Thread 2: Destined Love... (New thread created) - Page 87

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Thank you so much stuti for continuing with the story. Thanks to manasi too for posting the chapter. As usual it was a beautiful chapter very well written. You are one amazing writer.

Wanted to point out something, pls dont take it otherwise. I am an avid reader of your stories. I Know the reality of 16th century was completely different from 21st century. But somehow i felt cheap to read at the start of the chapter where jalal was with some random begum. I know this was the reality of those times, but on one side he is craving deeply for poornima bai. That part of him being with some random begum could have been avoided. It left a bad taste in my mouth.

I am really really sorry to point it out. But could not stop myself from doing so. I hope you wont misunderstand.

Hi Divya... 🤗 thank you so much for waiting, reading and then sharing your 2 cents here. It is very important for me...

About the point you mentioned here about the random Begam, I always knew it was a controversial part, and most will not like it. I could have avoided it easily but still I intentionally put that as I wanted to show a very small snippet of 16th century emperor's life style and the actual picture of harem. I understand it feels cheap because it is, but I believe it was a very common thing for those days that the emperor used to go to the different women for relaxation. I wanted to clear at some point of the story that Jalal is not different from those... Maybe it look like a bad time as he is craving for Purnima, but what I thought is Jalal is going through a dark time, utterly frustrated in love-life and also losing his loyal people from his side, so it is the time when he would want to forget his misery by applying anything- be it getting drunk or being with a woman. I had thought to give some insight of Jalal's mind in this particular part but skipped it for two reasons- one, I wanted to fast-forward the track without stretching, and two, it might have looked cheaper to read and affect the flow of story.

Take this part as a writer's experiment. 😛 I might have failed badly to show it properly, but don't worry, Jalal still loves Purnima.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Hi Divya... 🤗 thank you so much for waiting, reading and then sharing your 2 cents here. It is very important for me...

About the point you mentioned here about the random Begam, I always knew it was a controversial part, and most will not like it. I could have avoided it easily but still I intentionally put that as I wanted to show a very small snippet of 16th century emperor's life style and the actual picture of harem. I understand it feels cheap because it is, but I believe it was a very common thing for those days that the emperor used to go to the different women for relaxation. I wanted to clear at some point of the story that Jalal is not different from those... Maybe it look like a bad time as he is craving for Purnima, but what I thought is Jalal is going through a dark time, utterly frustrated in love-life and also losing his loyal people from his side, so it is the time when he would want to forget his misery by applying anything- be it getting drunk or being with a woman. I had thought to give some insight of Jalal's mind in this particular part but skipped it for two reasons- one, I wanted to fast-forward the track without stretching, and two, it might have looked cheaper to read and affect the flow of story.

Take this part as a writer's experiment. 😛 I might have failed badly to show it properly, but don't worry, Jalal still loves Purnima.

Omg finally u r back with bang.....👏👏👏👏👏wing 4 ur next update dr

Hi , stuti!🤗

I am glad you started writing again and wanted to give proper ending of your stories...... which your stories deserve. 👍🏼

Sorry for late reply.....got really really busy in life and ending of HBAS ..... so just couldn’t....😳

Sorry to hear about your loss too. I hope you are strong enough to handle your family and yourself. 🤗

Caught up with all the chapters.... must say....Brilliantly written every scene and emotions. 👏

You give importance to every character and their role... moti ,Vijay, Abdul....each one has their own role and importance. 👍🏼

Just love the way you portray Jalal and his mother character.... you show us jalal both his strong and weak side and his mother... real queen who doesn’t just go with what show her rather she use her own brain and heart.

How beautifully you written every one emotions....... it give real touch.... hats off to your effort you put while writing. 🤗

In simple jashwant Singh is the mater mind behind all the mess happen in Rajputana..... God he killed his own best friend for his own selfish and foolish benefits.... he joined hands with sariffudin too.

God couldn’t believe he is planning all alone..... 🤔

But one thing is good both sujamal and bhagwant realise their mistakes... because of them only some outsider enter in their family matters and take advantage of their mistake.....now bhagwant and bharmal...both wanted to save sujamal wife and his child.😳

Best thing is jalal unexpected entry .... which shock his brother in law.... I hope now he will get his purnima in form of Jodha..... which bring back old purnima who spread happiness only.

I read this story when it was start and still to day I love to read this .Please dont stop writing because you are a awesome writer and we dont want to loss yoi

Beautifully written.....

I am a fan of your writing....

Eagarly waiting for the next update...

Thank you so much,Stuti, for the mega update. Thank you to Manu dear for posting it on your behalf.

A power-packed chapter it was.

What can be said of Jalal’s sleek and brilliant moves in getting rid of the trace of potential enemies to stamp his mark as a great emperor – masterstroke each one!

Jaswant , the snake in the grass who double-crossed Sagarmal and Bhagwan Das due to the deep-rooted anger against Amer and Sujamal. One that stole his people’s lands and the other who stole his love.

Finally, Jalal has arrived ; can’t wait to see Sharifuddin’s fate at Jalal’s hands.

Jalal at Amer’s doorstep, the much-awaited meeting between Jalal and Jodha is keeping us on tenterhooks.

Your meticulous style of writing and the way the story is fleshed out makes each chapter a pleasure to read.

And rest assured,we are always on the lookout for your update, Stuti.

Sorry to hear about your grandmother, dear.

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

whatever it might be but this is cheap mindset of men. Mard kare toh pyaar aur aurat kare toh najaayaz. This makes me feel jodha deserved some one worthy of the great woman that she was. Jalal was better off with his hukka begum atleast she was ok with all this nonsense so that she can maintain her power. Your other story hamari adhuri kahani deals with this emotion that i feel for jodha. This is the reason where jodha could never completely accept her fate. How can a man prove his love for a woman (by sleeping with any random woman within a blink of an eye) yuck and disgusting.

😛 Don't get so angry... Let's think this way, Jalal had a lifestyle before he met Purnima, and he is living in the same life after meeting her. Purnima definitely showed him some new dimension of life, but he has not changed his old lifestyle, or got a scope to do that. He is already married to more than one woman, and also has responsibilities of a lot of women... Those will not become a lie in the light of the truth of his love for Purnima.

Polygamy is one of the very nasty practices that had been celebrated in our country. I am not trying to justify. I am just trying to show the era. 😊

Originally posted by: suganMCAmuthu

Omg finally u r back with bang.....👏👏👏👏👏wing 4 ur next update dr

Thank you so much dear... Will be updating soonest

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Hi , stuti!🤗

Bindu Diiiii

I am glad you started writing again and wanted to give proper ending of your stories...... which your stories deserve. 👍🏼

Now as I got you back here, I am full charged!😎

Sorry for late reply.....got really really busy in life and ending of HBAS ..... so just couldn’t....😳

Sorry to hear about your loss too. I hope you are strong enough to handle your family and yourself. 🤗

Thank you... It is really hard to cope up with the vacancy that has been created. 😭

Caught up with all the chapters.... must say....Brilliantly written every scene and emotions. 👏

Thank you Di [:D]

You give importance to every character and their role... moti ,Vijay, Abdul....each one has their own role and importance. 👍🏼

Yeah!

Just love the way you portray Jalal and his mother character.... you show us jalal both his strong and weak side and his mother... real queen who doesn’t just go with what show her rather she use her own brain and heart.

I loved portraying the queen-mother. In the show she was only a loving mother, I am trying to see her as more than that.

How beautifully you written every one emotions....... it give real touch.... hats off to your effort you put while writing. 🤗

[:D]

In simple jashwant Singh is the mater mind behind all the mess happen in Rajputana..... God he killed his own best friend for his own selfish and foolish benefits.... he joined hands with sariffudin too.

God couldn’t believe he is planning all alone..... 🤔

Ok you people did not suspect it? I thought it is predictable. [:P]

But one thing is good both sujamal and bhagwant realise their mistakes... because of them only some outsider enter in their family matters and take advantage of their mistake.....now bhagwant and bharmal...both wanted to save sujamal wife and his child.😳

Yes... They are into a really big mess.

Best thing is jalal unexpected entry .... which shock his brother in law.... I hope now he will get his purnima in form of Jodha..... which bring back old purnima who spread happiness only.

Aab ayega maza 😎