PreRish SS- Green Eyed Monster (Updated Final Chpt 8 Pg 39) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Awesome!

So Prerna misses Mr Bajaj and goes green with envy when his ex-wife descends the stairs. 😎

But this one shouldn't be a one-shot. I'm curious to know what transpires next as Prerna is clearly upset with the wedding. 😳

Why has Menaka come back? What's her equation with Rishabh?

Continue karo. Prerna can't go ahead with the wedding now. Let her melt into RB's arms in front of the whole MM in the next function.

Haha, that too when she emerges from his bedroom 😏

Prerna is definitely unhappy.

Hmm a second part doesn't sound too bad😁

Melt into his arms? Hayeeeeeeee😍❤️

Thank you! 😘

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Res

Unres

Sanya🤗

This was so awesome. Prerna’s emotions were so beautifully captured. This deserves RB’s POV. I really want to know what was going on in his head when he came down the stairs.

I also loved how he would always start to address her as Mrs. Bajaj but then stops. *sighs*

👏👏👏

PS: You are making me feel incompetent😆

Thank you🤗

Now that I'm thinking of writing a second part, that can be from RB's POV😁

Mrs- Ms...aadat se majbur naaaa,😔

Originally posted by: Moushumi

Definitely wonderful but it deserve another part.cause the way you finish it ,its perfect to called a os.but we the reader yours are very thirsty to get more.so plz z plz bring an another part soon.thanks

I'm definitely interested in a second part now😁

I'm glad I could make you thirsty for more! What more could I want as a writer?❤️

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Hi

I got the first page

Yayay

Now that you wrote such an awesome os you deserve a gift.

And the gift is this....

https://www.instagram.com/p/B0NpgwjFG0c/?igshid=5hfkrz93jvhx

Kaisan laga apko hamara gift?😘

alsp here is the monster that you have been referring to.

BESTEST GIFT EVAAAAAAAA😭😭😭😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ OMG MY BROTHER DUO ❤️❤️❤️

PS. That won't do for this little comment 😠😒

That monster is much more dangerous than this one, but this one is cute 😂❤️

Originally posted by: Zaalima_5

Why this one is one short..???

You should continue.. Preyu ka chota dimaag didnt get menka's hint.. Mai wo hu jo aap hai..😆

Lovely sanya.. But you have to continue..😳

I'm going to continue! Itna insist karenge sab toh karna ho hoga❤️

Priyu jalan mein jal rahi thi na, isilye Menka ki baat samjhi nahi,😂

Thanks 😘

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

Ye dil maange more

Isey milega more😂😁

Originally posted by: Breezi11197

You should seriously continue this shot

I will be!

Menka Oberoi is back 😲 I m sensing some jealousy here 😉

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

BESTEST GIFT EVAAAAAAAA😭😭😭😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ OMG MY BROTHER DUO ❤️❤️❤️

PS. That won't do for this little comment 😠😒

That monster is much more dangerous than this one, but this one is cute 😂❤️

Amazing 🥰 waiting for 2nd part