Originally posted by: Commelina
Hi Sabina. Came across this story and enjoyed reading it so much.
I like the trust that Geet showed on him. Especially after the kind of experience she has had in the past.
It becomes difficult to have trust when the evidence is against you and I was actually fidgeting in my seat to know how it goes. Glad that Geet had called the manager at night but then a question came to my mind that supposed she hadn't then what. But then there was that glitch in Riya's fabricated lie that she took the key from his pocket. And Maan's habit of not keeping keys with him.
I read your comment about finding the story silly and not wanting to post it, trust me I often feel this way but am really glad that you didn't give into your doubts and finally posted it because it was good and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep writing
Even I'm happy I posted it ... accha time pass tha lol
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