Thank you for the PM!! Very exciting read till now and free flowing... The USP of the story is Ruhi, her struggle and craving to indulge in maternal affection was so poignantly written...
Also, the bond between MiMi and Ruhi is so warming... I have read another story where you presented MiMi love in a very engaging and entertaining manner.. Even in this work, the duo were relentless in taking care of Ishita and Ruhi..It’s not like they were acting as the guardians of Ruhi but they treated Ruhi as her daughter, the care, concern and control for Ruhi was very evident..
Also Ishita Ruhi’s bond was overwhelming... The cute banters of Ruhi, hoping that her mother would wake up one day from her slumber and shower umpteen love on her.. Infact, the idea of blinking eyes by Ishita post her recovery was so convincing..
Coming to IshRa, perhaps there are Ishita and Raman... They were separated or forced to.. By reading the prologue, it seems Raman’s ears were filled against Ishita and a misunderstanding was deliberately created between the couple... The scar was so deep that Raman is not even willing to take her name whereas Ishita couldn’t get over him.. In a way it was Raman who was partly responsible for the revival of Ishita... That temple conversation between Ruhi and Raman is a testimony of the fact that blood is always thicker than water...
Perhaps, Ishita’s mother could have plotted something against the couple, owing to the difference of status between the couple as Ishita severed ties with her family....
Thank u srini
Glad u read this story
Yup ruhi is usp of this story..
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