Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 81

Originally posted by: Anjali33

What a heart-wrenching update😭

The richie rich Sameer had to beg for food, bartan dhone ko tak taiyar tha wo. Itna rona aaya na yaar💔

Chacha chachi aur Arjun tak saath de rhe h ab to inka. I liked how they all went outside to give the couple some privacy.

Thank God Rohan nhi tha isme yaar, warna rote rote jo gussa ata h na wo bohot khaara hota h😡

But I want Sameer to come out clean asap. Maybe his father too!

With NaMunDit by his side, I'm hoping he'll be successful soon.

Aww Anji! I know re...bechare Sameer ka bura waqt chal raha hai...lekin Naina, Mundit aur sab log inke saath hain!

Haha...Rohan wahin karta...isliye maine use wapis Dilli bhej diya hai!

Sameer sab raaz jaldi kholega dear and bilkul successful hoga!

Love,

Sur

Lovely update and an emotional one...rula diya...cant see sameer like this...hoping everything gets sorted out soon...waiting for next..

One request from my side...can u provide links on starting page for each update as it's difficult to read...one has to go through all pages...please can u do this for EU also...thanks for the effort...If I have to read from beginning it becomes difficult without any links..

Regards

Pooja

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hello friends,

I'm back with an update for this story as well. I somehow got inspired with the beginning of struggle for our show's Samaina and penned down this update. Hope to hear your views on it!

Part 2: At your service!

Sameer couldn’t stay for long at Munna’s place for his father, when tried to mend ways between the estranged son and the step-father heard Mr. Somani’s version of the fallout. An amicable gentleman mostly, Munna’s father then expressed unease about Sameer’s character and honesty. He tried to drill sense into his own son- what if Sameer was actually trying to take advantage of them? And the fact that as per what Sameer had pledged, he would make something of himself without any help from anyone. Then why was he dependent on his friends for help? If his friends were by his side, wasn’t he, in a way, reneging on his promise? Munna took a while to allay his father’s sudden suspicions. But it was too late. Sameer had already overheard the conversation between the father and son. Unwilling to put his friends through the stormy path he’d chosen for himself, Sameer left the house in angst, desperate for any job that he could start on.

As he walked, he landed upon the same small restaurant that he’d chanced upon the day he left his home. He saw the owner frying batches of savories as usual and hordes of people waiting in queue for their fill.

Food! Good business proposition! It’s never going to go out of fashion. He contemplated for a while. But there was only one hitch- he barely knew how to cook! How he wished Naina was by his side right now. She could’ve taught him all this.

Sameer sighed, tried to ignore his pining heart, as he observed the delicacies on the stall and hoped the rumbling of his stomach did not reach the ears of the restaurant owner. But apparently they did, for the big burly man in that khadi kurta pyajama with a towel hanging on his left shoulder, beckoned to him. “Bolo sahab…kuch dun aapko? Garma garam hai sab!”

Unable to suppress his hunger anymore, Sameer walked upto the stall owner and enquired, “Bhaiya…agar main aapko yeh sari plates dho ke dun to kya aap mujhe ek samosa aur thodi chai denge?”

The stall owner looked at him astounded and then broke into fits of laughter, “kahe mazak kar rahe ho sahab…shakal surat aur kapde latte se to khandani lagte ho!”

“Bhaiya…mere pass sach mein kuch paise nahi hain…subah se bhookha hun…,” Sameer replied.

The stall owner contemplated for a while and then gave in. “Theek hai…lo kha lo samosa aur yeh lo chai!”

Sameer thanked him profusely for the two samosas and a cup of wholesome Amrutulya chai offered to him. As he finished, he asked, where and how to wash the dishes. The kindly man told him, “beta jao…koi baat nahi…main kar lunga!”

“Nahi uncle…main aapko paise nahi de sakta…par udhar to chuka sakta hun!”

As the stall owner looked on in amazement, Sameer picked up the detergent and started rinsing the used steel plates and glasses. He completed the task in some twenty minutes.

“Ghar chod ke aaye ho kya beta?”

Sameer nodded sadly.

“Dekho ladakpan ka josh acha hai…lekin yeh zindagi bahot kathin hai…jao jaake maa-baap se maafi maang lo…wo tumhe apna lenge!”

Sameer did not respond and continued to dry his hands with his handkerchief.

“Aisa kya hua beta…dekho gussa chodo…aur ghar jao!”

“Uncle…kabhi kabhi insaan ko khud ko saabit karna padta hai…kuch bade khwab badi qurbaniyaan maangte hain…agar main apne sapno ke liye…apni zindagi…khushiyon ke liye mehnat nahi karunga to mujhe kya haq hai ki mujhe wo khushiyaan milein?”

The stall owner stood stunned by Sameer’s words. He thought, “bitte bhar ka chokra hai…aur baatein dekho!”

Impressed, he queried, “Kaam ki talaash mein ho?”

“Ji uncle!” Sameer’s eyes lit up.

“Hmmm…Vaise to mujhe zarurat hai nahi lekin tumhari imaandari dekh ke main khush hua…mere hotel mein waiter ka kaam karoge? Dekho tum bade ghar ke lagte ho…agar jame toh!”

Sameer looked at him elatedly. “Kyun nahi uncle…thank you!”

“Lekin pagar main 200 se zyada nahi de paunga abhi…waiter hone ke saath saath…bartan dhone honge…jhaadu pocha bhi karna hoga dusre ladke ke sath milke…!”

“Chalega uncle…aap jo bolenge…sab karunga…thank you!”

“Rehne ke liye jagah hai? Sote kahan ho?”

“Ji wo….darasal…,” Sameer fumbled embarrassedly.

“Hmm…aaj raat se yahin so jana hotel band hone ke baad…kitchen mein garmi bhi hogi to thand nahi lagegi zyada…baaki ladke tumhe kaam bata denge…aur nahane dhone ka bhi sikha denge!”

He gestured him to go upstairs and Sameer obliged after thanking him generously.

In the next few days, Sameer tried his best to adjust to the dark, dingy, humid environment of the kitchen upstairs of the hotel where he slept in the cramped room, with another waiter and a cook.

He struggled with the daily chores, the need to wake up at the break of dawn, the less than fulfilling meals that they managed to have in the day.

Munna and Pandit continued to visit him regularly and offered him homemade snacks whenever they could. Even Munna’s father apologized and told him how he’d been brainwashed by his step-dad, but Sameer insisted he’d actually said the right thing. He wanted to prove that he could sustain himself without any help. When Naina as she got to know of Sameer’s condition, she was horrified beyond measure- how her Prince Charming had been converted to a pauper overnight! She pleaded with Bela chachi and her chachaji to allow her to meet him for sometime. Anand and Bela, miserable at Sameer’s condition as well, relented. They all went to meet Sameer at the hotel Munna and Pandit had informed them of, where Sameer was employed.

As soon as Naina stepped foot inside, her eyes welled up in tears as she saw a lanky man (he seemed to have lost quite some weight since she’d last seen him and that had been a month or so back) meticulously wiping a table top. He was dressed in a white vest, which seemed to be covered with grime and splotched with oil and a pair of similarly filth laden three fourths. As he finished cleaning the table, he replaced the small piece of gingham cloth back onto his shoulders.

“The affluent boy, with looks men would kill to have did not even have a proper set of clothes on?” Naina’s heart wept at the irony of life. At that instant, Sameer’s eyes fell to the door, expecting some customers. His jaw dropped as he saw Naina and her family enter. Preeti was crying along with Naina and Bela, and Anand looked distraught at his condition. Arjun seemed appalled beyond measure. Sameer tried to smile, for his heart leaped with joy at seeing his love after so many days. Before he could say something, he saw Naina dash towards him and crash into him, holding onto him fiercely and sobbing. Chachaji and chachiji averted their eyes as they did not have the heart to reprimand her for such a public display of affection. Arjun too pushed his hands in his pockets and suddenly gained interest in a set of salt and pepper sprinklers set on the table besides him. Preeti continued to weep looking at the two lovers.

“Aye…aye…shhh…Nainu…shh…rote nahi!” Sameer tried to console his sobbing girlfriend.

She smacked him in response and clutched him harder, as she continued to shed tears.

“Ayeee Naina…sab dekh rahe hain jaan…,” Sameer whispered as he looked upto see chacha and chachi being uncomfortable. Arjun finally took action and quickly ushered chacha, chachi and Preeti outside for a while so that the two lovers could talk. He then turned and gestured to him that Sameer had his approval.

The moment they were gone, Sameer looked around and pulled Naina into a corner and put his lips to hers in desperation. The kiss was reciprocated with intense need and passion by Naina. When they broke off, there were beads of tears in Sameer’s eyes.

“Nainu…you still love me na? Mujhe chod to nahi dogi…mere pass kuch nahi hai ab!”

“P..pagal ho kya tum…yeh sab kyun kar rahe ho Sameer…meri khatir…Sameer mujhe bas tum chahiye aur kuch nahi…yeh kya haal bana rakha hai apna…raat thand mein bitate ho…thither rahe ho sardi mein…vazan kitna kam ho gaya hai…,” Naina continued to fuss over him.

Sameer suddenly gulped. Why was he letting his heart overpower his mind? He steeled himself, ready to deliver the speech he’d rehearsed numerous times, in case Naina found his hardships too much to handle. Though deep down his heart knew she would never leave him in misery, his brain commanded him to make sure Naina was comfortable and happy. He did not want to pass on his share of troubles to Naina.

“Naina…,” Sameer’s voice was suddenly serious. “Aisa ho sakta hai ki mera yeh haal umar bhar aisa hi rahe…main mehnat puri karunga par kamyaab honga ke nahi iski guarantee nahi…agar tum aaj bhi piche hatana chahti ho to main bura nahi maanunga Naina…main samajh lunga…par please mujhse sach kehna!”

Naina looked at him in disbelief. “Sameer? Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho? Saath jeene marne ki kasam li hai humne…aur chahe duniya hamare rishte ko mane na mane…main to tumhe dil se apna pati maan chuki hoon…!”

The breath Sameer hadn’t realized he’d been holding, exhaled. Tears streaked his face again as he pulled her into another crushing embrace. Was he the luckiest man on earth? No man who had suffered what he had from the hands of his step-father since his father’s demise would have labeled himself lucky. But with Naina in his arms, life seemed merry, hopeful again. And it was a sign that lady luck was shining for him!

“Sameer…chalo bhaag jaate hain…main tumhara saath dena chahti hun…par tumhari patni banke!” Naina mumbled at his chest.

Sameer caressed her hair. “Nahi Naina…dulhan to tumhe banaunga…tab jab Rakesh sir khud is rishte ko leke khush honge…main nahi chahta ki kal ko koi tumpe ya hamare rishte pe koi ungli uthaye!”

The couple lay in each other’s arms for many silent minutes. And then Naina suddenly back in control exclaimed, “main bhi kitni buddhu hun…!” She pulled out the shawl from her shoulders and covered Sameer’s flimsy clothes with it. “Ab thand nahi lagegi tumhe!”

And then she ran to call her family inside. Soon, all were asking about his well-being, feeding him with home-made snacks that Bela, Preeti and Naina had stayed up all night to prepare for him.

“Beta kabhi khud ko akela mat samajhna…hum hain…tumhara parivaar hai!” Anand and Bela reassured Sameer.

“Hamara bas chalta…agar Naina hamari beti hoti to hum tum dono ki shaadi kab ki karwa dete…aur tumhe settle hone mein bhi madad karte…par Rakesh bhaisahab…,” Anand’s voice choked.

“Main puri koshish kar raha hun chachaji…bas ek vinti hai…jab tak main thoda stable nahi ho jaata…aap please Naina ke rishte ka na sochein…kisi tarah Rakesh sir ko mana lein…please?” Sameer pleaded.

“Main Naina ki shaadi tumhi se hote dekhna chahta hun…jo ban padega hum karenge!” Anand patted Sameer’s head. Then he took out some five thousand that he’d withdrawn from the bank and offered the same to Sameer. “Beta…thode paise rakh lo…tumhe zarurat padegi…ek achi jagah dekh lo rehne ke liye…kuch kapde bhi…maine daftar mein bhi naukri ke liye pucha hai…jaldi batayenge wahan…tab tak isse kaam chala lo!”

Sameer calmly and politely refused as he handed the money back to Chachaji. “Beta kehte hain to bete pe bharosa rakhiye…main chahta hun ki is baar mere pass jo bhi ho…mere apni mehnat ki kamayi ka ho!”

Chachaji was surprised at the maturity exhibited by this lad of hardly twenty one.

At that moment, Naina fished into the jute bag that she’d brought along and brought out two sweaters of chachaji, three pairs of new socks, two T-shirts and a pair of jeans for him.

“Yeh kya puri dukaan khareed laayi ho?” Sameer exclaimed.

“Chup raho…sab tumhare liye laaye hain hum!”

“Naina…maine kaha na main kisi se favour nahi lena chahta…jo hoga sab meri kamayi se liya hoga!”

“Yeh lecture na mujhe baad me sunana…aur vaise bhi yeh sab meri scholarship ki kamayi se khareeda hai…aur jab hum dono mein koi fark nahi, to hamare paise mein fark kaise hua?”

A quiver of a smile played on Sameer’s lips. He itched to pull her to himself again, but refrained in presence of her entire family.

Instead, Arjun came and enclasped him in a tight hug. He patted his back in reassurance and muttered, “Sameer kuch bhi zarurat ho mujhe yaad karna…mujhe bharosa hai tujhpe…fikr mat kar…hum sab tere sath hain!”

The family bid him farewell. Sameer clutched the shawl tightly to him as Naina and his eyes met as she retreated.

***

When the restaurant owner handed him his very first earning, Sameer decided to go to the temple. He relayed the message to Naina through Munna and Pandit during their daily visit to him. It was 6 am on a Monday morning and Naina was already waiting for him. The lovers did the aarti together and prayed to Lord Shiva for his blessings. Sameer gave his first share of his salary to the temple fund for free lunches for the poor and needy. With another part, he brought a beautiful studded imitation bracelet for Naina, which he himself locked across Naina’s wrist. He then took her hand and placed a kiss on it.

“Yeh bracelet hamesha apne sath rakhna..main na sahi yeh har waqt tumhare pass rahega aur tumhe mere kareeb hone ka ehsaas dilaata rahega…samajh lena ki main dil-o-jaan se mehnat kar raha hun ki jaldi se jaldi tumhe Naina Sameer Maheshwari bana sakun!”

Naina’s eyes turned misty as she nodded. As they talked in the park across from the temple, Naina informed him about the response from the magazine, wherein she’d sent some of her essay excerpts two months back.

“Keh rahe the…thank you…humein content pasand aaya par filhaal hamein zarurat nahi hai! Aage koi zarurat hogi to hum aapko contact kar lenge! Sameer yeh 6 mahine mein teesra rejection hai…aise to kaun dega naukri mujhe graduation pe? Mujhe to lag raha hai yeh lekhika wagerah banne ka sapna chodun aur koi aur part-time job dekhun!”

Sameer hushed her immediately. “Shhh….kisne kaha tumse ki tumhara sapna pura nahi hoga…Naina jo tumhari kahaniyon mein jaadu hai na…wo tum nahi dekh sakti lekin main dekh sakta hun…aur is rejection se haar maanene wali meri Naina to nahi…chahe hum sau baar haarein…ek sau ekvi baar to jeetenge…lekin agar hum pehle hi haar maan jayenge to us ek sau ekvi baar tak kaise pahunchenge? Naina…main tumse hamesha kehta hun na… ‘Success has no short-cuts!’ To bas lagi raho…har mat maano!”

Naina seemed reassured by his words. She clasped his hands firmly. “Agle hafte se college khul jayenge…Chachaji ne tumari liye principal ma’am se baat kar li hai ki attendance mein linient ho jayein!”

“Chachaji ko thanks bolna meri taraf se…lekin Naina is haalat mein mujhe nahi lagta main apni degree puri kar paaunga! Jab paise honge thode to fir se koshish karunga I promise!”

“Nahi Sameer…tum degree puri karoge…wo bhi mere saath…main saare notes bana ke laungi tumhare liye…tumhe padhaungi jab jab tumhe time hoga…!”

Sameer kissed her hand again and smiled, “tumhara wo hitler baap aane dega tumhe?”

“Hitler nahi hain wo…aur…aur unhe kuch pata nahi chalega!”

His clasp on her hand tightened. “Pata chale bhi to chalne do…unhe bhi maalum hona chahiye ki tum sirf meri ho…aur chahe puri duniya bhi mujhse tumhe cheenana chahegi na…main hone nahi dunga!”

“Mujhe bharosa hai tum pe!” Naina assured him and then added as she suddenly realized, “Sameer…tumne pehli salary se khud ke liye to kuch liya hi nahi?”

“Mere pass tum ho, Munna Pandit jaise dost hai…tum sab Preeti, Swati, Arjun…iske aage main bhagwaan se kya hi maangu?” Sameer told her.

With the last share of his salary, barring the half he’d put up for future savings, Sameer had brought two keychains with ‘Friends Forever’ for Munna and Pandit. Though the gifts were relatively inexpensive, for that was the best that Sameer could afford, Munna and Pandit clung to them and wept along with their brother, encasing him in a tight hug.

👏

Hi Sur

Finally here...And trust me whatever you write ;LIMA and the sequel to it SSN;these two will remain my eternal favourites.For the innocence they carry,for the twists and tales both FFs tag along.Also without much pressure to mind,they bring those feels of initial episodes,which pulled us together to be ardent fan girls of the show and its characters.

''Hardships bring Happiness" This seem to be solo motto of Sameer now. But yaar!You are too good with drafting emotional scenes.I was literally shedding tears reading the whole update right from beginning. Prince Charming to Waiter? Well for Phoenix to rise from ashes,it has to burn first.Kudos to you for excellently writing the lines 👏

Naina and Sameer scenes were beyond world.Man! That desperation,that nagging helplessness ..uff! My heart just went away to those two.They don't deserve this but yeah when have good things come to people without wait and sweat? They need to prove their own mettle.I was surprised as to how you incorporated Naina's rejections in this intense moment. I was so satisfied as a reader reading the parallelism of their struggles.Physical to Mental..Each one facing bitter failures now to taste the sweet. success.And I can't wait to read that phase.

I loved the support extended by Chachaji and family.Arjun's characterization was fab.The way he did the umpiring.Sending family out and also giving a positive hug..A needful strength for Samaina indeed.Munna and Pandit perhaps need no elaboration when it comes to friendship.When they are the friends,nothing can end..Loved the temple scene equally.Realistic touch about attendance.And Naina just wins the heart here.She seems all deeply relatable.Making notes ,bringing food ,fussing about lost weight..Who said they are not married? To quote in Sameer's language---'' Wo to kab ke ek chuke hein ..kabke''

I loved this update in entirity and perhaps I feel returning to it again for this update was such Dil Le Lo.Waiting to see what more is in store from us..The twisted minds vs not giving up minds.

Sorry for such a delayed response.😔

With love-

Minu.

Originally posted by: Pooja1973

Lovely update and an emotional one...rula diya...cant see sameer like this...hoping everything gets sorted out soon...waiting for next..

One request from my side...can u provide links on starting page for each update as it's difficult to read...one has to go through all pages...please can u do this for EU also...thanks for the effort...If I have to read from beginning it becomes difficult without any links..

Regards

Pooja

Thank you dear...haan thoda rulane wala hi tha...but a phoenix rises from its ashes...and so will SJM! :)

Ohh...I'd already provided on the first page for both the stories...let me cross check! :)

Love

Sur

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Sameer is lucky. There are many people in this world who lack emotional support also, which is necessary for every human being when they are in difficult times. Sameer Maheshwari has that. He has Naina, Chacha-Chachi, Arjun, Preeti, Pandit and Munna. Testing times reveals who really are loyal to us and Sameer has found his family.

That's true dear...God has compensated him very well now...he's already suffered a lot in his childhood.

I am really grateful that he is employed. He has a salary to support atleast himself. He is lucky enough to get a job and kind boss. I was reminded of this quote when I read about Sameer- If you think you are too big for small jobs, maybe you are too small for big jobs. In my opinion, no work is small or big, you should learn to do everything; for example, now he will know a thing or two about cooking!

Wow dear...my thoughts resonate with yours here! No work is small or big....and the quote is seriously apt! And yes, his knowledge about cooking may come in handy some day! :)

Although I feel a little sympathy for the rich kid who would have never imagined staying hungry and begging for food, sleeping in cold or sweeping the floor but it's okay, this experience would make him stronger! It was emotional but I didn't cry at all, he has his strength beside him.

This is just the start of Sameer Jaiprakash Maheshwari! ❤️

<3 Aww...you are right dear...these hardships would make him stronger, closer to the grassroots and desirous of changing the circumstances even more. Sometimes, we realize our true potential when we are down in the dumps and have nothing to lose.

How kind and thoughtful of him to donate some part of his salary to the poor people. I like how mentally strong he is. He does realise there are people who are in worse, worse condition than his and doesn't indulge in self-pity. He really is a strong man who has a strong woman for a partner! I am already imagining Somani's face when he gets to know Sameer has emerged put stronger- I feel like giving him nicely! 🤔

Yup...that's what Sameer of this story is..he is strong, but with a heart of gold. Remember how in the show also, he was ready to sacrifice himself for the sake of his friends...he is ready to give to people who need it...sometimes more than him and doesn't expect anything in return...and people like him are those who make their mark in the world. Somani ko to maza chakhega hi!

Loved all the Samaina moments! Update soon, Sur Di! 🤗

Glad you liked it dear!

Hey Shreya!

Thank you for such lovely comments! My response in bold.

Love,

Sur

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Hi Sur,

This was an extremely emotional update yaar...

Mr Maheshwari will never do anything by halves... he too he has embraced the worst and hardest of situation. From the palace located on the mountain top, he has dived to the little tattered hut in the valley below. How he climbs and whether he reaches that pinnacle again, will be the mystery going forward.. or maybe he might decide that a little sweet and comfortable cottage somewhere halfway to the top, filled with love and with his Naina by his side is more to his liking... I cant wait to find out!!!

Aww May...you put it so well...from riches to rags...but not giving up and trying again...:) Let's see if he prefers the cozy cottage or the summit of success! :)

But, imagining him as a waiter in that almost beggar like garb was very painful... I could feel Naina's pain, restlessness and disbelief... How will she live in the comparitive extreme comfort of her home now, knowing how he is trying to survive? Her thoughtful gift of clothes was heartwarming to say the least!

:( So true...they are one soul in two bodies...the pain and misery of one affects the other! But Sameer's success this time would be his very own...not Somani's, not Naina's, not even his nanu's!

Chachaji and family standing by him in this, will help him build his confidence. Hope Chachaji will be able to give him more useful advice too.

Yup...they are his pillars of support in these times of need! :)

The description of the restaurant and his living shared quarters... the dialogues between the shopkeeper and Sameer are all brilliantly written! Very well done dear 👏

Aww..thank you so much dear!

And now waiting for EU ka update! 😉

I hope you enjoy EU ka update bhi (I know I'm super late) :)

Hey May!

Thanks a lot for the beautiful review!

My response in bold.

Love,

Sur

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Sur

Finally here...And trust me whatever you write ;LIMA and the sequel to it SSN;these two will remain my eternal favourites.For the innocence they carry,for the twists and tales both FFs tag along.Also without much pressure to mind,they bring those feels of initial episodes,which pulled us together to be ardent fan girls of the show and its characters.

Aww thanks behen! Comparing LIMA and SSN to the initial phase of the show is perhaps the biggest compliment anyone could give me! Especially the initial part of the show is still really close to my heart- it made me start writing, join IF and had me glued to the TV set in wait for it! Thank you...had it not been for you guys, I would never have been able to come this far!

''Hardships bring Happiness" This seem to be solo motto of Sameer now. But yaar!You are too good with drafting emotional scenes.I was literally shedding tears reading the whole update right from beginning. Prince Charming to Waiter? Well for Phoenix to rise from ashes,it has to burn first.Kudos to you for excellently writing the lines 👏

:) That's true dear! Sameer is ready to endure any hardship to make a mark for himself in this world and for his Naina! Thank you dear...:) I'm glad it moved you!

Naina and Sameer scenes were beyond world.Man! That desperation,that nagging helplessness ..uff! My heart just went away to those two.They don't deserve this but yeah when have good things come to people without wait and sweat? They need to prove their own mettle.I was surprised as to how you incorporated Naina's rejections in this intense moment. I was so satisfied as a reader reading the parallelism of their struggles.Physical to Mental..Each one facing bitter failures now to taste the sweet. success.And I can't wait to read that phase.

Thanks yaar <3...I felt it was important to touch upon Naina's side of struggle too...as the character she was in the beginning, I felt she would not wait for Sameer to succeed- rather do her bit to expedite his success.

I loved the support extended by Chachaji and family.Arjun's characterization was fab.The way he did the umpiring.Sending family out and also giving a positive hug..A needful strength for Samaina indeed.Munna and Pandit perhaps need no elaboration when it comes to friendship.When they are the friends,nothing can end..Loved the temple scene equally.Realistic touch about attendance.And Naina just wins the heart here.She seems all deeply relatable.Making notes ,bringing food ,fussing about lost weight..Who said they are not married? To quote in Sameer's language---'' Wo to kab ke ek chuke hein ..kabke''

Ekdum behen....wo kabke ek ho chuke hain! Dono pati-patni hi hain...behaviour se toh...n Arjun bhi yahan pehle jaisa rakha hai maine show ka Arjun jaise tha...Mundit to Mundit hi hain...friendship ka dusra word...and Sameer ka dil bahot bada hai to mandir me daan karna...aur gareebon mein dena mujhe sahi laga...1st earning thi na uski! :)

I loved this update in entirity and perhaps I feel returning to it again for this update was such Dil Le Lo.Waiting to see what more is in store from us..The twisted minds vs not giving up minds.

Aww...thank you dear! Yep- and burayi pe achai ki jeet hogi :)

Sorry for such a delayed response.😔

No worries behen....main khud hi kitni late-lateef hun! :(

With love-

Minu.

Thanks a lot for such a wonderful review dear!

Loads of love!

Sur

Please agr ye show off air hua to bhi aap ye story continue rkhna

Wow your fanfic is just awesome ...in love with your writing plz continue waiting for next part...😍😍😍