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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Yes they had mentioned the twins angle. Dola had said that they were twins, although yes Dola was older... Plus she had also said that their being twins was the reason why they couldn't kill each other. This was the reason why both Dola and Mo needed the help of Pia...

Yes, either Mo is completely loyal to Pr or she might be doing it to get into her good books??? This is also a probability, no???

But yes, she is surprisingly loyal to Pr... Imagine taking the risk of going through PK just for the sake of the egg!!

I know... Shekharji is definitely a big issue...

My story... Well, I am stuck with the reason for EDV to try to kill Mo so that she turns him into a statue to sace herself... Any idea??

Plus I have jotted down a short OS on Navratri special... Thinking of posting it tonight.

Pls do post the OS. If u have it ready. would love to read it.


EDV doesn't have a concious right if he found out Mo was planning to eat him to become powerful that could be a reason to kill her. Self - preservation. Plus that time she did say Daayan vanshi's aren't loyal to each other. You want another idea ?


Dola - You have an outstanding memory. I forgot about that. Why didn't they mention it in the episode tho !

Mo - The reason i buy her loyalty is because Pr seems to have done a number on her. Mommy issues are very common these days.


Shekhar- i have an inkling . He loves Ved more than Ansh so he won't kill her for that. He loves her more than khandaan ka izzat that won't work. And even if the world would be destroyed he would opt to save her instead. So it has to be something bigger than her. What drives Shekhar ultimately.


Also can u give me any ideas as to why Ved Shekhar would fight ?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Of course Dillu can be an excellent field detective... Plus she has one big benefit... She can change her appearance at will!!! Just that while sleuthing around, she would need to control her hihihihi a bit!!!

Oh thanks for reminding me i will definitely consult you before writing that who dun it story. Yes her hi hi hi is a problem but rookie detective or bounty hunter she could be.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Pls do post the OS. If u have it ready. would love to read it.


EDV doesn't have a concious right if he found out Mo was planning to eat him to become powerful that could be a reason to kill her. Self - preservation. Plus that time she did say Daayan vanshi's aren't loyal to each other. You want another idea ?


Dola - You have an outstanding memory. I forgot about that. Why didn't they mention it in the episode tho !

Mo - The reason i buy her loyalty is because Pr seems to have done a number on her. Mommy issues are very common these days.


Shekhar- i have an inkling . He loves Ved more than Ansh so he won't kill her for that. He loves her more than khandaan ka izzat that won't work. And even if the world would be destroyed he would opt to save her instead. So it has to be something bigger than her. What drives Shekhar ultimately.


Also can u give me any ideas as to why Ved Shekhar would fight ?

Well, just a bit of the OS is left... Then I will have to do the proof reading too.

Purple: well, I was thinking the same. But how will he come to know about it?? This is actually what is troubling me more...

Yes, this is the reason why I am also buying Mo's loyalty towards her mother... Although as I always say, we can never trust the makers!!! You never know what they might be planning!!! They might show Mo coming to know that Pr wants to make Ved an Ekayan ( that is if she doesn't know it already) and then going against Pr???

Shekhar... He definitely loves Ved more than anything or anyone. So there has to be a solid reason for him to go against his wife...

Ved and Shekhar fight... Bahut difficult hai!!! But since you said that youbare planning to make Ved as a person who wants Bhasmu's powers, right??? So, maybe that Shekhar trusted Ved when she said that she is not power hungry but he comes to know about Ved's master plan of gaining powers???

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Zombies... So, the people doing dandiya were also zombies???


I just rewatched that scene i didn't notice the extras the first time around. But by the time those zombies did come there was no one except Rathods. I guess they were there to fill the scene.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Oh thanks for reminding me i will definitely consult you before writing that who dun it story. Yes her hi hi hi is a problem but rookie detective or bounty hunter she could be.

Sure. Anytime...🤗

Waise, Dillu can be a good Bounty Hunter... As it is, she is always ready to kachha chabao anyone!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Well, just a bit of the OS is left... Then I will have to do the proof reading too.

Purple: well, I was thinking the same. But how will he come to know about it?? This is actually what is troubling me more...

Oh u should have specified. Daayan vriksh - Mo showed him a dream of being king of the world. And then maybe Ved or Rishi in anger taunts him that Mo is just using him. That part stays with him or something else makes him suspicious of Mo & he goes to Daayan vriksh to consult about how to take over the world & finds out Mo's intentions


Second senario is having been thwarted in his marriage to dillu or any other reason Edv takes out his anger on Mo & his trying to kill her in the heat of the moment


Third scenario after being shown that vision by Mo of being the most powerful in the world he goes to Ni's office to find out from the Daayan Rahaysya book. He hides in sight while Ni Sa are there & he overhears their convo with Kagraj about Mo being 250 years and her dying in one year unless she snacks on Ansh.

Fourth scenario he overhears Mo while she talks to herself making one of her plans or Mo's convo with Ved that makes him suspicious.


Want any more ideas ?


Yes, this is the reason why I am also buying Mo's loyalty towards her mother... Although as I always say, we can never trust the makers!!! You never know what they might be planning!!! They might show Mo coming to know that Pr wants to make Ved an Ekayan ( that is if she doesn't know it already) and then going against Pr???

She defo knows. Mo we'll know reaction when Pr dies. Her jealousy of Ved is real tho.

Shekhar... He definitely loves Ved more than anything or anyone. So there has to be a solid reason for him to go against his wife...

Ved and Shekhar fight... Bahut difficult hai!!! But since you said that youbare planning to make Ved as a person who wants Bhasmu's powers, right??? So, maybe that Shekhar trusted Ved when she said that she is not power hungry but he comes to know about Ved's master plan of gaining powers???

That doesn't help there It is indeed difficult.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Okay, the OS became too long so I turned it into a TS.

Oh u should have specified. Daayan vriksh - Mo showed him a dream of being king of the world. And then maybe Ved or Rishi in anger taunts him that Mo is just using him. That part stays with him or something else makes him suspicious of Mo & he goes to Daayan vriksh to consult about how to take over the world & finds out Mo's intentions


Second senario is having been thwarted in his marriage to dillu or any other reason Edv takes out his anger on Mo & his trying to kill her in the heat of the moment


Third scenario after being shown that vision by Mo of being the most powerful in the world he goes to Ni's office to find out from the Daayan Rahaysya book. He hides in sight while Ni Sa are there & he overhears their convo with Kagraj about Mo being 250 years and her dying in one year unless she snacks on Ansh.

Fourth scenario he overhears Mo while she talks to herself making one of her plans or Mo's convo with Ved that makes him suspicious.


Okay thanks... These are just perfect!!!

Anyways, this week I'll be completing my Navratri TS. Will start my story next week or so...

She defo knows. Mo we'll know reaction when Pr dies. Her jealousy of Ved is real tho.

Well, if she knows, then it is another thing... But yes, she is loyal to Pr but at the same time she is afraid of her too. Besides if we take Pr's word, Mo might be wanting to become her equal. So, if they show her current nature of being power hungry, then she might not feel bad for Pr's death... Anyways, it comes later. But yes, her jealousy for Ved is real and strong...


That doesn't help there It is indeed difficult.

Exactly... It is really difficult.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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By the way TS do u mean short story?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hallyumint

By the way TS do u mean short story?

A two-part story...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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oh Two shots sure

good luck

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