My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 20

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Posted: 5 years ago

Badhiya

Toh finally mini ashok se baat karegi ya nahi

Crapfest ki entry hone wali hai....jaldi se nipta dena isko aur haddi ko

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nicely written lata...

Toh isha yaha bhi hai.... Jaldi usse swah kar dena...

Will wait for update.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mistress.of.pen

Beautiful....

Just loved it...

The way Mini pours her heart out and the way Neil pacifies her is just ❤️❤️.

.. update soon


Thanks dear... 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Badhiya

Toh finally mini ashok se baat karegi ya nahi

Crapfest ki entry hone wali hai....jaldi se nipta dena isko aur haddi ko


Thanks anjali 🤗


Filhaal to nahi karegi baat.... May be in future..


Crapfest and haddi ka hoga Abbi.... 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil

Nicely written lata...

Toh isha yaha bhi hai.... Jaldi usse swah kar dena...

Will wait for update.


Thanks vishal... 🤗


Isha jayegi abhi usika hoga role...

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Posted: 5 years ago

MiNeil are goals . Only they can handle each other 😉 Crapfest in precap 🤢throw her out soon🤢

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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

MiNeil are goals . Only they can handle each other 😉 Crapfest in precap 🤢throw her out soon🤢


Thanks sharma 🤗


Crapfest khud ke liye HI raasta bana rahi hai to got hell.... 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ashok and Mini confrontation finally. Much needed one . MiNeil are love❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Ashok and Mini confrontation finally. Much needed one . MiNeil are love❤️


Thanks yaar

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 14


Minni was still sobbing remembering everything she facedall these years and neil was just telling her to stp crying. He pulled her awayand cupped her face…

N. Sorry minni…meine yeh socha hi nahi ki tumhare andar yehsab chal raha hai….please don’t cry…I m so dumb ki tumahare taraf se socha hi nahi…I was just thinking from a father’s way….please maaf kardo yaar.

M. don’t be sorry neil, hum dono sahih ai apni apni jagah sahihai….

N. I promise I wont force you for anything….

M. tum karoge bhinahi I know that….mein papa ji ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti….u know tum jabapni side bata rahe the na as a father how u feel tab thoda laga ki kya papa jiko bhi aisa laga hoga but then I thought ki tum me aur papaji me zameen asmaanka farak hai….

Minni hugs him tightly to just feel him and forget herpain.

At Naeembi’s place

D. kya laga tumhe Ashok Khurana?

A. Papaji …pairi pona..

Dadu dint let him touch his feet

D. itni izzat ki zaroorat nai….kya lene aaye ho…

A. papaji mein aap sabko dekhne aaya tha….beeji batao na…

Beeji just wanted to go and hug her son but she couldn’t asdadu will not like it.

B. main ya batao ashok….teri galatiya aisi hai ki mein kisiko nahi mana paongi…

A. please beeji aap to aise mat bolo…papaji aur minni kapata tha…aur mujhe ek baat poochni this appse…

D. acha to tu minni se mil aaya…

A. ji…

D. kya bola meri bachi ne…

A. wo to baat karna hi nahi chahti….

D. to tu humse kyun umeed lagaya hai…minni agar tujhse koi Rishtanahi rakhna chahti to hum bhi nahi…hum apni bachi ke saath hai…

A. mujhe pata tha ki mujhe maafi shayad kabhi nahi milegipar aap logo ke dekhne ka mann kiya to aa gaya….mein nikalta hoon…agar kabhimaaf karne ka irada ho to bas ek call kariyega….meine apna number naembi kodiya hai…aur ab mein delhi me rahunga….hum india shift ho gaye hai.

Dadu just did a namaskar without giving any reply.

Ashok was at the car when mini and neil came from restaurant….seeing ashok leaving Neil went and greeted him bye…that’s when dadu saw him….

A. Chalta hun…Mini ka khayal rakhna …Ashok whispered to neil….

Neil Assured him that….Ashok some how understood thatminni has found someone who will take care of her and with that releif Ashok left for Delhi in his car…

Soon after that booby and preet came and were lookingvery horrified….minni was tensed as she have never seend them like that….

M. Kya hua tum dono ko…aise kyun ho jaise koi shock lag gaya…

B. Minni tune apna insta handle check kiya….

M. kyun…

B. check kar…

M. kya hai…

Minni was shell shocked when she saw he insta…it was fullof Isha accusations and ppl making ugly comments on it…seeing mini like thatneil snatched her phone and saw which made him fume with anger….minni just raninside without uttering a word…followed by everyone…

N. minni….minni….please listen to me…I am so sorry is….idonno tumhe kaise face karu…minni please don’t hate me…

All this while minni was facng the other side ….and insometime she couldn’t resist her laugh and she laughed like never before….seeingher like that all of them were shocked….the oldies don’t even know anything thewere puzzled more…

M. God neil….tumhe kya lagta hai ki isha ki aise harkato se Iwill be effected….come on yaar she is doing all this to gain sympathy….as usepata hai ki agar wo somestic violence ke case ka BG check hoga to poora sachsaamne aayega….so she is playing this cheap game….minni itni pagal nahi hai kisamajh nap aye…

N. Are you sure…I mean she acused ur character and tum aise….

M. Neil…hume kisiki character certificate ki zaroorat nahihai….hume pata hai ki humne kabhi uch galat nahi kiya then why should we careki isha hum dono ke baare me kya bolti hai logo ko…

Na. arey koi hume batayega ki kya hua hai….

N. naembi wo….isha ne minni pe ilzam lagaya hai ki minni kiwajah se mera aur isha ka Rishta toota hai and …..and minni aur mera najayaz Rishtahai…

That’s it guys…

Precap:

Minni ka karara jawab to isha and truth revelation

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