MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 36

Originally posted by: Rishrabh

My Neil 😭😭 mere se kuch nehi ho sakta.. main kitna v ghussa ho jaun if a see a single drop of rear in his eyes chahe fake hi kyun na ho I just cant stop worrying, I m mad 😭

This is so lovely update. Too good. I can completely understand both mini n Neil's pov. Both are right from their pov.

But ye Isha ka Kia chakkar h.. omg

yes neil is alone and is in pain...mere sath bhi aisa hi hai chahe neil kuch bhi kar le but wo emotional hua ki mujhe achha nahi lagta...main sab bhul jati hoon phir🤣

Originally posted by: Sakshi_04

Amazing anjali🤗😍

Finally rute mineil mann hi gye

Neil ki baatein sunkar meri bhi aakhon bhar aai thi yr😭

Ab Mr & Mrs Oberoi ke bich crapfest aaegi

Overall loved it 😍

Please update ASAP ❤️

thanks

glad you liked it

crapfest bhi ayegi...mineil ko har imtihaan dena hoga

Originally posted by: Prithikumar

Very nice story....excited to see the possessive Neil😍

thanks

dont know if this will happen in this story or not...still hasnt planned anything like this

Originally posted by: sub_94

Very nice writing. You have kept Neil bit grey here that's nice change compared to your previous writing.Mini's character is very cute and sweet and she is yet modern girl .I actually imagined SouNoor.They would have nailed the scenes .

thanks

glad you liked neil here

yes i hope show mein kuch intense scenes mile sounoor ko

Originally posted by: zalima

Ek dum Chant kahika

I love chant tezz aadmi

Kamina,harami, rude ,akkadu and kadoos.,sexy

Lekin phir b pyaara

Yaar Anjali I love ye wala Neil

Total package hai

Iss type ka mard sache hote hai

Loyal hote hai

Straight forward.no bakwas wale mard

Neil b bilkul waise hi hai.

I love this passionate loyal wala love commitment

Grey shade ka tadka hai jo natural hai aur ye character ko aur b zyada mazedaar bana raha hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Ek ek frame ko imagine kiya maine aur khub enjoy b kiya

Mini ek dum pyaari cute Kitten hai

Apna banda ek dum wild sher

I love this Kitten sher jodi

Tera usage of words bahut hi accha hai to discribe their character, mannerisms

Neil ne kya current diya Mini ko

Bechari

440 volts wala

Banda ek dum talented skilled aadmi hai

Haye ..I love such meethu kaminas

Ye banda

his style of wearing removing clothesbada talented hai iss matter mein

Natural tha

Honeymoon wala accha tha...jo trust wale scenes wahan tume likha tha sundar tha ek innocent , sundar bonding.

Aur mini jumping on Neil I loved it

woh March kar ke aana Neil ke paas

Chest ke paas folding hands

Perfect likha

Neil shaana enjoying aakir billi ko aana hi pada sher ker paas

Sab 440 volts ka kamaal

Naam change karna wala mera favt hai

Bahut hi sundar tarike se likha hai

Unka fight ,ek ek mannerisms, beech beech woh tension bahut hi acche se likha hai

Imagine kar li( mujhe SouNoor ko iss type ke scene mein dekhna hai)

Neil ne saasu mom ko kya bewakoof banaya ye mera Favt hai mast tha hai maza aagaya .

Kamina kahika

Neil ka wicked evil smile i love it specially jab woh mini ko deta hai

Mini scared billi cute si pyaari hai yaar

Sher issi liye tempt hota raheta hai

Imagine kar li

Nayeem b

Jab b ye frame mein aati hai I just go ROFL

Kya likha hai ek ek dialogue , mannerisms

Pura badla le rahi ho

MiNeil ka challenge

I love how Neil welcomed her back

Evil sexy aadmi

Mini ka plan accha tha to escape and sleep before he comes lekin sher ne billi ko pakad liya

Phir unka jo convo

Neil ka akela pan

Mini understanding him.

Accha tha ..

Mini ko apne tarike se handle karna hai iss sher ko

Aur wild game jo hua

Bahut hi acche se likha

Morning wala convo accha tha

Neil sab kuch ho sakta hai lekin he shall never force himself on her

Finally mini ready hai name change kar ne ko chant ne mana liya kuch b kar ke

Precap mein crappy

Yaar ..ye eyebrow wali yahan b aagayi

Abh kya hoga ? billi sherni banegi ?

Ya MiNeil ke beech kuch mu hoga ?

Neil ne mini ko nahi bataya Guest ke baare mein

Mini ne shaadi se pehle poocha b tha

Neil babu ka parade honi chahiye

Ek doubt hai ...kya Mini course join karegi ?

Ya next year karegi ?

Kyun ki wild nashe wale game ke baad ..mini ka preggy hona pucca lag raha hai

Anjali🤗

Bahut hi acche se likha sab kuch 👏

zaalima🤗🤗🤗

missed your comments very much

i have said it so many times but i am saying it again that your comments are very entertaining and amazing.

Neil here is chant aadmi....bilkul bhi meethu nahi hai. ek number ka harami and kamina like you said.🤣🤣

bahut acche se samjha tumne neil ko🤣🤣

Mini apni bechari cute scared kitten hai sweet si...is sher ke chungal mein pahs gayi hai...kachha kha jayega ye use ek din🤣🤣☺️

440 vault cuurent usi ka ek trailer tha🤣🤣🤣 bechari mini se strip tease bhi karwa liye☺️🤣

aur Nb ko naukrani banane mein jo maza hai....anand hi anand🤣🤣🤣

neil jaisa bhi ho but aisi kabhi mini ko force nahi kar sakta na hi hurt kar sakta hai isiliye toh wo jaane ke liye itna bechain tha ki kya hua last night and he was satisfied only when mini assured him.

aur mini join kar legi college yaha par nashe wale game ka koi result nahi niklega🤣🤣🤣

Hii

I am trying to post new chapter since afternoon but i cant post it.

every time i press the update button a message comes up saying "Abusive language/slangs are not allowed" but i dont think there is any such word. First it had strong language but then I used * to write it then also i was not able to post it....then I changed the whole dialogues which i thought could b a problem but still i cant post it....i read the update again and again but now I couldnt find any objectionable dialogue or word in it then also i cant post it

please some help in this matter.

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Hii

I am trying to post new chapter since afternoon but i cant post it.

every time i press the update button a message comes up saying "Abusive language/slangs are not allowed" but i dont think there is any such word. First it had strong language but then I used * to write it then also i was not able to post it....then I changed the whole dialogues which i thought could b a problem but still i cant post it....i read the update again and again but now I couldnt find any objectionable dialogue or word in it then also i cant post it

please some help in this matter.

Ek last time try kar

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Ek last time try kar

kar liya yaar

itni bar kar chuki hoon mera dimag kharab ho raha hai...ab koi aisa word hoga bhi toh mujhe samajh nahi aa raha utni bar proof read kar liya maine

and worst part is....tumme se bhi kisi ko personal msg nahi kar sakti hoon ki mere liye proof read kar le..kyunki same abusive/offensive language ka msg aa raha hai i cant sent even pm

Tu mujhe IG pe bhej , mai post karke try karti hu& I can even tell you if something is offensive

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Tu mujhe IG pe bhej , mai post karke try karti hu& I can even tell you if something is offensive

IG? Instagram you mean

What your id