Ishra FF: Dil Ki Chaahat Last part pg84 dt.19.9.19 UPDATED - Page 48

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Posted: 6 years ago

Emotional update

Raman was feeling guilty shame and disgust of himself for what ishita have gone through maya was feeling pitty for him aww sia is so cute loves the way she was looking raman worriedly when he was sad next day ishita woke up she was hyper she wanted to see sia maya took her to ramans home simmi got happy seeing ishita maya told ishita she is ramans sister ishita greeted her and asked about sia simmi told her simmi was confused maya explained her ishita was plansently surprised seeing sia walking and calling her mumma ishita hugged her ishita saw her and raman sia pics she was looking happy in pics ishita was leaving with sia simmi tried to stop her but was not able to maya dropped ishita to her home ishita was not able to sleep in night ramans scene was emotional

Pls update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

You are just amazing superb awesome

Just loved loved it so much

Thank you so so much for the update

Please please update next part soon

Eagerly waiting

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Posted: 6 years ago

"Instead of bringing me to this house, he should have rather left me dying and walked away like he had in the past"

This one👏

All the pent up frustration I had in me after reading what he did to Ishita, I just felt like that burden moved away from my heart, as soon as I read this statement.😭

Yeah, she preferred to die, rather than taking help from him. I could understand her. That's why, I never felt happy about the last 6 months journey. His care and concern is nothing before the burden she has been carrying since he left her. Ashok tormenting her, because she is still stuck to Raman, only intensified her agony. Even after moving on from him, she still has to pay the price of loving him, because Ashok was jealous of Raman. She must have felt foolish for ending up with these two men. One man, left her shattered and other man added to the agony. She has definitely been foolish for choosing Ashok, but she didn’t have choice, and she did try to be a good wife, but her destiny was cruel. Raman was the only light she saw in her life. In rest of the people, she kept no hopes, so they backstabbing her didn't hurt her like how Raman's mistakes hurt her. I understand her completely. I am glad she said this and I.would have been even more glad had Raman heard this. No, I don't want to see him in pain, but I want him to know her pain, bit by bit. Every bit.

"She hoped that someday he would come back to her but he didn't. .."

She is ready to forgive him. Even after shattering her dreams, she did wait for him, because she knew the man she loved. He would have come, but that phone call ruined everything. And looks like she gave up her hopes after seeing Raman and shagun together somewhere. Raman just relied on a phone call and Ishita decided to move on, once she saw them with her own eyes. This raised my respect for her. She did give a chance till last minute. She trusted him, till she could. But Raman, he has no idea what a gem of a person she is. Yes, there was a misunderstanding, but the effort from his side was not enough. He wasted time thinking and tossing, blaming himself. He didn't react, hence the consequences.


"His selfishness had sucked life out of Ishita and now she was only breathing, with no hopes, dreams and desires"

Once Simmi said, that he should not blame himself for the decisions Ishota made. If Ishita choose Ashok, out of everyone, and he turned to be a bad husband, how can he help?

But the past 6 years, the first 4 years, she kept waiting for him, and the rest of the 2 lives, she was tortured for loving him. Her life was full of him. Maybe her life would have been better, had she not loved him. He left her a huge bundle of pain and misery to deal with before leaving her. That pain would have not been a part of her life, had she not meet him.

Did Ishita really marry Ashok, to show it off to Raman, like raman thinks? Did I miss this somewhere?

"When I look around, I only see mistakes. ..which one is bigger I can't decide"

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

"Some wounds don't heal with time...they olny get worse"

I think the same. Out of Ishita's context, some wounds don't heal, rather they only get worse, leaving a human like a corpse💔

"When I look around, I only see his succes and my failure"

She does not know the full story of Raman. She is seeing him in the place exactly where he dreamt to be. She thought he was happy, but she spent her whole life dealing with pain he left for her. I understand her.

"All my life I've been dependant on others but not anymore"

I felt like she was talking about emotional support even. I could see no warmth in the way she dealt with Maya even. She was devastated.

"Maya indeed saw a very different Ishita....she was vulnerable, emotional like before but she wasn't weak. She wanted to be strong for herself and her daughter and that made Maya happy"

Yes. Even I see a different Ishita. Sia is the only one who managed to bring this out of her. Imagining Ishita now without Sia,is scaring me. She would have been a lifeless corpse. Sia instilled some emotions in her, and made her strong.

"She'd been nursing a bruised heart but she had tried to be a good wife"

The days she must have really tried to move on from Raman. She must have tried to be practical and rational, but it might have hurt her more. I wish you write her state of mind, clearly when she tried to give up on raman.

"He'd easily wiped her out of his life, with no trace of her...and she still had his name on her hands"

Irony. She must have thought. She might have appeaed like a stupid to her, for atill clinging on to his name, while he moved on from her so easily. I wonder will she not think about Shagun, and why did he divorced her, and why is he marrying her again? She would see his love for her, if she thinks for a while, but too occupied in her misery to give a shot.

"All these years he did repent but couldn't actually feel the ache of a crushed heart"

You told me, you wanted Raman to feel the exact pain what Ishita has faced, and that's why the marriage episode. Even though he has seen enough pain, feeljng her pain is important. He would learn a lesson for lifetime.

"He knew his repentance couldn't heal her words. He knew he didn't deserve her...but still he wanted her"

That was what I was asking you. How could he dare to dream to that extent? The past 6 months, his happy life with Sia and Ishita only blinded him. I thought he would never dare to even dream, let alone marry.

"It felt like someone had cracked open his ribs and gripped his bleeding heart in their hands only to nearly squeeze the life out of it"

This pain. I understand. Even Ishita couldn't feel this pain. This pain is exclusively meant for people like Raman. That squeezing heart wali pain, only people like Raman know it. It's pretty bad I say.

Want to write more. But maybe tomorrow 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

I am extremely sorry that I get so lost in the story, and react strongly ranting essays but I just forget to appreciate for a while. Sorry😭

Every word written in bold above, have truly struck the chord both with the story and within me. Every sentence, has manged to trigger an emotion beyond words, which I could relate it to every level.

Like the words you mentioned for describing Raman's pain in the last sentence,"squeezing his heart". I don't know why you chose those words for Raman but not Ishita, but hey, it is apt for him more than Ishita. I was amazed👏👏

You give a lot of thought before writing, and just don't write a story in a flow cuz it has to be told somehow. Every word you choose to describe a character's emotion, be it Raman, Ishita, Maya, Iqbal or Sia, I can't predict how they would react in a situation, but when you make them do a thing, or make them say a word, I just can't help, but feel amazed every damn time, that how careful you be in maintaining the characteristics of a character.

Like when Ishita said, he should have left me on road dying....., that one👏👏👏👏.

No word would have matched her pain but that sentence.👏👏👏. I could immediately feel the adrenaline rush in myself, cuz I was waiting for this to happen, and I know this would happen and you made it happen.😭

Even Sia, curling up around Raman, or kissing Ishita's cheeks, everything I could imagine. The little girl's emotions are perfectly described even👏👏👏

Thankyou for this masterpiece. You are an awesome writer. Did you try writing something commercially? If not,you should. You will rule girl😊

Edited by --QUEEN-- - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: --QUEEN--

I am extremely sorry that I get so lost in the story, and react strongly ranting essays but I just forget to appreciate for a while. Sorry😭

Every word written in bold above, have truly struck the chord both with the story and within me. Every sentence, has manged to trigger an emotion beyond words, which I could relate it to every level.

Like the words you mentioned for describing Raman's pain in the last sentence,"squeezing his heart". I don't know why you chose those words for Raman but not Ishita, but hey, it is apt for him more than Ishita. I was amazed👏👏

You give a lot of thought before writing, and just don't write a story in a flow cuz it has to be told somehow. Every word you choose to describe a character's emotion, be it Raman, Ishita, Maya, Iqbal or Sia, I can't predict how they would react in a situation, but when you make them do a thing, or make them say a word, I just can't help, but feel amazed every damn time, that how careful you be in maintaining the characteristics of a character.

Like when Ishita said, he should have left me on road dying....., that one👏👏👏👏.

No word would have matched her pain but that sentence.👏👏👏. I could immediately feel the adrenaline rush in myself, cuz I was waiting for this to happen, and I know this would happen and you made it happen.😭

Even Sia, curling up around Raman, or kissing Ishita's cheeks, everything I could imagine. The little girl's emotions are perfectly described even👏👏👏

Thankyou for this masterpiece. You are an awesome writer. Did you try writing something commercially? If not,you should. You will rule girl😊

Hey

Why be apologetic to express your opinion.. and I don’t consider it as rant, yes it’s strong and fierce but can’t deny it’s honesty . The fact that you feel so strongly just shows how deeply you’ve been moved by my writing. Which is a compliment in itself.

Some of the chapters in the past including this one and some upcoming ones have been very challenging to write..though I wrote this story two years back but I clearly remember how emotionally and mentally drained out I felt after penning down those chapters. The frustration and anger of ishita or the female protagonist would stay with me for days after writing those chapters. I would find myself cranky and irritated coz I couldn’t detach myself from the story and it’s characters..Ishita’s pain , Raman’s helplessness and guilt would keep playing on my mind. These days I just edit the chapter a little before posting on this forum but still the characters don’t fail to stir something within me.. and I can be only glad and grateful that emotions are coming across.

I know you wish to read more about Ishita’s painful past but sorry dear, I will be focusing more on the present and the future.. writing something that’s not been pleasant is not easy for me too..the grief seriously sucks me..not that the upcoming chapters are less emotional.

As far as writing long comments is concerned, a writer craves for it..I especially do.. so I shall take this opportunity to thank all the readers who comment..it really encourages me. Please keep doing so. Again both my ongoing stories have the highest views and the lowest number of comments..it’s like 2000+ views/ chapter and around 8-9 comments lol

So you can imagine how badly I need comments ..but it’s okay can’t force anyone ..this is something which I consider as respect towards a writer’s time and effort, which should come from within.

I take solace from the fact that it’s being highly viewed..after all you don’t waste your time reading something you dislike.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi, please do be so sad. We love your story..we get emotional.

Maybe Raman exit news is not making them to comment, but there are being invisible but we all love your emotional stroy how you take

I read, but sometimes I comment. But please don't be discouraged, you are a awesome writer..please continue..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

Hey

Why be apologetic to express your opinion.. and I don’t consider it as rant, yes it’s strong and fierce but can’t deny it’s honesty . The fact that you feel so strongly just shows how deeply you’ve been moved by my writing. Which is a compliment in itself.

Some of the chapters in the past including this one and some upcoming ones have been very challenging to write..though I wrote this story two years back but I clearly remember how emotionally and mentally drained out I felt after penning down those chapters. The frustration and anger of ishita or the female protagonist would stay with me for days after writing those chapters. I would find myself cranky and irritated coz I couldn’t detach myself from the story and it’s characters..Ishita’s pain , Raman’s helplessness and guilt would keep playing on my mind. These days I just edit the chapter a little before posting on this forum but still the characters don’t fail to stir something within me.. and I can be only glad and grateful that emotions are coming across.

I know you wish to read more about Ishita’s painful past but sorry dear, I will be focusing more on the present and the future.. writing something that’s not been pleasant is not easy for me too..the grief seriously sucks me..not that the upcoming chapters are less emotional.

As far as writing long comments is concerned, a writer craves for it..I especially do.. so I shall take this opportunity to thank all the readers who comment..it really encourages me. Please keep doing so. Again both my ongoing stories have the highest views and the lowest number of comments..it’s like 2000+ views/ chapter and around 8-9 comments lol

So you can imagine how badly I need comments ..but it’s okay can’t force anyone ..this is something which I consider as respect towards a writer’s time and effort, which should come from within.

I take solace from the fact that it’s being highly viewed..after all you don’t waste your time reading something you dislike.

Yeah, the number of views, the number of likes, is no where in comparison to the number of comments😐

I think, or most probably I have observed, writers made lots of friends here, and they send pms to multiple people, so people who are not so regular to forum even get a pm, and read their story and comment.

Those people who comment are not regular forumwale. They all have left long back. People appear only when certain particular writers update their stories, they might not visit forum regularly.

But trust me, I have been in yhm forum since 2014, no masterpiece is left unnoticed here. People used to encourage every individual who excels in writing stuff, and girl had you been here that time, you would have been a star of yhm forum already😎

It's just the wrong timing that you have entered in forum, you are not getting comments properly. But chill, number of views already hold a record. Another record is, lowest number of pages with highest number of views😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

Back to bother you again, seems like I’m the only one who always pester you for the updates...Sorry, but what to do?? Always excited to read more and more from you..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Emotional update...

Poor Sia is missing Raman terribly..,

Sia searched her Paa and asked Ishita about him but Ishita misunderstood her...

Raman came to her house to talk with her ..

Ishita don’t want to trust or let him in her life again..

He begged her to come back with Sia but she didn’t melt...

Ishita was amazed to see his love for Sia though she didn’t wish to believe....

Raman begged her to let him in to see Sia but she closed the door on his face...

Raman stayed there all night and requested Ishita to come back...

Simmi was correct and wanted Raman to give some space to Ishita....

Sia got fever as she wasn’t eating anything and missing her Paa...😭

So Maya visited Ishita and Sia to check on Sia as Raman felt something might be wrong with Ishita...

Maya was irritated with Ishita’s ego....

Please update soon..

Thank you...

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