Prerish FF *Danger Looms* Part 11- Page 23 - Page 9

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Posted: 5 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Niyati_T

Itna mean insaan hai yeh Rishabh ka so called father. Prerna is seven months pregnant aur Vo usse pani bhi nahi dega 😔🤬

Bechara Rishabh he is so worried 🄺

He wants to hurt Rishabh by hurting his family because he knows Rishabh ki jaan basti hain unme.😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank youšŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: oa2019

and the plot thickens... very nice update.

Thank you šŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Ghosh.M.

He wants to hurt Rishabh by hurting his family because he knows Rishabh ki jaan basti hain unme.😊

Pregnant lady ke saath aisa behave karke? 😔

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Posted: 5 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Ghosh.M.

Thank you so much ā¤ļø

Next time I will try to make the update a little longer.

The whole story is based on this kidnapping track.

You will get cute scenes i promise😳

Ok dear

I trust you šŸ¤—šŸ„³

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Posted: 5 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Niyati_T

Pregnant lady ke saath aisa behave karke? 😔

Aisa hi hain woh😔

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Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Ok dear

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello Everyone Madhusree here.😳I am back with the 6th part of the story.😳

All the converstions are in Italics.

This whole part has been typed in phone, there can be typo errors.

Happy readingšŸ¤—



Canary Wharf:


Rishabh disconnected the call and put down the receiver while staring into something unknown. He was totally confused who could it be? Who is so desperate to harm him that he had to undertake such crime?

"Why I couldn't figure it out, who the man was? I need to hurry up. Waha Prerna aur Kukki na jane kaise honge." He thought and stood up and requested the commissioner, "Sir please find out his whereabouts, I need to reach there as soon as possible."

"We are on it Sir, but we can't let you go alone, police will accompany you." Commissioner said.

"No..." Rishabh almost screamed. "Haven't you heard what he said, he wants me to be there alone. My pregnant wife and child are as hostage , I can't take any risk. Police will not accompany me." Said Rishabh.

"Sir, I can understand. But police will follow you instead of accompanying you. They will be outside and as soon as you get some opportunity inform us. We will come inside and arrest them." Commissioner stated the plan.

"Ok" Rishabh said.


Kent:


It was more than 3 hours from the time Prerna has got her consciousness. Kukki was also wide awake, sitting in her lap, her fear truly visible from her eyes. After getting consciousness she was crying her lungs out, Prerna had toiled hard to make her cries seize. And now she was sitting here silently but very fearful. Prerna, herself was also very much afraid and tensed. She was perspirating heavily and badly in need of water but no one was there to listen to her cries.

"Rishabh, please jaldi aiye. Please. I can't take it more. Takleef ho rahi hain bahot. Please Rishabh, jaldi aiye." Prerna thought as fat tears strolled down her cheeks.

Kukki who saw her mumma crying raised her hand and wiped the tears and said, " ro mat mumma, dad ajaenge jald hi."

Prerna nodded her head and smiled through her tears.

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Police traced the exact location of the place through Prerna's phone within no time and here Rishabh was standing outside a shabby farmhouse amidst woods according to the location. He looked here and there, not a human being can be seen and even there is no noise at all. The unusual stillness of the place send chills down his spine.

"Kahi maine ane mein der toh nehi kardi? No. Think positive, think positive" he said to himself.

Rishabh with slow steps reached the maindoor of the farmhouse. As he knocked on it the door creaked open. He got shocked. As he peeped in he could see nothing but utter darkness. The whole house is in darkness. He went in. After stumbling with lot of things he reached near a room from where a very faint streak of light was falling in the corridor. He slowly went ahead after having a look on his all sides. As he entered the room he saw Prerna leaning by the wall with closed eyes and Kukki hugging her. Happiness would be an understatement what he felt right at that moment. He ran and sat infront of them and tapped on Prerna's shoulder.

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Prerna thought to sleep awhile which may at least not remind her of thirst and she was also tired as hell. She said to Kukki to hug her and close her eyes and sleep. Soon after sometime she closed her eyes someone tapped on her shoulder, she woke up with a start to see Rishabh, her life, was sitting in front of her with expectational eyes.

" Rishabh, aap a gaye. Rishabh mujhe laga I will die today. I got so feared about my baby. Rishabh le chalo mujhe yaha se please. Pehle yeh ropes open kardo please bahot dard ho raha hain." Prerna said and started crying.

Kukki who slept by then woke up hearing some commotion and saw her dad sitting near her. She jumped and hugged him and started crying hysterically.

Rishabh was having a hard time to control the cries of his two lifelines.

"Kukki, shh chup ho jao please, dekho main toh aa gaya. Ab toh hum ghar jayenge. Chup chup chup beta. Aur Prerna stop crying please dear. Please Prerna tabiyat kharab ho jaigi apki. " Rishabh tried to console them while opening Prerna's ropes when a voice startled them.

"Hello my boy. Kaise ho?"



Please don't forget to leave your likes and comments. Your reviews matters a lot to me.😳

Love,

Madhusreeā¤ļøā¤ļø

Edited by Ghosh.M. - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#89

Yaya! Bajju found them. Police is also there with them so no issues. šŸ˜Ž

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Yaya! Bajju found them. Police is also there with them so no issues. šŸ˜Ž

Let's see if there will be issues or notšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

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