FF: Darkhaast / Tum Se Hi |PreRish| Updated: Ch 11 on Pg 17 | 17/9 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I'm so confused! So many questions!

Is Prerna his wife? Or is she Mrs Basu? Or is someone else Mrs Bajaj?

She was Prerna Basu.

What?

And what happened that night? She gave her embryo to whom? And why did she suddenly marry Bajaj? Twins happened? Whose? Please clarify 😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I have so many questions

What happened that night?

Is Prerna real/biological mom of Sneha?

Please continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

I'm so confused! So many questions!

Is Prerna his wife? Or is she Mrs Basu? Or is someone else Mrs Bajaj?

She was Prerna Basu.

What?

And what happened that night? She gave her embryo to whom? And why did she suddenly marry Bajaj? Twins happened? Whose? Please clarify 😭


Ayee. SORRY. I was thinking of how annoying Anurag is and the Basu are and if I want to mock them or not ki gait se Basu like Diya instead of Bajaj. Corrected now. Such a stupid me.


I'm back to confusing everyone. 😒

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

I'm so confused! So many questions!

Is Prerna his wife? Or is she Mrs Basu? Or is someone else Mrs Bajaj?

She was Prerna Basu.

What?

And what happened that night? She gave her embryo to whom? And why did she suddenly marry Bajaj? Twins happened? Whose? Please clarify 😭


ALSO. Girl I was a gushy mess reading your FF Green Eyed Monster and the there is an index!!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 1:- When Prerna was scribbling names so that they seemed appropriate to her and when she scratched out 'Bajaj' I thought that she was getting a divorce. But then a scowling three year old sat beside her..oops sorry...a two and a half year old....and I was both confused and intrigued....kukki's insistence about her correct age reminded of Michelle Tanner from Full House. Poor Mr. Sen....stuck between Mr and Mrs. bajaj.... I like the dynamic between Rishabh-Prerna, how he considers her a moral police with kiddish tendencies. And then the big reveal which to me was unexpected...'The battle to change Kookie’s name.'

Chapter 2:- Sneha Aamara Rishabh Bajaj ...is a cutieee…..Prerna calling Rishabh ‘Bajju’ and pulling his cheeks was adorable ...even i want to do that…. Loved the story….Please update soon.

PS: I'm still very confused. And intrigued.

Who did Prerna give her embryo to? And twins? Was she married to Anurag? RB did call her Mrs. Basu. But then Mr. Sen the lawyer called her Mrs. Bajaj. How did Prerna and RB get married? Is Prerna Sneha’s biological mom?....Questions…Questions

Edit: So he was talking to Mrs. Mohini Basu and not Prerna...Got it

-Love, Rekha

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AraBearxo

Ayee. SORRY. I was thinking of how annoying Anurag is and the Basu are and if I want to mock them or not ki gait se Basu like Diya instead of Bajaj. Corrected now. Such a stupid me.

I'm back to confusing everyone. 😒

Oh galti se😆 arey koi nahi! Confusions honge tabhi toh story intriguing hogi! You write, we'll ask questions, you answer, sab khush 😎

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AraBearxo

ALSO. Girl I was a gushy mess reading your FF Green Eyed Monster and the there is an index!!!

Yes, there is an index of MANY stories! Read em all, I want a comment on each one of them as soon as possible ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AraBearxo


Ayeee! Hi! The last time we met you were a red (rockerz?) how you're an addict? Congracts, congracts! It is nice too meet you too. I remember number de bola tha before I left IF 😆 but I missed you too, missy! I got notified that you changed your username too. New IF is a maze for sure. I feel like a grandma navigating it,

True, I was a rockerz then..Thank you..🤗 Missed you and missed your writings too...I have lost count of the number of times I have gone back and read Meherbaan... Yaa I changed the UN yesterday..Even I am getting the hang of the new IF..But it is easy, you will get the hang of it soon enough..😎

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ara the second update is absolutely lovely..It has so much to gush about and to go gaga over..So we have Rishabh and Prerna the happy couple, with Sneha in their happy life..And as usual they are people who cannot see their joy, I am so glad Rishabh gave Mohini a shut up call..His sarcastic approach cracked me up...And it looks like Prerna along with being Rishabh Bajaj's wife, Sneha Bajaj's mother has found a family too..A family in the Bose and Mishra's, I am really glad the Bajaj's share a tight knit bond and they have people who consider them their own too...Just a guess I think the Bose family is actually Sneha's real mother's side of family, who have taken in Prerna as their own, on the night which drastically changed Rishabh and Prerna's lives, making her Mrs. Bajaj...But whatever the mystery of the night may be, but it brought Prerna - Rishabh together and from the looks of their lives now, it was a blessing for the two of them..Brilliant update..👏

Ara reading this gives me Meherbaan feels and I am loving it...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Three:

Rishabh Bajaj was not a careless person. He was not a careful person either. Rishabh Bajaj was a 27 year old, a PhD – post doc candidate at Cambridge, when his world came crumbling down.

You couldn’t say that Bajaj was a carefree person. He wasn’t. He was quiet, reserved and doted on his then girlfriend – Annika. He wasn’t the best partner either. He remembered living in his lab, being too particular and being sparing with his time. He was after all learning the ropes of the Bajaj empire and fulfilling his dream. Somewhere along that time Rishabh Bajaj became Mr. Rishabh Bajaj.

Feared, loathed, hated, unmerciful Rishabh Bajaj who slit your throat on the street only to watch you die as opposed to hiring a sharp shooter to murder you secretly. Mr. Rishabh Bajaj in the final months of his degree hated people with pride. The very same people who strategically murdered his parents, the Annika who followed him around since her teens, his sister Sneha who brought misfortune to the family and the so called despicable man she loved.

Mr. Rishabh Bajaj had no eye on the Bajaj empire. Unlike his brother-in-law Rakesh Roy who married his sister Shnehal Bajaj for love and then kept her captive. Love? Until he burnt her alive when she couldn’t bear him a child. An heir? So, what did senior Mr. Bajaj do? He burnt his daughter’s husband and every last person linked to the Roy family alive. Despicable? Not yet.

Bajaj swirled the bitter brandy in his glass as he reminisced his past. He bit on his cigar a little bit harder to suppress the anger.

Annika. Someone he had considered his own person had taken his parents in a ploy to reveal their atrocity. Some self-sacrificial lamb she was. Or was she? His so-called minx had held his parent’s captive until Rakesh Roy’s people had gotten hold of them. Rakesh Roy apparently had a mistress. A mistress who could never have a child. A mistress who had no family. A mistress who had sardonically offered to play surrogate. And a mistress who cost Rishabh Bajaj’s family their life.

So, when Rishabh Bajaj claimed the chopped up bodies of his parents. He also claimed his beloved Annika. And he slowly, legally, knowingly and painfully killed her with fear she had used to cause his sister Shnehal Bajaj’s life. A child. And he named the child Sneha – minus the L for love. For his daughter would never be a victim like his sister was.

Sneha Rishabh Bajaj was the epitome of Rishabh Bajaj. Grumpy, quiet, adorable, and constantly annoyed. His Kooki resembled a grumpy animated cookie. Rishabh Bajaj loved every tiny bit of his daughter’s existence despite the circumstances of her birth. It was as if Kooki touched his frozen heart for a moment letting it beat for a tiny enough – enough to survive – until she came along. Prerna.

Did Rishabh Bajaj know Prerna? He did. He did know her. He could still remember her scowling face as her parents asked her to keep Shnehal company days after her chemo rounds. His parents, Suvarna and Hritesh Bajaj, were busy and asking a scrawny girl in the other end of the deal keep Shnehal company was the best Rishabh could do. He had to after all present his first thesis for his PhD.


So, 23 year Rishabh Bajaj paid Mr. and Mrs. Sharma a couple thousands more to let their 15 year daughter Prerna Sharma keep his daughter company. And Prerna hated every moment of it. To Prerna, it was a nightmare to spend an extra minute with someone 11 years older to her rather than spending time with her boy crush some Anurag Basu.

He met Prerna years later the night his sister died, the night his parents were abducted along with Annika and the night he found himself losing – for the first time ever.

The very same Prerna who had given his sister life since birth. The very Prerna who lived at the Bajaj empire’s beck and call through her family. The Prerna who was burdened with hospital bills and financial burdens as her parents and siblings fought in the ICU for their lives.

They lay seated on seat outside the ICU. Rishabh Bajaj shocked at the turn his life was taking. Prerna Sharma weeping at the impending death of her family.

So middle man in the transaction offered the Sharma’s a final offer: a confidential offer to Prerna Sharma. A successfully fertilized embryo in exchange for all the medical expenses and the best treatment money could offer for her family. And the silly fawn agreed.

A/N:

Also: Rishabh is 31 and Prerna 23 here

Too many updates. Enjoy while I'm free.

Edited by AraBearxo - 6 years ago

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