MishBir SS : Tu Mere Saath Rehna (Part 10 : Pg 25) - Page 15

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Part 7

The rain drops falling on her hands were giving her magical feeling, she was feeling butterflies in her stomach, and the warmth coming from Abir’s hand was actually warming her heart also. She looked at Abir who was looking at her with adoration and something else too, she couldn’t figure that and she didn’t want to so she just ran away from that tree to the other, abir lowered his head and brushed his hands through his hair , realizing he got caught.

He looked at mishti who was standing in front of him, her wet locks, red hue on cheeks this entire are making him crazy. He took a deep breath and went towards her

A-I am sorry agar tumhe awkward feel hua to

M-nahi abir, vo bas

A-its ok, I understand

Mishti smiled-As always

Abir smiled at this, the way they’re developing trust on each other, he’s loving this phase

A-so,um,tumne kabhi baarish mein dance kiya hai

Mishti looked at him with amused face

M-abir, sach sach batao, tum ek bollywood movie kitni baar dekhte ho

A(frowning)-ye kaisa sawaal hai

M-to aur kya, bhala real life mein koi baarish mein dance karta hai

A-arey I am serious, and tum kya baar baar bhala koi , bhala koi kar rahi ho , hume kisi se kya matlab, tum apna batao, tumhe barish mein dance karna hai kya

M-umm

Mishti actually wanted to enjoy the rain, she had never done anything crazy like this, its like a guilty pleasure for her, well except here she doesn’t have to feel guilty considering the man beside her himself asking her to do this, she looked at abir who was looking at her with raised eye brows and knowing expression, she shrugged and said-ok

This bought a full blown smile on Abir’s face, and in the very Abir’s enthusiastic voice he said-Great, let’s do it

M-but abir,hum dance kaise karenge, means no music , nothing

She was feeling very nervous suddenly, all her made up mind went down to hill, when she started thinking about how, why, where, when, etc, etc

A(loud voice)-stop, stop, stop..

Mishti looked at him, shocked written on all over the face

M-Abiiiir ,kya stop stop stop, itni zor se kyu chillaaye

A-Mishti apne thought process ko stop karo, jitni himmat jutaayi hai na, sab barsaat ke paani mein beh jaayegi, you want to enjoy the rain right

Mishti nodded her head, abir smiled and forwarded his hand towards her,

A-Then trust me

Mishti looked at his hand, then his face and then slowly kept her hand on his. Abir wrapped his wrist around her and pressed it reassuringly. He started walking away from tree shelter towards the ground under open sky from where the drops of rain are falling.

Mishti who was walking with him, was just looking at him with so much adoration, she got really strong urge to just hug him tightly and then never let go, she was feeling overwhelmed.

Abir looked at her and then smiled a very enthusiastic smile, taking mobile out from his pocket he played a song

Mishti smiled and almost giggle hearing the song

M(thinking)-so they’re going to enjoy the rain like this

Abir moving little far from her, started dancing

Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jaane kaha main kidhar chala
Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jaane kaha main kidhar chala
Arrey phisal gaya ye tune kiya kiya

Mishti got shocked seeing him dancing like almost Hritik Roshan, she felt a strong urge to dance with him but her reserved nature was stopping her, Abir sensing this came to her, took her hand in his, and started dancing, mishti sensed that now she couldn’t control also started copying Abir’s steps

Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jaane kaha main kidhar chali
Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jaane kaha main kidhar chali
Arrey phisal gayi le
Tere sang ho chali

They both laughed together seeing each other going crazy, Abir took mishti to his cycle, he sat on front, mishti sat behind him on backseat, and abir started riding the cycle while mishti started enjoying the rain


Nazar ye kiski hamen lagi
Nazar ye kiski hamen lagi
Ke chalte chalte phisal gaye
Hansi hansi mein ye kiya
Huaa ham badal gaye

Mishti was swaying her legs with the music, the drizzling rain with cold winds were making her feel great and abir’s company was making him feel safe


Nazar ye kiski hamen lagi
Ke chalte chalte phisal gaye
Hansi hansi mein ye kiya
Huaa ham badal gaye
Kyun badal gaye ham badal gaye

Abir applied break, both got down from cycle , mishti excitedly asked abir with her eyes that what next, abir gave her mischievous smile and signaled towards an empty wheel cart, mishti looked at Abir with shocked eyes, abir took her hand nd went towards it.


Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jaane kaha main kidhar chala
Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jaane kaha main kidhar chala
Arrey phisal gaya ye tune kiya kiya

Mishti was sitting on the cart and abir was pushing it, mishti was enjoying the cold breeze hitting her face abir was enjoying the look on mishti’s face, he was almost running while pushing the cart and mishti was welcoming everything what Abir was trying to give her with open arms.


Tum itne bhole ho kis liye
Tum itni achhi ho is liye
Kyun achhi hoon ye bataao
Tum kyun bataau main
Tum itne bhole ho kis liye
Tum itni achhi ho is liye
Kyun achhi hoon ye bataao
Tum kyun bataau main

Kuchh bataao naa
Kyun bataau main
Idhar chali main udhar chali
Jaane kaha main kidhar chali
Arrey phisal gayi le
Tere sang ho chali

Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jaane kaha main kidhar chala
Idhar chala main udhar chala
Jaane kaha main kidhar chala
Arrey phisal gaya ye tune kiya
Kiya yeh tune kiya kiya
Main tere sang ho chali
Yeh tune kiya kiya
Main tere sang ho chali.

Suddenly cart stopped with force and mishti fell back, lying straight on the cart and abir who also got pushed forward came face to face with mishti, they got lost in each other eyes, feeling hot breaths on their faces, heart pounding heavily less due to sudden turn of events and more due to closeness.

Khubsurat raat ye hai

Saath tera maange

Dil ye mera khush rehta hai

Bas saath tera paake

Abir moved forward, mishti closed her eyes feeling him so close to her, both breathing heavily. She felt her glasses being removed due t which she opened her eyes, Abir moved from there and came in front of her, forwarding his hand which mishti held

Teri Khushboo jaise jadoo

Tere baad bhi reh jaati hai

Main mangu us rab se tujhe har dua, meri har dua mein

Abir wiped the raindrops from her glasses and made her wear them, she was feeling overwhelmed with all such emotions, she don’t know the name but this feeling is strong , so strong that it will consume her, will consume all of her

A(hoarse voice)- Mishti, can I hug you

Mishti wrapped her arms around him without any delay, like she was waiting for this only, Abir too wrapped his arms around her and placed a kiss on her hair

Saathiya Mere

Main to tera deewana hu

Saare Jaha se begaana hu

Meri dhuno ka tarana tu

A temple could be seen with all the bells ringing due to thunderstorm there, a man was standing in front of an idol joining hands, we could hear him saying

M-ganpati bappa, mujhe aashirwaad dijiye, main 15 saal baad apne priwaar ke paas jaa raha hu , apne bête ke paas, unka pyaar aur vishwaas waapas paa saku, iske liye mujhe shakti dijiye

TBC

Sorry to be very late

But from now on will update regularly till diwali

It was a filler part

Story will move forward from the next part

Will update next part tonight

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ooooof, love!! MishBir are so cute!! I just wanna hug both of them so hard! ❤

And Baba's back. Can't wait to see how his entry turns things around!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely Yaara..... When will we see such light moments in our show??? So many suspense thriller ..... On and on.... Ek khatm nahi tho duja shuru

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Posted: 5 years ago

wow its so beautiful vaishu.. 👏👏

i like the first part where abir asks sorry n understands her state dheere dheere the understanding, trust is establishing between them.. and perfect song selection vaishu... the whole seq is so fabulous... so natural n the gradual process of mishbir getting closer is described beautifully yaar... ⭐️👍🏼

abir reading her thoughts and mishti realizing she doesnt need to feel guilty n can be herself everything is so perfect.. and also the cute nok jok on rain dance n bolly movie i loved it yaar.. 😆❤️

and i loved the cycle ride, and the cart ride, the closeness and specially the glass scene.. superb yaar... 👏👏 and when the ice broke n abir asked a hug such a gentle man he is.. and our bold angry chorni you go girl hugs him without a word... 🥳🥳☺️

wow baba entry... niceeeeee thank god he is good here... waiting to see abir n whole family reaction... how the dynamics are gonna change... interesting vaishu... what a twist yaar. 🥳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Vaishu ❤️❤️

This was extremely beautiful, the best rain sequence ❤️❤️

And that song, haaye mere bachpan ki yaad dila di ❤️ abir aka rajkot ka hrithik😆🥳

N baba's entry ...excited to see his character in your write up ...continue soon 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Teaser

M - oh god abir I just can't believe, Ye tumhara office hai And Main Yaha Tumhare saath kaam karungi , kya tumhe ye Sab pehle se pata tha (frowning slightly she asked)

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M- Aap Yaha kya Kar rahe hai

M- meenu jo saalo pehle kho diya tha, use waapas paane aaya hu

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A- ye Saree mishti pe bahut suit karegi, bahut pyaari and cute lagegi Wo

K- Ha Ha Bilkul meri bhabhi world ki sabse beautiful ladki dekhengi Kyuki Aaj Sab unko mere bhai ki aankhon se dekhenge

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They were drowning in each other eyes, uncomfortable, not at all, in fact both were feeling like never letting go each other.

She on his lap, in his cabin, and he holding her from her waist, their breaths fanning on each other face .

Office romance on the way 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

Teaser

M - oh god abir I just can't believe, Ye tumhara office hai And Main Yaha Tumhare saath kaam karungi , kya tumhe ye Sab pehle se pata tha (frowning slightly she asked)

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M- Aap Yaha kya Kar rahe hai

M- meenu jo saalo pehle kho diya tha, use waapas paane aaya hu

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A- ye Saree mishti pe bahut suit karegi, bahut pyaari and cute lagegi Wo

K- Ha Ha Bilkul meri bhabhi world ki sabse beautiful ladki dekhengi Kyuki Aaj Sab unko mere bhai ki aankhon se dekhenge

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They were drowning in each other eyes, uncomfortable, not at all, in fact both were feeling like never letting go each other.

She on his lap, in his cabin, and he holding her from her waist, their breaths fanning on each other face .

Office romance on the way 🤗

Wow.... Waiting waiting....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Ooooof, love!! MishBir are so cute!! I just wanna hug both of them so hard! ❤

And Baba's back. Can't wait to see how his entry turns things around!!

Thanku so much dear

Glad you loved it 🤗

MishBir are cuties

You'll not get disappointed by baba that's for sure

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mii5

Lovely Yaara..... When will we see such light moments in our show??? So many suspense thriller ..... On and on.... Ek khatm nahi tho duja shuru

Thanku so much Yaar 🤗

Hopefully after baba's track 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

wow its so beautiful vaishu.. 👏👏

i like the first part where abir asks sorry n understands her state dheere dheere the understanding, trust is establishing between them.. and perfect song selection vaishu... the whole seq is so fabulous... so natural n the gradual process of mishbir getting closer is described beautifully yaar... ⭐️👍🏼

abir reading her thoughts and mishti realizing she doesnt need to feel guilty n can be herself everything is so perfect.. and also the cute nok jok on rain dance n bolly movie i loved it yaar.. 😆❤️

and i loved the cycle ride, and the cart ride, the closeness and specially the glass scene.. superb yaar... 👏👏 and when the ice broke n abir asked a hug such a gentle man he is.. and our bold angry chorni you go girl hugs him without a word... 🥳🥳☺️

wow baba entry... niceeeeee thank god he is good here... waiting to see abir n whole family reaction... how the dynamics are gonna change... interesting vaishu... what a twist yaar. 🥳

Thanku so much diyu 🤗

Loved reading your comment😍

I am just trying my best to portray the characters of mishbir just like they're in show, I don't want them to change their flaws too🤗🤗🤗

I am glad you liked the dance seq, I was little skeptical about it 😆

Yeah baba has his own story but not like the one CVs gave to us 😉

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