OMFG YOU ADDED COMMANDO!!! You know I watched the third movie for them lol. Update soon real curious how Commando/CBI/ETF fits in.
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OMFG YOU ADDED COMMANDO!!! You know I watched the third movie for them lol. Update soon real curious how Commando/CBI/ETF fits in.
Interesting character sketch dear eagerly waiting for updates and if possible plz pm whenever you give updates
Interesting .will be waiting for the story
Thank you so much for commenting.
I have begun writing the first chapter. I will be posting it soon.
Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil
OMFG YOU ADDED COMMANDO!!! You know I watched the third movie for them lol. Update soon real curious how Commando/CBI/ETF fits in.
Yes! Me too!
I mean I do like the Commando film series but Karan-Bhavna, as a couple was the major reason for watching the movie.
I will be updating soon and yes, the Commando, CBI, and ETF will fit in together but how that is the story. I hope you'll enjoy it.
Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal
Interesting character sketch dear eagerly waiting for updates and if possible plz pm whenever you give updates
Thank you. I am glad that you liked the character sketch.
I will surely PM you, just send me a friend's request here.
awesome update
continue soon
Wow shonali ne her ek character ko dono minister ke samne brilliantly show kiya hai isme serial khotte sikkey ke character ko bhi liya gaya hai crime aur criminals kis tarah se humari kamjor system pranaali ka fayda uthate hai well described impressive update dear eagerly waiting for nxt one question yeh love story hogi ya fir cases dikhaye jayenge thodi bahut luv story ke saath
Fantastic update
Love it
Continue soon
Please pm me
Hi.. so rest of the story parts will be updated here.. Thank you
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