. Babita brought chhole bhature and kheer in lunch for Mini. Mini became excited like a child to see it. She quickly took one bite of chhole bhature and made a face as if it was tasteless and then she ate one spoon full of kheer and again made puking face. Babita noticed it, ā€œWhat happened is it not tasty?ā€asked Babita and she herself ate one bite of both the dishes. ā€œMmm….its perfect. Why are you making faces then?ā€ she asked. ā€œBecause you have not made it as per my instructions. I wanted to eat chhole bhature made by Neil and kheer made by you. But both of you have done exactly opposite. I don’t wan to eat it now.ā€ Said Mini as she pouted like a child. ā€œOh Minni, what difference does it makes. Both the dishes are good.ā€ Said Babita frustrated from her tantrums. ā€œIt makes all the differences. I was craving for the taste of your kheer and Neil’s chhole bhature. Now I didn’t get anyone of it as both of you messed up.ā€ Replied Mini. ā€œMinni, I am tired of your tantrums…pata nahi Neil tumhe kaise jhelta hai….aur uski koi galti nahi hai wo bechara toh tumhare liye chhole bhature hi bana raha tha but maine socha usme bahut time lagta hai…use restaurant bhi jaana hai that’s why I suggested ki wo kheer bana de jaldi ban jayegi aur main chhole bhature bana dungi tumhare liye.ā€ Explained Babita. ā€œNo way, I want to eat chhole bhature made by him only or else I wont eat anything.ā€Mini said folding her hands in front of her chest.


ā€œOh God! What should I do with this girl?ā€ Babita said throwing her hands up in the air in frustration. But she knew her stubborn daughter will not have food unless she gets what she wants. So she gave up and called Neil in the restaurant. ā€œNeil ,beta Mini is not eating food. She is saying that we both messed it up. She only want to eat chhole bhature made by you and kheer made by me.ā€ ā€œI knew it. You really underestimate your elder daughter. She can give competition to Arya in childishness. Don’t worry, I have made chhole in restaurant I am sending parcel with one waiter.ā€ Replied Neil as he laughed at his wife’s antics. After Babita got parcel she served Mini Neil’s dish. ā€œNow eat, Neil has sent this for you.ā€ Said Babita. But Mini began to cry loudly. ā€œWhat happened Minni? Why are you crying?ā€asked Babita in concern. ā€œHe doesn’t love me anymore. Why he didn’t come himself?ā€ Mini wailed getting emotional for no reason. ā€œHey bhagwaan! Kya karu is ladki ka? Minni, beta Neil is busy in the restaurant right. He will come in the evening. Let him work till then.ā€ Babita tried to explain as calmly as possible. ā€œSo what if he is busy. He could atleast come for half n hour. He loves restaurant more than me.ā€ Mini cried again. Babita sighed and called Neil again. ā€œBeta now she is saying that she will only eat from your hands. Tum aa jao thodi der ke liye tab tak I’ll go and handle there.ā€ ā€œShe will make us mad from her demands.ā€ Said Neil as he rolled his eyes.


Babita informed Mini that Neil is coming till then she made her eat the kheer which she had prepared again for her. ā€œPata nahi tum kis pe gayi ho. Maine toh kabhi itne nakhre nahi kiye. Bahut pareshan karti ho tum bechare Neil ko.ā€ Babita admonished her. ā€œDon’t lie mom. Aapne bhi papaji ko aise hi pareshan kiya hoga jab main aapke tummy mein rahi hongi.ā€ Mini said in the flow without realizing its meaning. Babita stopped feeding her kheer as she looked away sad at the mention of her first husband. Mini realized her mistake and immediately apologized, ā€œI am sorry babes….pata nahi kaise muh se nikal gaya.ā€ ā€œWhen I was pregnant with you that time…mere nakhre uthana chhodo tumhare papaji mujhe ek bar bhi puchhte tak nahi the. I was just living for you.ā€ Replied Babita as she couldn’t stop herself from remembering her bitter past. ā€œBabes I am so sorry. I am really a bad daughter. How can I do this to you…pata nahi kaise ye sab mere muh se nikal gaya….I am so sorry please forgive me.ā€ Mini requested. ā€œIts ok….it happens sometimes. And I don’t have any complaints now as your Hanuman Uncle was at my service 24*7 when I was pregnant with Arya. Unhe paakar meri saari shikayatein durr ho gayi. Aur unhe meri life mein toh tum hi laayi ho na.ā€ said Babita as she smiled at Mini.


ā€œNeil came home and Babita went to the restaurant for sometime. Mini was excited like a child to see him and she threw her arms around his neck as soon as he came near her. ā€œMissed me wifey?ā€ asked Neil as he kissed her on forehead. Mini nodded in yes. Neil made her eat chhole bhature with his own hands and made sure she had all the medicines on time. ā€œYou give too much trouble to your mom.ā€Said Neil. ā€œShe is my babes she will understand.ā€ Replied Mini. ā€œYou also trouble me a lot.ā€ Said Neil. Mini looked at him raising her eyebrow, ā€œI will give you your baby and you cant even take some trouble for me.ā€ Replied Mini. ā€œNo one can win from you in argument.ā€ Said Neil as he folded his hands in front of her in defeat.


At night Babita came to give kesar milk to Mini when she saw that Neil was sitting on sofa reading a book and Mini kept her head in Neil’s lap and she was sleeping peacefully. She smiled looking at both of them. They were perfect for each other. How good they look together. She cant believe now that there was a time when she had opposed their wedding because she was not comfortable with Neil’s past. How Mini had called her out for her double standards and how Hanuman Singh made her understand all this and supported Mini and Neil. Now as she look at them she cant believe she tried to break them apart. They look so much in love. Once they were married how she bonded with her son in law and came to know how talented he is as a chef. He has taken their restaurant to new heights. She loves to work with him in the kitchen and now as Neil is there to support her Mini was free to pursue photography. Neil perfectly blended in their family.


Babita came out of her thoughts and called Neil in low voice as she didnt want to wake up Mini. Neil looked at her and the glass of milk in her hand. He noticed Mini was asleep. He gestured Babita to keep the glass in their room he will make Mini drink that after sometime. It has become her habit. She dozed off quiet early now a days and Neil had to carry her to their room every night where he made her sit and make her finish the kesar milk in that half sleepy state only. Today was no different. He kept his book away and stood up. He carefully carried Mini in his arms and proceeded towards their room. He met Babita on his way who was returning from their room. ā€œI have kept the glass on the side table.ā€ She informed Neil as she looked away embarrassed seeing Mini sleeping in his arms. Neil said thank you and moved forward while Babita turned back again to look at them, ā€œHey Bhagwaan mere bachho ko hamesha yuhi sath rakhna aur unhe duniya ki sari khusiyan dena.ā€ She sent a silent prayer to God.

Edited by anjali0111 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

It's was so beautiful ā¤ļøNo extra drama.

Simple and beautiful , naughty MiNeil. MiNeil are love and you are too good šŸ‘

Edited by Krithzz - 5 years ago

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