Kalma FF:: Teri Jannat me, ishq ki chaah part 4 updated pg 9 , 16-4-20 - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Itโ€™s awesome  ๐Ÿ˜ 

How beautifully you describe emotions.... I just love it....

Kalma is going to be together....

Waiting for next part.....

Thanks priya, 

Next part will be sweet as honey. Sure. But wait for it for a while. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Its very beautiful neera  simple and cute ! Pls do continue !!

Thank u titu. Thoda time lagega but it gonna be romantic ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Leela I want this to be beautiful so it will take time. ๐Ÿ˜‰wait for it and I will surely surprise you all this time. 

Ok I will wait

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 4 


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Next one week passed easily. Kalyani was in the biggest hospital of Mumbai. Her reports were okay. Her chances to live had gotten better with time. Not only doctors, but malhar's love was also responsible for her betterment. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

 

It's a sweet Monday morning. As usual our malhar rane was back in Kalyani room . All nurses were really pissed off from this malhar rane๐Ÿ˜ก. Malhar really took his pillow, clothes and basic necessities in Kalyani room. He spent most of his time with Kalyani only. They chattered every second. The only time he left her alone when nurses gave him ultimatum that relatives are not allowed in night๐Ÿค”. 


If this was in control of malhar rane, he would be with Kalyani even during her check up๐Ÿ˜†. 


Malhar :: Kalyani how was your sleep. 

Kalyani :: Mine was good but did you get good sleep๐Ÿ˜’. 

Malhar :: Why, anything special๐Ÿ˜ฒ. 

Kalyani :: Because you were coming to my dream again and again๐Ÿ˜ณ. 

Malhar :: Oh so I am in your dreams. So what I was doing in your dream. 

Kalyani :: You are laughing at me๐Ÿคฃ. 

Malhar :: Why would I ?? ๐Ÿค“

Kalyani :: You said I am a mad girl๐Ÿ˜ . 

Malhar :: So what's wrong in this๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰. 

Kalyani :: Aihh!! Malhar ji I will not talk to you. Don't be too much annoying. 

Malhar :: Kalyani you are a special treat to my life. How boring it would be without your twisted mental flavors๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š. 

Kalyani :: OK OK continue. I want to hear it๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™. 


Malhar giggled 


Malhar :: You are a crack head but I love you. I love this crazy girl๐Ÿ˜†. 


He hold her hand. 

They have a small eye contact. 



Sun zaalima mere

Saanu koi dar na

Ki samjhega zamaana

Tu vi si kamli

Main vi sa kamla

Ishqe da rog sayana

Ishqe da rog sayana..

Sun mere humsafar

Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

Malhar gave her a reassuring forehead kiss that no matter what he will protect her always. 

He left room for some other work .


In afternoon 


Malhar was again standing in her room๐Ÿค”. 


Kalyani :: Malhar ji what food you brought today๐Ÿ˜ณ. 

Malhar :: I know what you want but doctor strictly advised no chocolate for you๐Ÿ˜ก. 

Kalyani :: Malhar ji.๐Ÿ˜ง 

Malhar :: Hmm๐Ÿ˜

Kalyani :: please try to understand. I will get stressed out if I don't eat chocolate. My periods started today๐Ÿ˜จ. 

Malhar sat before her and saw her face with a stern look๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜’. 

Malhar :: Oh yeah. What a theory. I want to know more. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kalyani :: Malhar ji you know chocolate are must for me. Once my doctor uncle said my metabolism will decrease if I don't eat chocolate regularly๐Ÿค“. 

Malhar :: Oh wow. Tell me more ๐Ÿ˜


Malhar was expressing shocking face. 

Malhar in mind :: From which university did that doctor get agree. 


Kalyani :: And you know I am not having chocolates from last 10 days. I am feeling very sick. Just bring me only 5 Kit Kat. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Malhar :: Ya ya sure, let me ask doctor uncle to check your BMR ( Basal metabolic rate) first  .๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ˜†


Kalyani was literally just gritting her teeth.๐Ÿ˜ก

 

Kalyani :: Malhar ji don't tell this doctor. He is not a Body expert, he is just a oncologist. ๐Ÿ˜›

Malhar :: Kalyani now it's too much. Don't say anything rubbish. You know that doctor is working hard for you. ๐Ÿ˜ก

Kalyani :: Sorry malhar ji. I am just craving for sweets. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Malhar :: OK if you want to eat sweet, I will bring pumpkin soup for you. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Kalyani :: Malhar ji how could that be sweet. 

Malhar :: Don't worry about sweetness. It would be tasty as heaven. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Kalyani :: OK I trust you. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„


Shinning sparking up eyes of her was beaming with happiness. 


Malhar :: Kalyani, now eat this. ๐Ÿ˜Š


Her lunch was specially prepared by malhar. Lunch was comprised of smoothie of Spinach, banana, ginger, cucumber and apple  , boiled eggs, mix flour roti and dal. 


Malhar wanted to take up this as a chance to change bad eating habits of her. She was relying more on junk food due to working stress. She had gained weight in last 6 months. Malhar always love her whatever her shape. But malhar wanted her to be fit back. 


Kalyani ate the food. 


Kalyani :: Malhar ji I am sleeping now. I am feeling so full. Good night. No no!!! ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ด

Good afternoon. 

Malhar :: OK you sleep. I will talk to that spider in that corner. He is a good man. He is good in web designing. ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคฃ


Kalyani giggled and sighed. 


Kalyani :: Good PJ . Say straight na that you will end up being bored .๐Ÿ˜ณ

Malhar :: You know I am just surviving in this hospital because of you. ๐Ÿ˜’

Kalyani :: Malhar ji sleep with me. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Malhar :: What a timing Mrs rane .๐Ÿค—

He clapped. 

You wanted to do sex right now. In hospital. I want our first consummation to be special. In this hospital it is sounding weird. I don't appreciate it. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜†

Kalyani :: You hasty person!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜”

I want you to just sleep with me on this bed. That's it. 

Malhar :: Oh I get it now. But isn't it will be small for two person. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Kalyani :: You don't need to worry. Just hug me and we will sleep comfortably. ๐Ÿ˜›


Malhar landed up on bed and they slept comfortably .

Kalyani was in arms of malhar. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—

It was very cute. Sleeping peacefully holding each other. 

After an hour, doctor was coming in their room to check Kalyani. But they are enjoying their romantic sleep .


Doctor :: Nurse, please tell Mr Malhar to leave patient right now. ๐Ÿ˜ก

Nurse :: Yes doctor.

Nurse : Malhar sir ! malhar sir ! wake up. It's not your honeymoon room๐Ÿคฃ. It's a hospital bed. 

Kalyani :: Go out. It's our room. It's my private room. (in sleep) ๐Ÿคช


She started shaking Kalyani hand while doc was shaking malhar in anger. 


Nurse :: Mrs it's not your private property. ๐Ÿคข


Malhar fell down 


Malhar :: Ouch, it's hurts. 


Kalyani also get shocked and her eyes sleep get distracted. 


Kalyani :: What the hell. We can't even sleep peacefully in this hospital. ๐Ÿ˜ก


She started complaining doctor .


Kalyani :: Doctor uncle, sleep is so much important for a serious patient like me. This nurse is so irresponsible. ๐Ÿ˜ก

Nurse :: Mrs I am not irresponsible. It's you who chooses to do shit things in hospital rooms. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ณ


Kalyani got irritated. 

She pointed out her finger towards nurse. 


Kalyani :: How rubbish can you talk. You know my husband is ACP. Respect me. Doctor uncle plz teach her something. She is so bad mouthed. ๐Ÿคฃ


Doctor was really pissed off from her and malhar. Now her rubbish conservation was burning his calm. 


While malhar was still figuring out what was happening. 


Doctor :: Shut up Kalyani rane. It's not your room nor it's your husband police station. It's a hospital with decency. You need to apologize immediately. ๐Ÿ˜ก


Malhar stood again on his feet. 


Malhar :: Sorry sir, I will explain you. Kalyani apologize right now. 

Kalyani :: But !!!?๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Malhar :: Do what I said 

Kalyani :: Sorry ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Malhar :: Kalyani in complete sentences. 

Kalyani :: I am sorry for my rude behavior. I will not repeat it. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Nurse :: Better 


Malhar went outside the room with doctor. 


Malhar :: Sir sorry for chaos happened in room. Kalyani is having her period right now and she had terrible mood swings and serious cramps. 

Doctor :: I am just not taking any action on her. Please tell her to behave properly. 

Malhar :: Thank you sir. 


Malhar went back to her and doctor leave. 


Kalyani :: Malhar ji sorry, just because of me you feel so embarrassed. 

Malhar :: It's OK, I know you have terrible mood swings in your periods. 

Kalyani :: Malhar ji plz a little more cuddle. I will not shout out on anyone 

Malhar :: OK Kalyani. 


They cuddled up. 


In night malhar brought little chocolate flavored protein bars. 


Malhar :: Kalyani eat this bar. It's chocolate flavored.. 

Kalyani :: Thank you malhar ji. ๐Ÿ˜ณ


She ate chocolate like a small kid. 


Malhar :: Kalyani, I want to also eat chocolate. 

Kalyani :: But malhar ji all chocolates are finished. ๐Ÿ˜•


She was licking her fingers. 


Malhar :: There is a way. ๐Ÿ˜Ž


Malhar went near to her. Just a little distance away from her face. 

He stares in her eyes naughtily. And start licking her fingers. โ˜บ๏ธ

Malhar start nudging her nape. โ˜บ๏ธ

Kalyani giggled. 

Then he start sucking her lips. A sweet smooch. 

His longing tongue tasted her fluids .โ˜บ๏ธ

They parted. 

Kalyani was having a satisfying smile. ๐Ÿ˜Š


Kalyani :: Oh so it's the way. 

Malhar :: Yes it's the way. Any problems. 

Kalyani :: No sir. 

She saluted him mockingly. ๐Ÿ˜†


Malhar then lifted her in his arms and played a song in mobile. 

He slowly moved in the soothing lyrics of song. 

Just watching in each others eyes. โญ๏ธ

Never wanted this song to end. ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Malhar :: Kalyani you know something. I am planning a tour after you got discharged. 

She start jumping on bed. 

Kalyani :: where ??? I am so bored. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Malhar :: You Pagli. I should not tell you. Let it be a surprise only. Good bye. Good night. 

Kalyani :: But malhar ji. 


He left the room. 


She was just left behind with a pouty face. 


Around 1400-1500 words


(Note - I know it's not a long chapter but you know writers block. So I am just posting a short chapter.

Like and comment are required for next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

By the way thanks for 15 likes on previous part๐Ÿค—.

Guys I want some suggestions. Do comment or PM me. 

Next part will be up by Sunday or Monday. Depends on response. 

I hope I fulfilled your hunger of kalma ๐Ÿ˜†)

Good bye. 

Neera 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sweet romance, it was good to read. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very cute

Thanks for writing

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha1975

Sweet romance, it was good to read. 

Thank you rekha ji  . 

It's just their talk. 

But hamesha POV nahi chalta na ๐Ÿ˜ต

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: leelavathi845

Very cute

Thanks for writing

I kept my promise 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Haa

Please update next part soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww

so cute

loved how Malhar ji took care of Kalyani

Kalyani's cute anticsโค๏ธ

Their romance โค๏ธ

thanks for update