A Coffee, a Tea, Stars and Some Talks - PreRish One Shot - Page 2

It was awesome 👏🏻👏🏻

I absolutely loved this convo between the two

And Mr. Bajaj wondering, when he will be good enough for her

Great OS 🤗

I absolutely loved this OS.

This reminded me of Asad and Zoya and their conversations over coffee where they spilled out their concerns and fears.

The fact that he didn’t know her preference and brought over both tea and coffee reaffirms the fact that he is really considerate.

Aww! He longs to be best for her... he is!! By long miles ♥️

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Why isnt there a SUPER LIKE BUTTON ugh! I love how you churn out PreRish stories from the recent epis. And this is a piece of BEAUTY. But more than that i appreciate how you end with Bajaj pondering if he will be ever get some love/concern from Prerna too. Wonderful OS ♥️👏

That's so sweet of you! Thank you so much. ❤ Haha. Half my tales end with one pondering, wishing and wondering about the other. Thank you.

Originally posted by: ShumiM

Beautiful.we the audience deserves something similar like this ,in the show ,but what I can say 😭. Thanks for this sweet thing.do write more.

Thank you for such kind words. ❤

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Very well written!

You captured their emotions really well.

The duo sat in a comfortable silence for several more minutes, with one admiring the other for his love for his daughter and the other... ridiculously wondering if there would come a day when... he would be best for her as well.

^ Here's my favourite part.

Thank you so much. ❤

I am glad that you liked that bit. 🤗

Originally posted by: sneha_17

I know we won’t get such beautiful scenes in show.

Sometimes being with one when they feel alone would make a lot of difference

Sometimes it better to be with a stranger rather than being alone

Sometimes a sorry would make a difference

This tea and sorry should atleast make her feel better, poor soul

Mr.Bajaj should start treating Prerna with respect whole heartedly, he made a deal and got married with a trust which got stumbled in a moment.

Superb writing, excellent dialogues. Simple and sweet gestures

You have summed up so beautifully. Thank you so much, Sneha. I am glad you think so lovely about this shot.

Originally posted by: Zaalima_5

Wow.. Moi speechless.. Read twice..

Baju's stalking skills..🤣 i m impressed... 😎

Twice? Really? That's so wonderful to hear. Thank you so much. ❤❤

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

Liked it more than that loved it.

It was beautiful. Prerna's guilt as a mother had to be there she considers Cookie to be hers. Giving birth does not make one a parent it's the care and love you give the child makes you a parent. The guilt becomes more if you haven't given birth to the child but for Prerna Cookie is as if she has given birth to her. Cookie has made her a mother. It was good that Prerna knows that she was careless but it was not intentional baki leads toh meri wajah se mein 2 episodes nikaal deti. Her father would have understood and consoled her if he was there. Bajaj mein bhi a bad man in her eyes but she knows he is a good father because she had one herself.

See you get angry at Mr. Bajaj for making a deal and marrying Prerna shouting at her for Cookie but then gestures like this bring tea and coffee jo chahiye is so sweet. You automatically go Aww.

After he has become best for her, he ccould be shown to bring tea, coffee She will ask sirf teea or coffee third option nahi hai... Me he should say.

Mr. Bajaj realized his mistake and apologized. He has learned to say Sorry and Thank you after meeting Prerna wo bhi sirf Prerna ke liye specially.

It's good that they had this conversation if not MUs would be created and there would be tension between them which is not good for Cookie.

He made a deal with her and thought because of the deal she is caring for Cookie, now think Mr. Bajaj if you had made the deal with a wrong woman who could have treated Cookie like an evil step mom but then he observed her even if it was 2 or 3 times he saw her with Cookie but he must have felt that she was the one so he made the deal with her. Also people call her a glorified nanny but she is a mother and when he says she is Cookie's mother he means it. She did not want to share her problem he let her be instead of pestering her batao bato karke increasing her frustration and agony. She will share when she will trust you enough so be patient.

Mr. Bajaj ka Prerna ke liye RESPECT badh gaya.

She wonders if he will ever be best for her, hoga Prerna hoga dheer dharo.

Oh my goodness. Thanks a ton, Chahat for taking out time to write such a wonderful comment to me. ❤

You have put every thing so beautifully that here I am sitting, looking at your comment and wondering what I should reply. Thank you. ❤

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

I want this, in the show.

There is so much silent love in this OS! I absolutely loved it❤️

Ah you got it so right. I love silent love. Not a much fan of words but truly insane for the gestures. Thank you so much, Blues. ❤❤

Originally posted by: MR21

This one is brilliant. Prerna is guilty of her negligence towards Cookie. Her conversation with her father looking at stars is 😢. I loved how Bajaj brought both coffee and tea for her. His heartfelt sorry❤️.

"Cookie is mine because she considers me as hers and that makes an unsaid agreement that she is mine to look after."

Loved this. Acknowledging what they think about each other with words and ofcourse his thoughts thinking whether he would be best for her.

You are so kind and generous with your praises. Thank you very much. Thrilled to know that you enjoyed reading this one. ❤❤