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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: .amigos.

Hello! Thank you. I actually do have an OS series thread where I put up my work. This was exceedingly random and I'd probably revise, polish and integrate them in my OS series as the thing goes on.😆

AND YESS! That kind of angst! I'd die for it. Like where Prerna is confused about her feelings but want him unconsciously and where Rishab exactly knows she is his but is very subtly seducing her to accept it and is all cool, calm, and slightly manipulative about it.

You know the plot you have mentioned seems too good...Just write one on these lines na....😃

Edited by MysticRiver - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: .amigos.

The problem with that is she hates business studies.😆 I remember watching an early episode and her complaining about reading books and stuff. And I knew she wasn't going to be my favorite person. The writers need to show us at least SOMETHING she's genuinely interested in and has a vocation for. Art? Law? Business? And build it genuinely. The girl is a total twat otherwise.

When teacher is like Mr. Bajaj, her personal tutor, subject mein interest apne aap aa jayega

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: .amigos.

Did you mean mohtarma? 🤣🤣

I have all these random post divorce ideas in my head. Woh likhdoon. OS series mein abhi nahi daalsakti.🤣

YESS stupid autocheck 😠

Haan ek thread banao divorce track - problem solved 😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: .amigos.

@bold - MAAR KHAANI HAI KYA?😳

I LOVED IT. We should do these impromptu continuations. So much fun. You'll probably sudhaaro Bajaj and Prerna and I'll muck it all up in the next update.🤣

I had to go to another city aaj for an interview but cancel hogaya. Yeh week relatively kaafi free jaaraha hai than I expected.😆

ASLO MYSTIC OMG WRITE THOSE IDEAS DOWN! GIVE US A BHANDAAR OF OSES.

Phew! Thank you! Sab tumhari wajah se hi hua🤗

I don't mind that idea at all😎 bring it on!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Do you think she'll make a scene in a party where the Basus are also present. Like:

"Sharam nahi aati tuje?" Bua's voice boomed in the large hall and everyone looked at the direction, where she was screaming at Mrs Prerna Bajaj. "Shaadi se pehle hi pet se ho gayi?"

The hall echoed with the shocked gasps of the guests, including the Basus. Anurag's ears rang loudly with these words and he felt he would faint.

"Itni besharam aur behaya ladki mere Rishabh ki biwi bankar aa gayi! Kaise dhoka dia tune-

"Bua Ji!" Rishabh Bajaj's anger was clearly heard in these two words as he entered the hall. "Stop it."

"Kya stop it? Tujhe pata bhi hai teri biwi kya karnama kar ke aayi hai? Pregnant hai wo! Shadi se pehle hi! Pata nahi kiska baccha hai-

"Mera hai." He screamed rather loudly, failing to conceal his anger anymore.

Prerna gulped in shock and surprise, looking at her husband with tears in her eyes. For some reason, she kept quiet and let him speak. It was much better than to listen to that woman's vile tongue about her child. She didn't care if Anurag was listening, she just wanted this woman to stop talking. If Mr Bajaj's false acception would do that, she was fine with it.

Anurag immediately felt sick. He saw Mr Bajaj's arm land over Prerna's shoulder and saw her lean on him a little bit.

"This is my child Bua. It was supposed to be a surprise but you're always a spoil sport." He said and faked a smile.

"Rishabh!" Bua's face had lost its color. "Shaadi se pehle hi-

"Zamana badal chuka hai Bua." He smiled and looked at his wife, who's smile was as fake as his. "But accha hua na, that we married."

"Bahut accha hua." Prerna said and put her hand over his with a smile. "Jaise hi muje pata chala ki main pregnant hu, I told Mr Bajaj and we got married quickly."

"Iss...iss wajah se tum dono ne...achanak Shaadi Karli?" Bua asked as everyone listened.

Prerna squirmed but Rishabh looked unfazed.

"Obviously. After all, we didn't want our child to be born out of wedlock, right darling?" He looked at his wife again who nodded and acted to blush.

Anurag couldn't see it anymore.

I absolutely cringe at such plots but you've written it so wisely. ALSO LOVE BAJAJ being casual about sex out of wedlock and I actually feel so bad for Anurag.🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Do you think she'll make a scene in a party where the Basus are also present. Like:

"Sharam nahi aati tuje?" Bua's voice boomed in the large hall and everyone looked at the direction, where she was screaming at Mrs Prerna Bajaj. "Shaadi se pehle hi pet se ho gayi?"

The hall echoed with the shocked gasps of the guests, including the Basus. Anurag's ears rang loudly with these words and he felt he would faint.

"Itni besharam aur behaya ladki mere Rishabh ki biwi bankar aa gayi! Kaise dhoka dia tune-

"Bua Ji!" Rishabh Bajaj's anger was clearly heard in these two words as he entered the hall. "Stop it."

"Kya stop it? Tujhe pata bhi hai teri biwi kya karnama kar ke aayi hai? Pregnant hai wo! Shadi se pehle hi! Pata nahi kiska baccha hai-

"Mera hai." He screamed rather loudly, failing to conceal his anger anymore.

Prerna gulped in shock and surprise, looking at her husband with tears in her eyes. For some reason, she kept quiet and let him speak. It was much better than to listen to that woman's vile tongue about her child. She didn't care if Anurag was listening, she just wanted this woman to stop talking. If Mr Bajaj's false acception would do that, she was fine with it.

Anurag immediately felt sick. He saw Mr Bajaj's arm land over Prerna's shoulder and saw her lean on him a little bit.

"This is my child Bua. It was supposed to be a surprise but you're always a spoil sport." He said and faked a smile.

"Rishabh!" Bua's face had lost its color. "Shaadi se pehle hi-

"Zamana badal chuka hai Bua." He smiled and looked at his wife, who's smile was as fake as his. "But accha hua na, that we married."

"Bahut accha hua." Prerna said and put her hand over his with a smile. "Jaise hi muje pata chala ki main pregnant hu, I told Mr Bajaj and we got married quickly."

"Iss...iss wajah se tum dono ne...achanak Shaadi Karli?" Bua asked as everyone listened.

Prerna squirmed but Rishabh looked unfazed.

"Obviously. After all, we didn't want our child to be born out of wedlock, right darling?" He looked at his wife again who nodded and acted to blush.

Anurag couldn't see it anymore.

last line ----- Mike drop 😎😎😎😎😎😎 🔥😎😎❤️♥️💜 Aag hai yea Boss 😎🔥✨
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: PriixPatel

PreRish

https://i.imgur.com/JMA6Vc2.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/Ts9Wu8Z.jpg

More coming soon! Waiting for Zurich Scenes!

-PRii

OMG BEAUTI-FREAKING-FULL😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: .amigos.

The problem with that is she hates business studies.😆 I remember watching an early episode and her complaining about reading books and stuff. And I knew she wasn't going to be my favorite person. The writers need to show us at least SOMETHING she's genuinely interested in and has a vocation for. Art? Law? Business? And build it genuinely. The girl is a total twat otherwise.

she only loves getting married🤢
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

OMG..This is amazing..

Thanks ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: .amigos.

I absolutely cringe at such plots but you've written it so wisely. ALSO LOVE BAJAJ being casual about sex out of wedlock and I actually feel so bad for Anurag.🤣

🤣 hope you did not cringe that much🤣

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