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Thnx for pm dear.

Update was amazing. Waiting for more updates eargly.

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Part 8

sorry for late comment

big and beautiful update!

arjun saved sakshi but got shot

thanks god he is out of danger

sam worried about him and ayesha cared him

good that he can kept promise given to mayank

that mayank removing arjun's blood from sakshi's parting was touchy scene and dialogue of sakshi was wow!

liza taking care of shree

sakshi taking care of arjun was cute and that khichadi scene was hillarious

both relationship is developing to good friends but what will happen when sakshi know the truth about roshini! she will be heartbroken! but she should know the truth then she can decide herself!

mr. & mrs rawte at sakshi's place and all relation are mending in good way

Hey dear

I am glad that you liked it

Please don't say sorry...

Thank you so much

Yes he saved Sakshi

In process of saving he got injured but he is fine.

Yes Arjun is important for him.

Yes he kept promise

that mayank removing arjun's blood from sakshi's parting was touchy scene and dialogue of sakshi was wow! Thank you😊😃

sakshi taking care of arjun was cute and that khichadi scene was hillarious🤣

Once again thank you so much

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Super update

Update soon

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Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

Part 9

Sorry for late comment

Superb update!

So sakshi going to cook matar paneer for arjun

Karvachauth celebration

Poor ayesha missing arrav

Sam like good friend make ayesha forget her sadness and feellight and smile

But is it only friendship or he started feeling more thanthat for her?

Wow sakshi put mehndi and arjun selected necklace for herwhich is difficult task for him

Both samjun remember roshini ! both feeling sad

Sakshi realilsed sadness in their eyes

But why arjun told it before karvachauth. He could have toldit after that! But he don’t love sakshi and he only loves roshini so he thoughtit is right time. Might be sakshi would not like to keep vrat for him.

Sakshi is heartbroken!

Last scene written very perfectly describing sakshi’s state

Hey dear

Thank you so much

I am glad that you liked it

No need to say sorry

Yes Arjun's fev Matar paneer

Yes Aisha missing Aarav

Ab yeh to Sameer hi jaane ki ye sirf friendship hai yaa usse jyada...

arjun selected necklace for herwhich is difficult task for him🤣😆

Truth aaj nahi toh kal pata chalna hi hai yeh soch kar Arjun ne sach bata diya..

Yes Sakshi's heart broken into million pieces.

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Part 10

Sorry for late comment.

Awesome part

Sakshi’s shock, her state very well written

she is hurt that ayesha also din’t told her about roshini

poor ayesha feeling guity for not telling it

good sam supported her and confronted arjun in good way

and his question to the point that he came for divorce thenwhy he is feeling bad now

loved scene in sakshi’s room she trying to wash away her allfeelings for arjun but sadly couldn’t

loved this answer of sakshi she is referring her love forarjun

SAKSHI: Maasakabhi kabhi hume lagta hai ki saalon se chadha hua rang gehra hai lakin aisahota nahi hai...

All karvachauth celebration description is beautifully wovenwith sakshi’s sad feelings

Ayesha still feeling guilty

All feeling difference in sakshi

Loved shreeza banter and that post mortem of bridegroomreminded me show scene

sakshi ignoring arjun and he is feeling bad for it! But why ?he told that he loves roshni only and can’t love other than her!

Enjoying sameer’s taunting arjun! He deserves it and arjunirritate more fir this akdu acp will not accept that he is started feeling forsakshi

Good that sakshi not giving him chance to give sargi orbreak her fast and her answer was also right

SAKSHI (bitstrongly): Humne yeh vrat apke liye nahi humareparivaar ke liye rakha tha... Apne dekha naa kitne mehmaan aaye the...Agar humvrat na rakhte toh insab ko kya javab dete... Sab humari iss karva chauth keliye excited the aur hum nahi chahte the ki humari wajah se Maasa aur Bhabhisaki karva chauth bigad jaaye aur rahi baat humara khud vrat todne ki toh itnesaalon se hum khud hi apna vrat todte aaye hai... phir hum toh apki baat bhirakh rahe the... Apne kal kaha tha naa ki Aap hume patni ka haq nahi de saktetoh phir Aap kon hote hai humara vrat todne wale?

Loved arakshi scene and kiss.

Arjun’s answer was also correct but his silence to sakshi’squestion that she can bring happiness to his life again break sakshi’sheart. He is not recognizing hisfeelings for sakshi hope he will soon

Family members planning their gauna but sakshi told roshinitruth to them

Its written very well family in shock and mr & mrs. Rawte’sside!

Good that they understand and accepted sakshi’s decision topart way from arjun

She is right child marriage is illegal then no need todivorce.

But why this separation pricking arjun’s heart

Atlast sakshi forgave ayesha

Her bonding with team was beautiful

Parting scene was emotional

Sakshi taking some mission and going to delhi!

Liked her decision and her family support to her!

Loved the way sakshi handled situation bravely and strongly

But love for arjun can’t be removed from her heart hope theywill meet again and this time with more strong sakshi

Loved whole update written beautifully with all scenes canbe imagined happening infront of eyes!

Hey Dear

Thank you so much

I am glad that you liked it

No need to say sorry

Yes she is hurt bcoz Aisha is her Sister and usne hi itni badi baat chupayi

Yaa Aisha feel guilt...Vo Apni sister ko tute hue nahi dekh sakti thi iss liye ussne ye baat nahi batayi.

Loved shreeza banter and that post mortem of bridegroomreminded me show scene..ya i know🤣

Sakshi's ignoring hurt him bcoz he feels for her but he didn't know this.

Kya hai na Humare ACP Akdu Rawte mein kuch jyada hi Ego bara pada hai isse liye accept hi nahi kar rahe hai.😭

Yes... Ab jab Arjun ne Sakshi ko apni Wife hone ka haq hi chin liya toh vrat todne ka haq kese mil sakta hai unhe

Loved arakshi scene and kiss.☺️

Yaa...Agar Arjun silence nahi rehte aur usski feelings ko samjte toh bat kuch aur hi hoti... sayad Sakshi unhe ek aur moka de deti but he's silence break Sakshi's heart.

Yes Family are in shocked and they respect Sakshi's decision

Bcoz he feels for her

Yaa.. Sakshi apni Sister se jyada time tak upset nahi reh sakti

Yes they will meet soon and this time Sakshi more stronger

Once Again Thank You so much this big comment

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Omg this update look like train such long naa


Sakshi is total broken it's except thing 💔💔

She recall her memories with Arjun this scene was so touchy 😢😢

And after she total ignore Arjun

At least Arjun not tolerate Sakshi ignore he lately Angry on sakshi 🙄

he deserve her ignore

But sakshi ignore ayesha also poor girl

Arakshi dance was nice

Liza and shree part

Arakshi close scene was so beautiful But in this situation make not enjoyed fully ☺️💔

Theri conversation 😌

Sakshi reveal the secret to all

Her family so angry on Arjun mayank beta Arjun of course he do

Really i loved it sakshi her self respect her decision the way she handle that critical situation not only situation she handle herself too

Arjun want to see sakshi one last time but not give chance


Arakshi separated awe 😭😭😭

Sakshi going to Delhi for mission sakshi mentally very brave girl ❤

Hope Arakshi meet soon 🤞

Omg ayesha really thanks a lot for your such long and beautiful emotional update I enjoyed it

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Originally posted by: Arakshi234

Omg this update look like train such long naa


Sakshi is total broken it's except thing 💔💔

She recall her memories with Arjun this scene was so touchy 😢😢

And after she total ignore Arjun

At least Arjun not tolerate Sakshi ignore he lately Angry on sakshi 🙄

he deserve her ignore

But sakshi ignore ayesha also poor girl

Arakshi dance was nice

Liza and shree part

Arakshi close scene was so beautiful But in this situation make not enjoyed fully ☺️💔

Theri conversation 😌

Sakshi reveal the secret to all

Her family so angry on Arjun mayank beta Arjun of course he do

Really i loved it sakshi her self respect her decision the way she handle that critical situation not only situation she handle herself too

Arjun want to see sakshi one last time but not give chance


Arakshi separated awe 😭😭😭

Sakshi going to Delhi for mission sakshi mentally very brave girl ❤

Hope Arakshi meet soon 🤞

Omg ayesha really thanks a lot for your such long and beautiful emotional update I enjoyed it

Hey dear

Thank you so much pari

Glad you like it

Yes it's excepting... Sakshi's heart break into million pieces

Yes she recall her memory and she ignore him and he deserve it.

Yes he is angry on sakshi bcoz unka male ego jo hurt hua ha.🤔

Yaa she also ignore Aisha bcoz truth pata hone k baad bhi Aisha ne usse kuch nahi kaha

Arakshi dance was nice 😊

Liza and shree part 🤣

Yaa agar situation kuch hota toh baat hi kuch aur hoti

Yes Mayank apni sister se bohat pyaar karta hai... aur jab Arjun ka truth pata chala he is angry on him and beat him.

Soon Arakshi meets

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Hi Friends

Happy Chocolate day

Here i give next update part 11

Hope you all enjoy

Part-11

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Waqut! Waqut vo hai jisko samjna bohat mushqil hai. Haan... Namumkin bhi nahi hai lakin waqut ko bhi waqut rehte samjna padta hai... Hume humesha aisa ehsaas hota hai ki waqut humare sath hai lakin aisa hota nahi hai... jab tak hum sacchai samj paate hai utne mein waqut nayi karvat le chuka hota hai... waqut humesha humare sath khel khelta rehta hai. Jo iss khel ko samj jaata hai usko yeh dhyan rakhne ki zaroorat hai ki vo waqut ke sath chale aur apna har kadam sambhal ke rakhe aur jo iss khel ko nahi samj paata vo toh waise hi apni Zindagi ka maksad kho chuka hota hai. waqut agar Zindagi ka rukh badalta hai toh wahi nayi Zindagi ki umeed bhi deta hai... agar ghaav deta hai toh uspe marham bhi lagata hai. Waqut ko nikalte der nahi lagti.

Arjun aur sakshi apni apni life mein busy hai. Sakshi is on mission. Uska zyadatar samay mission mein hi jaa raha tha. She learnt so many new things. She is fighting with each and every situation bravely. No doubt waqut ne usko badal diya hai lakin uske dil pe lage ghaav aaj bhi kahi naa kahi usse Dard de rahe the...

(Song is playing in background)

Teri yaad mai pagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage yeh na sota hai
Aksar tanayhee mai tujhe pukare, na zor dil pe chale
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare

Iss aur kehne ko toh Arjun apni life mein busy ho chuke the lakin unke ankahe anjaane ehsaas unke dil aur dimag pe kabza kar ke bethe the... laakh koshish karne par bhi unka dil kahi naa kahi sakshi ki baat pe aake ruk raha tha.

Teri yaad mai pagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage yeh na sota hai
Aksar tanayhee mai tujhe pukare, na zor dil pe chale
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare

Roshni ke jaane ke baad Arjun acche se jeena aur hasna bhul gaye the lakin sakshi se alag hone ke baad his condition become worst. He become more rebellious and short tempered. His behaviour was very rude and bad. He was start scolding his teammates on small mistakes or sometime there wasn’t any reason for scolding. Team is aware about his restlessness but they did not dare to talk with him about Sakshi as Sakshi’s name was making him more furious and mad. After coming from Rajasthan he changed completely. He starts doing fight with sameer too. He avoids staying at home and trying to engross himself in work. Reason behind all this is his feelings. Vo Sakshi ko bhul nahi paa rahe the... sirf 15-20 din ki hi mulaqaat thi lakin uss mein itna kuch ho chuka tha ki jisko bhulna unke liye possible nahi ho raha tha. He is angry with himself ki vo kyun sakshi ko bhul nahi paa rahe... ek pal mein vo sakshi ke saath hue unke har romantic and close moments ko yaad karte toh agle pal Sakshi ki Naa, uska gussa aur uski ignorance unko gussa dilaati... He is confused with his own self. Somehow Sakshi’s ignorance and her “No” are hurting his male ego, while other side his and sakshi’s romantic encounters are igniting feelings in him.

Ab jaane hum, yeh pyaar kya hai, dard e jigar
Mushqil badha hai, sunta nahi kehna koi bhi
Dil bekhabar, zid pe aada hai
Samjaun kaise usse jaane jaa
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare

One more reason behind his anger is ki pehle unke saath sirf aur sirf Roshni ki yaadein thi lakin ab waha sakshi ki yaadein hai. Vo almost every time Sakshi ke baare mein hi soch rahe the... he even try to contact her but unhe koi bhi information nahi mili.

This side Sakshi ke dil mein basa vo pyaar aur uss pyaar ke adhoore rehne ka dard uss ki aankho mein aaj bhi aansu le aata hai. She is bubbly chirpy and full of life from outside but from inside she is broken. Her heart is still crying. Arjun’s words and memories everyday pricked her badly. His words still echoing in her ears...Some romantic encounters keep flashing in front of her eye. She is trying her best to ignore those memories but she can’t.

Har aaina toota lage hai, sach bhi hume jootha bhi lage hai
Jaane kaha hum aa gaye hai, saara jaha rootha lage hai
Kya dard dil ne diya kya kahe
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare

6 mahine beet chuke the... naa sakshi Arjun ko bhul paa rahi thi naa Arjun sakshi ko. Dur rehte hue bhi aur har rishta todne ke baad bhi dono ke dil dimag mein ekdusre ka khayal tha.

Teri yaad mai pagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage yeh na sota hai
Aksar tanayhee mai tujhe pukare, na zor dil pe chale
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare, hum to dil se haare

[AFTER 6 MONTHS]

[ARJUN’S ROOM]

Arjun is very angry and he threw his phone on bed. Sameer comes there and saw it. He nods in negative and goes near him.

SAMEER: Kya hua? Aaj bhi sakshi ke baare mein pata nahi chala?

Arjun looked at him and give hard look.

ARJUN: Sakshi! Uske baare mein pata kar ke mein kya karunga? Tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai sameer

SAMEER: Right mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai

ARJUN: Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Kya chahiye?

SAMEER: well pehle ki tarah saath beth kar baatein karna toh tum bhul hi chuke ho so uss liye toh aa nahi sakta... Mujhe file chahiye thi aaj ke case ki

Arjun goes near his study table, picked the file and give it to sameer. Sameer bahar jaane ke liye turn lete hai but ruk kar wapas Arjun ko dekhte hai.

SAMEER: Arjun bandh kar do usse dhundhna... usne apne aap tak pohchne ka koi clue nahi Choda hai, even Aisha ko bhi nahi pata hai ki sakshi kaha hai...aur mujhe bhi lagta hai ki hume usse uski tarah se jeene dena chahiye... kya karoge usse dhundh ke tum? Koi matlab nahi hai usko dhundh ne ka... hum logon ne usse bohat kuch chin liya hai Arjun ab hume usse dur rehna chahiye...

Saying this he went out from room. Arjun is thinks about what sameer said. He makes fist and banged on table.

[NEXT DAY]

[ETF OFFICE]

Shree and chotu are sitting in living room and sipping their coffee. Arjun is in his cabin. Sameer is not in office. Liza comes there with sad face. Chotu and Shree looked at her.

CHOTU: Liza kya hua? Itni sad kyun hai?

SHREE: SYS mila?

Liza sits on chair and nods in yes.

LIZA: Sirf 15 minutes hi toh late hui mein report dene ke liye... aise bhadak gaye jaise maine 15 saal laga diye ho report ready karne mein

CHOTU: Aree jaane de naa yaar... hum jante hai naa Arjun sir aise hi ho gaye hai...

SHREE: Haan jab se sakshi...

They heard door opening sound so looked at door side. Aisha is there. She comes near them.

AISHA: kya hua?

SHREE: Kuch nahi yaar... Arjun sir ne Liza pe gussa kar diya

AISHA: hmm...aaj kal gussa hi toh karte rehte hai sab pe... by the way Rathod sir nahi aaye ab tak?

CHOTU: Nahi abhi tak toh nahi aaye

SHREE: Kyun? Kya hua?

AISHA: Nahi bas aise hi puch rahi thi... unka abhi thodi der pehle phone aaya tha ki unhe kuch baat karni hai so sab conference room mein milenge

Sameer comes there. All looked at him.

TEAM: Good Morning sir

SAMEER: Good Morning

Sameer look around.

SAMEER: Rawte kaha hai?

CHOTU: Sir apni cabin mein hai.

SAMEER: Shree jaauo Arjun ko bulauo

Shree looked at Sameer with shock.

SHREE: M...M....Main...

Chotu, Liza and Aisha smile seeing him.

SAMEER: Kyun? Koi aur shree hai kya yaha?

SHREE: Nahi vo Sir...

Sameer’s one glare is enough to shut him. He nods in yes.

SHREE (Thought): Sher ki cave mein daalne ke liye mein hi mila inhe

Shree went to Arjun’s cabin. After sometime shree come with Arjun.

SAMEER: Ek case hai... Hume Maher gaauon jaana hai... 3 ladkiyan 48 hour se gayab hai...

AISHA: Maher gaauon? Yeh toh wahi gaauon hai naa jaha pichle ek mahine mein kuch 15 ladkiyo ki moat hui hai

SAMEER: Haan...15 ki moat ho chuki hai aur ab 3 ladkiyan gayab hai

SHREE: koi ransom call?

SAMEER: No aisa kuch bhi nahi hai... commissioner sir chahte hai ki hum yeh case handle kare... waha abhi jitni bhi death hui hai vo sab ladkiyo ki hui hai... vo bhi ajeeb tarike se

ARJUN: Ajeeb tarike se matlab?

LIZA: Maine suna hai sir... unn ladkiyan ekdam theek thi lakin achanak se unhe nausea, vomiting, heart attack jaisi bimari ho gayi aur then unki death ho gayi...which is not a normal thing at all

CHOTU: Achanak se koi itna bimar kaise ho sakta hai ki sidhe moat hi ho jaaye?

Arjun thinks the same thing and lost in thought.

SAMEER: Right Chotu! Iss liye Commissioner Chahte hai ki hum yeh case dekhe... yaha jaisa dikh raha hai shayad waisa hai nahi... so team you have 1 hour... pack your bags and phir yahi pe milte hai

All nods in yes. They went to home and take some necessary things. After that they came at ETF office and start their journey to Maher Gaauon.

[ON THE WAY]

Arjun is driving the SUV. Sameer is on passenger seat. Aisha, Liza, chotu and Shree are sitting on back seat. Shree is busy with tablet.

SHREE: Sir Maher gaauon ke liye aage se left le lijiye

Arjun turn left.

SHREE: Maher gaauon yaha se 50 Km dur hai... ek chota sa gaauon hai aur population bhi kam hai.

After 1 and half hour vo log Maher gaauon pohchte hai. vo log SUV se bahar aate hai and look around. Three men are sitting there under one tree. Men saw Etf and come near them.

MAN 1: Aap log kon hai? Aur yaha kya kar rahe hai?

SAMEER: ETF Mumbai.

MAN 2: ETF yaha? Kya hua Sir?

ARJUN: vo 3 ladkiyan gayab hui hai ussi silsile mein aaye hai...

MAN 3: Ji haan aaiiye... hum apko yaha ke sarpanch ke pass leke chalte hai

Arjun nods. Vo sab sarpanch ki haveli pohchte hai. One man in his late 60 is sitting on chair.

MAN 2: Thakurji yeh ETF wale hai...Gauri, ridhima aur arnika bitiyan ke case ke liye aaye hai

Thakur khade hote hai and team ke pass jaata hai.

THAKUR: Aaiiye...accha hua Aap log aa gaye... unka parivaar bohat pareshan hai... pichle 2 din se bitiyan ghar nahi aayi...

SAMEER: hume unke parivaar walo se milna hai

THAKUR: Ji main unhe yahi bulvata hoon... (to man 1) jaauo jaake sab ko bula laauo

Man nods and waha se family ko bulane chala jaata hai.

AISHA: Waise humne suna hai pichle mahine mein yaha 15 ladkiyo ki moat hui hai

THAKUR: Ji haan... pata nahi kis ki nazar lag gayi hai humare gaauon ko...achanak se hi moat hone lag gayi...

ARJUN: Isn’t it strange... jitni bhi moat hui hai vo sab ladkiyan hi hai... so I think nazar apke gaauon ko nahi gaauon ki ladkiyo ko lagi hai... yeh nazar lagne ka exclusive offer sirf ladkiyo ke liye kyun hai?

Team looked at him.

SHREE (slowly to Aisha): Kya dialogue maara hai sir ne!

Aisha smiles.

THAKUR: Aap kya kehna chahte hai?

ARJUN: bas yahi ki jiss ki bhi nazar lagi hai uska target sirf ladkiyan hi hai... yeh baat kuch samj nahi aa rahi... Aap samjayenge

THAKUR: Ab mein kya kahu... mujhe bhi kuch samj nahi aa raha ki yeh sab kyun ho raha hai

SAMEER: Koi baat nahi... Ab sameer damsingh Rathod aur uski team yaha aa gayi hai, ab dheere dheere sab samj aa jayega

Shree looked at him and raised his eyebrow.

SHREE (slowly to Aisha): Yeh dono bhai aaj solid dialogue marne ke mood mein lag rahe hai... dialogue maar ne mein ek sher hai toh dusra sava sher!!

AISHA (slowly to shree): hmm aur agar tum aise hi bolte rahe aur sir ne sun liya toh ek dialogue tumhe aur milega jiske saath SYS aur damn it ekdam free hoga

Shree makes face. Chotu and Liza smile seeing him. same time vo admi and kuch log waha aate hai. Thakur unhe dekhta hai.

THAKUR: Yeh hai unki family... (to family members) yeh etf team hai aur (to team) yeh hai Mohan arnika ke pitaji...yeh madhav hai Gauri ka bhai aur yeh Gopal hai ridhima ke pitaji

Team turn to them and goes near them.

SAMEER: Arnika, Gauri aur Ridhima gayab kaise hue?

MOHAN: Arnika subah mandir gayi thi waha se wapas ghar hi nahi aayi... Humne poore gaauon mein dhundha lakin vo nahi mili... uska phone bhi nahi laga

AISHA: Aur Gauri?

MADHAV: Vo school mein padhane jaati hai... aakhri baar usko uske saath kaam karne wali baki teachers ne dekha tha... vo ghar aane ke liye nikali thi lakin ghar pohchi nahi.

GOPAL: Ridhima toh ghar pe hi thi... Mein khet chala gaya tha iss liye vo ghar pe akeli thi... jab wapas aaya toh Ridhima ghar pe nahi thi... maine ass pass sab se poocha lakin kisi ne usse nahi dekha tha

SHREE: Jab Aap ghar pohche toh ghar mein sab theek tha? I mean kuch bikhra hua tha yaa kuch gayab tha aisa kuch?

GOPAL: Nahi sab theek tha

AISHA: It means chori yaa jabardasti nahi hui hogi warna pata chal jaata

CHOTU: koi dhamki yaa aisa kuch?

MADHAV: Nahi aisa bhi kuch nahi hai... pata nahi vo tino kaha chali gayi... Aap please tino ko dhundh nikaliye

MOHAN: Haan sir ji... please humari beti ko humare paas wapas le aaiiye... Aap toh jante hai aaj kal ladkiyan surakshit nahi hai... kahi humari betiyon ke sath kuch aisa waisa...

ARJUN: Aap pareshan mat hoiiye... kuch nahi hoga unhe... Shree tino ke numbers lo aur check karo ki unki exact last location kon si thi

SHREE: Ok

Shree unn tino ka phone number leta hai.

SAMEER: Arjun...tum aur chotu school jaake dekho... main aur Aisha Ridhima ke ghar jaake dekhte hai... Shree Liza tum dono mandir wala rasta check karo

All nods.

THAKUR: Main aap sab ke rehne ke liye bandobast karta hoon... yaha pass mein hi ek ghar hai... main apke liye vo saaf karva deta hoon

SAMEER: Thank you

Uske baad sab alag alag hoke investigation pe chale jaate hai.

[AFTER 2 HOUR]

Thakur sameer ko ghar ki keys dete hai. Team waha jaati hai... It’s typical two storey house. Small but it’s beautiful with little bit greenery around it. They entered in house. There is wooden furniture in house. Living room is simple. One side there is way for kitchen and opposite to kitchen door there is a stairs. They take seat in living room.

SAMEER: Kya pata chala?

SHREE: Sir poora rasta check kiya... mujhe koi bhi aisi jagah nazar nahi aayi jaha se kidnapping possible ho... koi bhi suspicious place nahi mila

ARJUN: School wala rasta bhi aisa hi hai

CHOTU: haan sir aisi toh koi jagah nahi dikhi jaha se aasani se kidnapping ho sake...

SAMEER: lakin Gauri aur Arnika phir bhi gayab hue hai...

ARJUN: tumhe waha kya mila?

AISHA: Kuch zyada nahi sir... unke pass jo thoda bohat cash and jewellery hai sab waise ke waisa hai... naa koi aisa clue mila jisse yeh pata chale ki koi hathapai hui hogi

SAMEER: Shree unka last location kya tha?

SHREE: Gauri ka last location school ki bahar ka hai... Ridhima ka last location uske ghar ka hai aur Arnika ka location mandir wale raaste ka hai...

ARJUN: Aur call details?

SHREE: Koi aisa suspicious call toh nahi hai sir... zyadatar parivaar ke logon ke hi calls hai aur unke dost ke calls hai

AISHA: last call?

SHREE: Arnika ke phone mein last call Amrita ka hai... Gauri ko uske bhai ne call kiya tha aur Ridhima ko kisi Aastha ne call kiya tha... maine family se confirm kiya toh pata chala ki Amrita Arnika ki dost hai aur Aastha iss gaauon mein rehne wali ek 45 year ki lady hai...

ARJUN: Toh Ab yeh Aastha aur Amrita ko milna padega

SAMEER: Hume vo 15 ladkiyo ki moat ke baare mein bhi detail nikal ni hogi... vo bhi ek paheli hi hai But team first select your rooms and get fresh... uske baad jaate hai

Team nods. Aisha and Liza select same room. Shree and chotu select same room and Arjun and sameer select separate room as Arjun want to stay alone.

[AFTER 1 HOUR]

[AT AMRITA’S HOUSE]

Etf is at Amrita’s house.

AISHA: Amrita tum Arnika ki dost ho right?

AMRITA: Ji...hum bohat acche dost hai...

SAMEER: Tumne usse call kiya tha vo bhi subah 5 baje... aisa kon sa kaam aa gaya tha tumhe ki tumhe usko itni jaldi call karna pada

AMRITA: Sir hum humesha saath mandir jaate hai lakin uss din mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha tha iss liye maine usse call kiya tha yeh kehne k liye ki main uske saath mandir nahi jaa paungi

ARJUN: Kamal hai! Jiss din vo gayab hui ussi din tum uske saath mandir nahi gayi...

AMRITA: Sir mujhe bhi bohat afsos ho raha hai... kaash mein gayi hoti toh shayad vo gayab nahi hoti

AISHA: Tum usse acche se janti thi toh tumne kuch notice kiya? I mean vo kisi baat se pareshan thi yaa koi aisa dushman jo usse aise gayab kar sakta ho

AMRITA: Nahi ma’am... Arnika bohat shant swabhav ki hai... sab se acche se baat karti hai aur gaauon mein sab usse pasand bhi karte hai... uska koi dushman nahi hai... arnika itni pyaari hai ki koi usse dushmani ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakta

SAMEER: koi aur baat...

Amrita gives confused look.

SAMEER: Like vo kisi se pyaar karti ho yaa phir koi usse... jaise tumne abhi kaha sab usse pasand karte hai toh koi aisa hai jo usse pyaar karta hai

AMRITA: bilkul nahi sir... aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...

CHOTU: Tum usse kab mili thi aakhri baar?

AMRITA: uske gayab hone ke ek din pehle raat ko... hum dono kulfi khaane gaye the saath mein

ARJUN: theek hai... agar koi baat hogi toh hum phir aayenge tab tak tum humari permission ke bina gaauon se bahar nahi jaauogi

Amrita nods. After this team went to meet Aastha...

[AASTHA’S HOUSE]

SAMEER: Aastha Ji... we are Etf

AASTHA: maine suna ki Aap log aaye hai... boliye kya kar sakti hoon mein aapke liye?

ARJUN: philhaal toh sawal ka jawab dijiye... wahi kaafi hoga

AISHA: Aapne ridhima ko call kiya tha? Kyun?

AASTHA: usko mere haath ki puran poli bohat pasand hai... maine uss din puran poli banayi thi iss liye maine usse call kiya tha... usne kaha bhi ki vo jald hi aayegi khaane lakin aayi nahi

Arjun is looking around and observing everything.

ARJUN: Aap kaam kya karti hai?

AASTHA: Ji mein astrologer hoon aur saath hi saath iss gaauon ke liye social worker. Sabki madad karna hi mera kaam hai

SAMEER: Aap Gauri aur Arnika ke baare mein kuch jaanti hai?

AASTHA: Main yaha sab ko jaanti hoon aur sab mujhe... Gauri Arnika aur Ridhima tino hi bohat pyaari bacchiyan hai... gunvaan aur sundar bhi... mujhe samj nahi aa raha ki koi unhe gayab kyun karega

SAMEER: theek hai agar zaroorat hogi toh hum phir aayenge apse milne... Aap abhi humari permission ke bina gaauon se bahar nahi jayegi

AASTHA: Zaroor kyun nahi... mujhe khushi hogi agar mein aapki koi help kar paayi... bas tino bacchiyan sahi salamat ghar wapas aa jaaye

After meeting Aastha they talk with other villagers.After talking with villager they went to clinic. One boy in his late 25 is sitting in his cabin. Etf enter in his cabin.

ARJUN: ETF Mumbai

DOCTOR: Aap yaha! Kya baat hai sir?

SAMEER: tumhara naam?

DOCTOR: Tushar

AISHA: Dr. Tushar aap toh jaante hai ki pichle ek month mein yaha 15 ladkiyo ki moat hui hai... uss baare mein kuch batayenge?

TUSHAR: Well bohat ajeeb baat toh hai... sab ke death ke reason alag alag hai aur symptoms bhi... kuch ladkiyo ko heart attack aaya tha... kuch ko continues vomiting ho rahi thi aur kuch ko nausea...

LIZA: Lakin achanak se aisa hone ka reason?

TUSHAR: maine unhe check kiya tha... mujhe kuch bhi nahi mila... mere liye bhi ek puzzle hi hai... may be koi flue ho sakta hai

ARJUN: Dr. Tushar... aisa kon sa flue hai jo sirf ladkiyo ko hi ho raha hai...

TUSHAR: maine aapse abhi abhi kaha naa... mere liye bhi yeh ek puzzle jaisa hi hai...

LIZA: Mujhe unn sab ki reports chahiye

TUSHAR: Sure...main abhi deta hoon

Vo Liza ko reports deta hai.

ARJUN: Humari permission ke bina kahi jaana mat

Tushar nods. Etf clinic se bahar aati hai.

SAMEER: Liza tum yeh reports check karo... hum sab unn ladkiyo ke parivaar se mil ke aate hai

Liza nods and went to house. Other goes to visit that 15 girl’s family.

[NIGHT]

All are at house and in living room.

SAMEER: Liza...

LIZA: Sir maine sabhi reports dekhi... Tushar sahi keh raha tha... unho ne jo bhi khaana khaya tha vo sab normal hai... saare test normal hai...

ARJUN: lakin hum nahi maan sakte Liza... ho sakta hai report mein kuch gadbad ho...unfortunately humare pass body nahi hai isko cross check karne ke liye...

SAMEER: lakin vo report mein gadbad kyun karega... he is doctor and uske pass aisa karne ka koi motive bhi nahi hai... uska koi bhi direct yaa indirect link nahi uske saath sivay yeh ki sab ek hi gaauon mein rehte hai

SHREE: sir maine sab ke call records and location sab check kiya... unka past aur present sab dekh liya lakin unn 15 ladkiyo ke bich koi strong link nahi hai... as gaauon chota hai aur sab ek hi gaauon mein rehte the occasionally milna ho jaata tha...

ARJUN: Aur yeh Arnika Gauri aur Ridhima... unke bich koi link

SHREE: Nahi sir... unka bhi koi connection nahi mila

SAMEER: damn it!!! Koi connection nahi hai... kisi ke pass koi motive nahi hai phir bhi tin ladkiyan gayab ho jaati hai aur 15 ladkiyo ki achanak se death ho jaati hai...

ARJUN: Koi naa koi link zaroor hoga Rathod... kuch toh chut raha hai... phir se ek baar poore gaauon ki talashi leni hogi

SAMEER: let’s call it a day guys... its 9:30

All nods in yes. Suddenly door knocked. Chotu opens the door. One boy around 24 is standing there. He has fair skin and charming look.He has very attractive personality. Sameer and Arjun see him.

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[ROHAN]

ARJUN: Bolo...

BOY: Sir mera naam Rohan hai... Thakur sahab ne apke liye yeh khaana bhijvaya hai aur kaha hai ki jab tak Aap sab yaha hai dinner aur lunch unke yaha se hi aayega...

SAMEER: Dinner ke liye thanks... unse keh dena unhe tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hai... hum dekh lenge

ROHAN: Sir yaha aap food order nahi kar pauoge... main road 50 km ke baad aata hai...

CHOTU (To shree slowly): Rathod sir kya hume bhukha maarna chahte hai... accha khaasa khana mil raha hai aur yeh hai ki...

SHREE: Vo kya hai naa, Rathod sir vo usool follow karte hai... “Mujh pe ek ehasaan karna ki mujh pe koi ehasaan mat karna”... iss liye mana kar rahe hai

AISHA: Shree!!

SHREE: are esach bol raha tha

This side,

SAMEER: lakin phir bhi hum...

AISHA: Sir its fine! Waise bhi hum case mein busy honge aur Rohan is right! Yaha hum order toh kar nahi payenge so...

Sameer thinks once.

SAMEER: Okay

Rohan smiles. he put Tiffin on dining table.

ROHAN: Ab mein chalta hoon

Rohan is about to go but Arjun stops him.

ARJUN: Wait!

Rohan turn and looked at him.

ARJUN: Tum ho kon? Kya karte ho?

ROHAN: Main Thakur ji ke yaha kaam karta hoon... unke accounts dekhta hoon...

ARJUN: account dekhte ho aur saath hi aise (showing Tiffin) kaam bhi karte ho?

ROHAN: Thakur Ji mujhe apne bete jaisa mante hai iss liye ghar ke kaam mein bhi help kar deta hoon...

ARJUN: subah jab hum aaye the tab tum waha nahi the

ROHAN: City gaya hua tha... bank ka kuch kaam tha... Aap chahe toh main apko bus tickets dikha sakta hoon

Arjun observe him keenly.

ARJUN: Tumhe kuch pata hai ladkiyo ke gayab hone ke baare mein

ROHAN: Mujhe kuch nahi pata... jitna gaauon walo ko pata hai utna hi janta hoon mein... well I am very upset jo kuch hua uske liye...

ARJUN: Theek hai

Rohan nods. Vo waha se bahar chala jaata hai.

SAMEER: Ok team thoda fresh ho jaauo phir dinner karenge

Team nods. Rohan bahar ek window se yeh dekhta hai and koi dekh naa le aise unka pic click kar leta hai aur waha se chala jaata hai.

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That's it

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Edited by Cutie2804 - 5 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice dear

Just loved it

Rohan looks good😛

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago

Its awesome update👏

Your going really good with story 👍🏼

Thanks for the pm

Waiting the next update

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