Ariya FF/SS: Talaash - Page 70

Perfect update 😍😍😍

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Now I'm going to read it once again 😉😉

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Wow the yo yo of emotions of arjun

It must have been tough for him to realise someone has seen his vulnerable side. But leaving a woman alone.. Thank God he came back

Wondering how ri will react? Is it her turn to push him away due to secrets that are with her and how it will affect them

Waiting to see how rest of team react the next day

Love u for updating

Nice update

Loved ariya's sweet moment

It was beautifully penned

Plz cont soon

Heck yeah, Ri feeling guilty and leaving. For once let the guy run after her lol.

And Riya saying Jo bhi Kiya apne kiya😆 she's so innocent aww.

Ariya romance at the end was lovely

Is she guilty for hiding something from arjun???

Arjun gonna try to move on in his life great

Hope he won't feel guilty of kissing her

Awesome update

Loved it

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Awesome update

Loved it

Sameer and arjun are missing Roshni terribly

Arjun shares his pain with Riya but later scolds her for the same

Lol...aap drive kar sakte hai

Riya was getting chased but Arjun realised what he did and went back for her

She had told Arjun that he wont lose her toh fir why dd she back off in such a manner?

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Huhhh.., wow... this is what I call the update...

no words to describe how brilliantly you have portrayed each character’s feelings

Amazing

So I agree what you have said in notes about rathod.. he had lots of pressure, loss of two best friends and also he was man with principals... he goes by book... and by book there’s no sikander coz they don’t have any proof

But he was acting like d**k... i do understand him and I liked him but in that moment I am angry on him just like his team members... doesn’t mean they hate him but angry on him... it’s just momentary

Sakshi was brave... no one dared to speak a word, when she scolded him... good

Poor rathod... he broke down too... he needs to understand that Arjun is just a human being... of course he is super cop but he is not super hero or a god.... I think rathod had too much expectations from Arjun and when he couldn’t save roshni he was Blaming Arjun for everything... whether there’s sikander or not... he should realize that if it’s in Arjun’s hand he would have died in order to save roshni... but sometimes, you can’t save everyone, no matter how hard you try... this is my thoughts... I might be wrong

And Arjun’s break down.,. You have described each and every single feelings so well... I literally was seeing this infront of my eyes... Arjun wanted rathod to understand him... actually he needed his best friend... they both need a confrontation..

Glad riya was with him.., she was a good support for him... he was waves and riya was his kinara... no matter How wild and big waves can be, they calmed down at kinara.... That symbolism was too good...

riya felt guilty.. why? Plz give something,,.. don’t reveal everything but give something about her

At last Arjun left riya alone on the beach but he came back for her... and their kiss... supercop ke andar ka mard uspe havi ho gaya... Does he love her or just a desire for her? It’s complicated... she loves him and hiding something big from him... that made her guilty...

Can’t wait too long... update faster plz....

Amazing update. I really liked it. I feel you are portraying Sameer 's feeling only for roshni not for Arjun. No offense this is my thinking. Whatever relation we have in life depends on trust, belief and understanding nature. Especially in friendship we won't consider one friend great/ one less. It's true that Sameer is a practical man and doesn't believe in sikhander's existence but he should at least support his friend no. Well that's my opinion.

Yes, you have brilliantly portrayed arjun's emotions and glad that Riya is supportive. Then arjun's mood swings and riya's grief. It's so beautiful. I think Arjun is in great confusion that's why sometimes he hurts Riya and sometimes couldn't control his emotions.

Riya knows something big about sikhander and she is hiding from everyone. Please enlighten on this matter as previous parts didn't clarify about connection between Riya and sikhander.Last scene added confusion not only to Arjun but also me.

Will be waiting for your next update.

Continue soon

Thank You for this amazing. update.

Love the scene between arjun and riya where expressed everything was feeling, after all everyone needs someone they can rely on and pour out their feeling too.

The kiss between between was great, but feel they are definately not in postion that it was out of love, hope this doesn't create misunderstanding between them but brings them closer.

Looking forward to the next update.

Awesome update

Love it

I understand Sam's state..he is right on his place..he has lost his best friend..

Poor Arjun so broken..n Riya handle him..

Oh ho he get angry on her..but baad me usse bachane BHI aa Gaya..

Omg ariya kissed..wow..

I don't understand ke Arjun ke taraf se ye Kuch pal ki need thi ya fir deep in heart he feel for her..

N Riya Ka aise guilt me chale jana..I guess she know some thing related to arni or Sik which leads this guilt..

Plz continue soon

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