the air is filled with mystery...
are yaar ek hi insaan hai yaar kitna deal karna hai...our hero toh super man hi hai
Don't mind for this suggesion but i couldn't stop myself from saying this. i wanted antagonist to be even more powerful. because that's when we get to know the true power of our protagonist.
Riya that charecter itself is very magical & giving her a standing up personality and certain dimensions and a defined charecter arc.... ahaaaa i love you so much
and the dots around riya is a way mysterious and i can smell the mystery there😆
are you going to cross genre from thriller to psycho killer
anyway you gave something wholesome.... but i think you should give your updates or views more often.
update soon...
AND OBVIOUSLY YOU HAVE TO BEAR ME FOR THIS PARAGRAPH THAT TOO THIS LATE....
and accept my apology
and not to forget thanks for pm....
it just doen't have its heart in right place , it has my heart too...
Edited by Shriyareddy - 6 years ago