EPIPHANY- A PreRish Story (Ch-5, Pg57, Updt-23/12/19) Completed - Page 23

Originally posted by: cassiop

Logical and real laga islie to dard feel kia.. maine online bhi dekha lung collapse 🤣

She did make it pretty realistic with all those terms..👏

Kaise pata chala aap logo ko ye sab medical bhasha??

She 😳 she herself googled about it and apparantly saw the entire procedure and used the terms and asked me if she should go ahead with it and I convinced her to keep them so, as the readers would feel more connected as though this is a fiction we both wanted to keep a pratical and a realistic approach. 😳 all credits and kudoes to her Because if it was me I would have used even harder terms and that would had led to total disconnection 😆

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

She 😳 she herself googled about it and apparantly saw the entire procedure and used the terms and asked me if she should go ahead with it and I convinced her to keep them so, as the readers would feel more connected as though this is a fiction we both wanted to keep a pratical and a realistic approach. 😳 all credits and kudoes to her Because if it was me I would have used even harder terms and that would had led to total disconnection 😆

So proud of you guys.. 👏

ek story ke lie itna mehnat.. no wonder it has come out so well

Thank you both for giving this 🤗

Originally posted by: cassiop

So proud of you guys.. 👏

ek story ke lie itna mehnat.. no wonder it has come out so well

Thank you both for giving this 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

she did all the mehenat. She deserves all teh applause👏

You two look like a great team.. should work on more stories together.. i will also think of another prompt .. lets see.. filhaal eagerly waiting for next chapter..2 more to go

Yaay I connected the dots correctly 😎 I knew it that Prerna was the target and Rishabh got caught in the cross fire. I presume Rishabh was somewhat aware of the Danger when he took Prerna's car coz he is a Khatro Ka Khiladi. Loved the fact that Rishabh is very particular about his family's security and took heed to Prerna's words even though he did not let it on to her. I loved the small details you put in your stories like the cracked watch, bullet ridden shirt and jacket, the seat, the windows etc.

I so so so wish the makers of KZK2 draw heavy inspiration from this fan fiction when Bajaj returns. This is the most logical and real kind of plot progression they can incorporate from where Bajaj left. 👍🏼🤗

I don't want Bajaj to gain conscious so soon. Call me a sadist but I want to see a tadapti hui Prerna. This will bring immense sukoon to all PreRish fans and completely redeem her, if you know what I mean. You ended your update just when the tadap started. I say bring it on in heaps and spades. I want Prerna's Tadap and Angst for Rishabh in the next update.😈 Uske baad Bajaj ko hosh mein le asns. But abhi ke liye, in the next update Prerna should not even be allowed inside the ICCU, let alone actually touch Rishabh😃😈🤪

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

bach bhi jayega toh tab bhi marne hi wala hai 😆 so ab mare ya parso baat toh ek hi hai 😆

Marna sabhi ko hai Woh theek hai. Par uske pehele abhi Bajju ko bahut Kuch feel and experience Karna hai. Jaise Prerna Ka TLC. PreRish confession and most importantly PreRish romance, woh bhi hot hot romance (a la HS3 and Katra katra)☺️@Niyati or @Sanu can be a darling and do the honours here😉. Then min 2 PreRish babies ko lana hai duniya mein after loads of field practice 🤪. Unko pal pos ke bada Karna hai. Grandparents banna hai. Etc etc. PreRish ko leke dobko wishlist long hai.... So abhi ke liye bande ko bachalo by end of this Story. 😃 Bajaj has to recover. PERIOD

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

bola na woh mar jata hai 🤔

Aathma banke wapas ayega phir vo? Because story to PreRish ki hai na 😈

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

Marna sabhi ko hai Woh theek hai. Par uske pehele abhi Bajju ko bahut Kuch feel and experience Karna hai. Jaise Prerna Ka TLC. PreRish confession and most importantly PreRish romance, woh bhi hot hot romance (a la HS3 and Katra katra)☺️@Niyati or @Sanu can be a darling and do the honours here😉. Then min 2 PreRish babies ko lana hai duniya mein after loads of field practice 🤪. Unko pal pos ke bada Karna hai. Grandparents banna hai. Etc etc. PreRish ko leke dobko wishlist long hai.... So abhi ke liye bande ko bachalo by end of this Story. 😃 Bajaj has to recover. PERIOD

Even I want to read a HAWT PreRish story ☺️

Prerna target thi aur shikar RB hogaya😭

Bajju ko sab pata tha phir bhi kuch nahi kaha,silently apni family ke protection mein laga raha . mera bajju hai hi aisa

Prerna bhi bechari bahut pain mein h😭

Uss kumardada ko toh jail mein nahi upar hona chahiye tha😡

Ab please bajju ko thik kar do aur nahi dekh sakti aise😭

Great update aur agla update jaldi do🤗

Originally posted by: Niyati_T

Even I want to read a HAWT PreRish story ☺️

Aap toh os devi h humari😎

Lekin pehle acche se exams de dijiye baad mein likh dena ek hawwt romantic si story humare liye👍🏼

Best of luck for exams👍🏼