Reserved!
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Oh man where do I begin? It's only been two chapters and I'm literally addicted to this. I'm addicted to your Prerna and I'm a glutton for your Bajaj. All I want is to sit and read it in a go, get inside his headspace, and stay there. I absolutely adore your writing. No adjectives would do you justice. No litany of praises would be enough to compliment your engaging and crisp prose. I love the way you write and draw such vivid pictures for the reader.
Also absolutely adore the Bajaj family. They exude so much personality and class. I'm literally in love with both Rishab and Shiv and I want more of them. I can probably read a whole booklet on their routines and sundry. HAHA. Both are so engaging and enigmatic and feel so so tangible.
That little joke Rishab pulled on Prerna had my heart! I love such moments. Shiv bearing with the societal protocol HAHA. SO REAL MAN. Also love Bajaj and Prerna's little monologues. Both of them are in denial about their feelings. Prerna's conversation with Anurag was really well done. That dreaded awkward pause that we all do our best to avoid. The slow, inevitable death of their relationship. I loved the light moment there. I loved how you've not used Anurag as a crutch, a flat stick figure to move the plot ahead. That little conversation had everything. The warmth that used to be there. The awkwardness and cracks that have come between them. I loved it.
The descriptions are such love and the conversation between Prerna and Bajaj had my heart. They're so soft and so beautiful! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE.
Arjun
