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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Hii Sujz🤗 once again a beautiful update..

The jealous and caring Ani both are too cutee.. 🤗

Ye Binoy humesha galat time pe galat baat bolta haii😡 glad Bondita gave it back to him..

Last part was perfectly portrayed.. And Ani has came to help Boni😳

Waiting how it will unfold Post soon..


Thank you Apsana, for your overwhelming comment. It surely means a lot!❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

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i just read all chapters in one go👍🏼

totally loved it dr❤️..i have no words👏👏..

and you are an amazing writer🤗..

i felt every emotions u are tried to emote in this ss😳..it was great feeling while reading the story..it has everything love,jealous n finally social msg waiting for final part..

@bold Words like those really make me feel happy. Thank You!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sorry for such a late update, so much happened in between. My PC was down and then I got it all repaired just yesterday (very happy about that cause my PC is almost my soulmate).


This chapter I really might get jhoota, chappal, tamatar everything and I won't complain. Keep them coming. I struggled to write it!


Hope someone enjoys.😳

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CHAPTER 7


As much Bondita was shocked, Aniruddh was focused on the injustice happening. Even he got a dejavu of what happened a decade ago. Bondita’s eyes were fixed on her husband who had held her engulfed in his arms giving her support in the same way he had been with her in all these years.

Aniruddh looked back at her, staring deep into her eyes caused even his orbs to tear up. But this wasn’t the moment to be vulnerable, this was the moment of action. Aniruddh attacked the stage with the bamboo stick as Bondita in his arms took the lead.

“Yeh nahi hoga! Nahi hone denge hum!” declared Aniruddh as he moved away from Bondita while she was still standing with the bamboo stick. Bondita moved closer to Aniruddh. Aniruddh turned to approach the altar to take care of the old hag while he saw someone coming to attack Bondita from behind. Aniruddh held her wrists and swung her behind him, while he snatched her bamboo stick from her and attacked the man back.

“Aapki himmat kaisi hui Meri Bon-Biwi par waar karne ka!” asked Aniruddh in rage. Bondita nudged him and he turned to hear her whisper; “This is not the time to care about that Aniruddh Babu.

Aniruddh moved to the altar to do the same what he did with the old man who wanted to marry his wife while Bondita moved towards the kid and took the child in her arms, safe from the evil hands of people who loathed girls in name of marriage.

“Tum hamari amanat ko humse chheen nahi sakte! Aur karna kya chahte ho tum log?” asked a man from the crowd.

Bondita replied hastily; “Yeh koi cheez ya amanat nahi hai kisi ki! Yeh ek Bacchi hai, ek ladki hai, ek insaan hai. Aur iss umar me shaadi? Use padne do, udne do! Woh kisi ki amanat nahi hai, woh khud apni hai, aur apne liye hi jeeyegi yeh!”

“Kyu padna hai ladkiyo ko?” asked an old woman.

“Yeh Uska Adhikar Hai..!!” Bondita yelled at the top of her noise. Aniruddh turned to take a look at her. He saw the fire in her eyes and face. He closed her eyes in satisfaction as he remembered the words he said that night which changed his life.


“Arre kya pata kal yeh bacchi khud roshni bane, aur na sirf apni, balki aneko aurato ke jeevan me andhkaar ko dur kare! Aaj jo choti si chamak hai iske chehre par, kal woh suraj banke kitno ko raah dikha sakti hai, yeh aaj se jan sakte hai kya aap log?”


He was right. The little glow in her face had turned into a Woman who was in her full glory showing the path of progression and renaissance to so many ladies. He was so damn proud of her today. He had always been proud of her, but today beyond being a mentor or teacher, Aniruddh Roy Chowdhary was so damn proud of his wife, Bondita Roy Chowdhary.

She was asking for her right to all the people there, and his promises were being fulfilled, his oath was being fulfilled. Bondita was fulfilling it, and taking a look at her face filled his heart with more and more love for her each moment.


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The Renaissance Society had took the girl to their residence where so many girls were enrolled by Aniruddh and Bondita and society changers like them and they were educated to become the promises of tomorrow. Aniruddh and Bondita had returned home and as they reached Bondita rushed to her room. Aniruddh couldn’t help but follow. He needed to confront with his wife and clear the fog between them.

Bondita was standing near the wardrobe taking out her clothes. It was nearing evening, the fight with those orthodox morons had really cost them a day and both of them were tired, but beyond the physical tiredness they had, both were mentally tired. One in the guilt of ruining a person’s life whom she couldn’t ever thank enough, and one being restless at the thought of his wife flinching away from him.

“Bondita!” Aniruddh called out and Bondita instantly turned to see Aniruddh standing at the doorstep of their room. Aniruddh instantly traced the silver lining of tears in her eyes and it pricked his heart.

“Kuch, chahiye aapko Aniruddh Babu?” asked Bondita, fluttering her eyelashes, trying to keep the tears inside, but it spilled all over, bathing her cheeks. Aniruddh instinctively walked upto her and cupped her cheeks. Bondita gasped at the sudden contact.

Aniruddh almost in an inaudible tone, asked her; “Tum theek ho? You fine?” Bondita turned her head to her side feeling his breath fanning over her face. She nodded reluctantly.

His wife has always been a bad liar.

“Bondita...” He called out, turning her face to him holding her chin. “You have to tell me today, what’s bothering you. What-you said you heard something. What did you hear Bondita? Tell me, what did you hear? I can’t bear all this anymore. Don’t hurt yourself like this, tell me... please?” Aniruddh almost begged to her, his eyes announcing how desperate he was to hold her close, to lock her in his arms forever, keeping her away from every possible danger or even the shadow of it.

“Aniruddh Babu... I,”- “Shh.. Wait.” Aniruddh interrupted as he lead her to the bed and settled her in the bed and sat beside. “Now tell me.” He said.

Bondita shifted from her position a bit before starting; “I, I had heard your conversation with Saudamini Didi that day. How you... you both loved each other but couldn’t marry because I-“ Bondita took a sharp breath. Aniruddh opened his mouth to say something but Bondita gestured him to be quiet and he couldn’t be nothing but shocked to the core. “Please don’t interrupt me, Aniruddh Babu. Let me speak. I heard that day, when I arrived. How you both wanted to marry but you had to break her heart because, because of... me coming in between you both.” She sobbed before continuing. “Trust me Aniruddh Babu, I never had that intention and you know that. I didn’t even knew about this until 3 days ago. And it hurts, it really hurts to know you snatched away the happiness of that very person because of whom you are alive now.” Bondita slapped her hands against her forehead; “What a blunder did I do! But Aniruddh Babu, now as I am aware of it, let me tell you, I can’t keep you caged like this. I know both of you love each other and, and I don’t want to be an obstacle in between you. I have did enough. Remember how I took the place of Saudamini Didi on that swing on the night of our marriage, I couldn’t decipher why you were angry but now I can. If I knew, I would have never done that.”

Aniruddh flinched at the mention of that incident. He was so guilty about shouting at a child like that. Poor girl didn’t knew anything. But how come Bondita perceived everything in a completely different angle? He wanted to say so many things but he couldn’t because of Bondita’s request to stay quiet until she finished. His heart broke again and again, seeing her so vulnerable, so hurt, so broken.

“So many things I couldn’t decipher then, I can now and now I understand what an idiot I was. I won’t blame myself much because I was a kid back then. But now, I am an adult, I am well aware. I can’t let the man I lo-uh-admire so much, to be hurt and live a life which he doesn’t want. I am letting you free, Aniruddh Babu. You do not have to feel entitled to me or your responsibilities. You can choose the life you want.” Bondita finished, wiping her tears which started flowing furiously now. Aniruddh’s eyes softened at the sight but then he put on a cold face and crossed his arms across his chest.

“Oh Really? You let me choose the life I want?” He asked, raising an eyebrow.

Bondita nodded lightly looking down. Aniruddh could understand how much she despise his idea but then this selfless woman who calls herself his wife, just couldn’t force herself on him. Suddenly her head shot up and Aniruddh looked at her questioningly.

“Uske pehle me aapse kuch kehna chahti hu Anirru- Pati Babu.” Aniruddh scrunched his eyebrows, confused of how she called her Pati Babu when she refrained from calling it the whole day. “Ek aakhri baar aapko...” her voice faltered as she continued. “aapko pati babu bula lun me.” She said looking down causing more tears to fall down. But she had to do this. She had to confess to him, she couldn’t just leave letting all her emotions to be bottled up inside. Being his wife for ten long years, she had this right, being Bondita Roy Chowdhary for a decade and more, gave her that right. She knew that and she would use it.

“I want to say this to you Pati Babu. Otherwise I won’t be able to live in peace.” She said as her voice shivered. She knew either way she won’t be able to live in peace without him. But she continued; “I know, I know I would have been just a picture with a garland on it if not for you! If you hadn’t... I thank you, for that. You... had always been my side, from the past ten years, you always took care of my needs. You kept me happy, you have me everything I wanted, I.. I thank you for that. You taught me so many values, lessons and instilled a powerful mindset in me, you really gave me life lessons, Pati Babu, Thank you for that.” Bondita said with a faint smile. Aniruddh just looked at her with the same confused face. Bondita wiped her tears away before taking his hands in hers and keeping it close to her chest, to herself as she continued;

“But you taught me something precious than all that Pati Babu. All the other things you taught me, anyone could have! It wouldn’t be the way you did, but they could. But this, only you could have taught me, only you.” Bondita said, whispering the last word.

“What?” asked Aniruddh.

Bondita replied, “Pyaar. Love, Pati Babu. You taught me how to love, whom to love. If not for you, I would have never experienced that aesthetic feeling, which makes your heartbeats erratic, which causes butterflies in your stomach, when your smile is depended on their smile and happiness. If not for you...” she nodded her head negatively.

“You...” Aniruddh trailed off. Bondita continued; “As much as I hate to admit this, I have to. I cannot leave without admitting this. I have came to love you, Pati Babu. I fell for you, hard and hopeless. I love you, Pati Babu.”

“You..?” Aniruddh asked in disbelief.

Bondita placed a chaste kiss on his knuckles, as his hands were still in hers and she whispered keeping her face against his hands; “Bondita Roy Chowdhary loves you, Aniruddh Roy Chowdhary.” Aniruddh couldn’t believe his ears. This woman, whom he madly love just confessed she loves him too was ready to leave him for his happiness. His heart jumped around at the thought of her reciprocating his feelings.

“But I can’t tie you in this bond where you-“ He didn’t let Bondita finish, instead he took her little form into his arms, and he hid her face in her nape, taking her fragrance in, taking whole of her in, feeling her, feeling his wife, the woman who loved him like anything.


A crazy girl who lived between his heartbeats.


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How was it people who lives in between my heartbeats? <3

I personally love the last line, I had heard it somewhere I guess.


This story will end in 3-4 updates maximum. So brace up to say bye guys! 😆


Tell me in the COMMENTS how was the update. Please Vote and Do do do do COMMENT cause it really really means a lot..!! It inspires me to write more.


Thanks for all those amazingly sweet comments you guys left in last update, it really means the world to me.❤️


Now I am gonna sleep, you guys - READ, VOTE, COMMENT, then sleep😳


Love,

Sujz!❤️

Edited by Sujz - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Behen aaja gale lagja 🤗

what an update 👏this one is the best it had all emotions and you beautifully penned 👏👍🏼

Just love the way you included their past happenings and how she is joining the dots with it and his anger part 😆 loved it ⭐️

Finally she poured her heart out and confessed her love towards ani...Bravo girl bravo 👏cant wait for ani's confession now 😳

The last line had all my heart 💓

A crazy girl who lived between his heartbeats

Awww it reminded me of phrases

"She just wants to be the girl he likes ,and to be the one who Makes his heartbeat crazy and for him to say that she is the one for his life and she is his wife" ❤️

Now can't wait for the next part smiley42 his reaction smiley9


I'm sad that chahat has only 3 to 4 chaptersmiley19 I don't want this to end soon sujsmiley19

Edited by --Lalz-- - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey it's the first thing I read in the morning,as soon as I opened the forum,... Amazing,superb beautifully penned each and every emotion ..It's just too sweet..After eagerly waiting for this update..U just written it fantastically..Bravo.. it makes us wanting for more as this part ends.. waiting for next update..Keep it up

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