For Chapter 1
Dayumn! Girl, my mind has skyrocketed thinking of the complexity of their now Ex-&-etcetera relationship. Shiv seems to interesting, naughty and playful character with crazy attitude to deal with. That guy is just so speech rendering for the great Mr. Bajaj . I loved the essence you portrayed the freshly brewing awkwardness between them and off course, Prerna who stood twisting her brain when he called her a mere acquaintance. I believe that's what Anurag might have felt in the episode telecasted yesterday.
And then that info dump inreflex was just perfect and high on point. Shiv is really intriguing to me, upto an extent that I am slightly more curious for him than the actual leads.
Coming to descriptives, everything felt blessed to life and authenticity with the words that flew by. It held all of the fragrance of emotions as you define, be it the jolly-tumbling muse to find the ex-halves ( if anything like this exists) then realisation about Anurag and AnuPre's wedding in November ( too far, there is still chance for PreRish but please iss baar Anurag ka dil mat todna); the persistent silence and proximity of being together or rather standing together. The playful chit chat on Shiv's entry ( I am going Gaga over him to a greater extent 😳). Everything was visible through words as if living through it. It was a fantastic combination of words, description, attitude, character arc and loving I am hooked to right from first line.
PS: Opening quote has stole my peace of frolicking heart💓.
Loved it!