~~ PunarVivaah~~ || Akshan FF || Last Part updated on pg 39 - Page 17

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Part 8

In the hospital

Akshat- Kya hua Meri Guddan ko?? Woh theek hai na. Angad bolo na.

Angad- Bhai wo.. woh

Akshat- Kya woh woh laga rakha hai. Seedhe seedhe batao na kaisi hai Meri Guddan??

Angad - Bhai ,woh bhabhi ko hosh aa Gaya hai. Dr. ne unhe Ward mein shift Kar Diya hai.

Akshat feels relieved and thanks God for saving his Guddan's life.

Akshat- Dr. kya main Guddan se mil sakta hoon??

Dr. - Yes, you all can meet her but one by one.

Akshat enters the ward and sees Guddan. He puts his hand on her forehead and slowly Guddan opens her eyes. Akshat smiles . But suddenly Guddan starts behaving differently.

Guddan (with pain)- Excuse me uncle,Kya main aapko jaanti Hoon?? Aap mere Ward mein Kya Kar rahe. Galti se yahaan aa Gaye Hain Kya. Aur hamare mummy,papa aur behen kahaan Hain?? Aap unhe bula denge.Then Bhushan, Kaushlaya and Revti enter the room.

Guddan- Papa,yeh uncle kaun Hain?? Aap jaante Hain inhe??

Bhushan sees towards Akshat with helpless eyes.

Akshat gets shock of his life. He immediately calls the doctor and tells him everything. Doctor checks Guddan . He asks Akshat to come outside and tells him about Guddan's situation.

Dr. - Dekhiye Mr. Jindal,your wife is suffering from memory loss due to head injury. She does remember her family, but she has forgotten about her marriage and you.

Akshat- Dr. yeh sab kaise ho sakta hai,woh mujhe, apne Jindal Saab ko kaise bhool sakti hai.Jaan basti hai uski mujh mein. Woh apni Jaan ko kaise bhool sakti hai. Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta. Doctor please aap kuch kijiye.

Dr. - Aap himmat rakhiye Mr. Jindal. Agar uparwale ne chaha toh jald unki memory waapis aa jaayegi par abhi aapko khyaal rakhna hoga ki aap kuch aisa na karein jinse unki haalat aur khraab ho. Agar aap aisa karenge toh unki Jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai.

Akshat falls on his knees and cries.His mother comes to her and consoles her.He hugs his mother and cried out his heart in front of her.

Maa- Lalla,tu Hausla mat haar. Kanha ji Hain na woh sab theek karenge.

Akshat- Maa ,yeh sab kya ho Gaya?? Meri Guddan apne Jindal Saab ko hi bhool gayi hai. Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Woh mujhe kaise bhool sakti hai.

Maa- Lalla,ab bus Kar,Rona bandh Kar aur bhagwan se dua Kar ki woh Teri Guddan ko jaldi theek Kar dein.

Meanwhile, Bhushan asks the doctor about Guddan's discharge. Doctor tells him that she is fine now. You can take her to your house. Doctor prepares her discharge papers of hers.

Akshat gets worried because he will get separate from his life,his wife.So,he requests Bhushan to take Guddan to Jindal bhawan and he agrees.

In the car, while going to Jindal bhawan

Guddan- Papa,yeh hum kahaan ja rahe Hain,humara Ghar toh opposite direction mein Hain na. Toh phir.

Bhushan- Woh beta,humare Ghar par renovation ka kaam chal Raha hai. Shaayad tum iss accident ki wajah se bhool gayi ho ki hum sab chutki ki Shaadi ki preparations Kar rahe the. And due to this renovation,her in-laws have insisted us to stay at their home till the marriage. So we are going to Jindal bhawan, yours chhutki's would be sasural.

Guddan- Oh toh yeh baat hai,hum bhi na bhullakkad ho Gaye Hain aur pata nahi Kya Kya bhool Gaye Hain.

Bhushan (in mind)- Haan,beta bhool toh tum bahut kuch chuki ho,apne sabse keemti rishte ko bhool chuki ho.

Guddan(whispering)- Papa, waise yeh uncle kaun hain??

Bhushan- Beta yeh tumahri chhutki ke hone wale jeth Hain.

Akshat is just listening to her talks and crying silently.

And with these talks, they finally reach Jindal bhawan.

Daadi brings aarti ki thaal and does aarti of Guddan.

Bhushan- Beta,yeh tumahri chhutki ki hone wali saas Hain.

Guddan takes blessings of her.

Guddan- Arey daadi,hum aapko daadi keh sakte Hain na.

Maa- Beta Tera jo Mann chahe keh sakti hai.

Guddan- Aap toh bahut sweet Hain daadi and hugs her.

Akshat is standing next to Guddan while Bhushan and kaushlaya on the other side.

They both put their right foot together and enters the home.

Daadi notices this and gets Kanha ji aap ka bahut bahut dhanyavaad. Aakhir kaar Meri bahu me grihpravesh Kar hi liya.

Part 8 completed

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Posted: 6 years ago

Tanu tumne mere thinking ko right Kar he Diya....

I was thinking about memory loss only but jaanbuch k nahi comment Kiya q k Sab ko secret pata chal jata na....

Waise mujhe suchme me Aisa kuch track chahiye...

But very well written dear...

Ab kuch mithe aur hasin lamhe dikhana Akshan k...

Waise b akshat k touchse guddan ko kuch kuch nahi hua na to hum Sab ko bAhot kuch ho jayega....

Continue soonnnn .....

Plz yeh memory loss jyada mat khichna.....

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Ekdum mast

Hope show mein v kuch aisa hota to maja aa jata😛

Continue soon

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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Tanu tumne mere thinking ko right Kar he Diya....

I was thinking about memory loss only but jaanbuch k nahi comment Kiya q k Sab ko secret pata chal jata na....

Waise mujhe suchme me Aisa kuch track chahiye...

But very well written dear...

Ab kuch mithe aur hasin lamhe dikhana Akshan k...

Waise b akshat k touchse guddan ko kuch kuch nahi hua na to hum Sab ko bAhot kuch ho jayega....

Continue soonnnn .....

Plz yeh memory loss jyada mat khichna.....

Aur ap apni stories toh update toh krdein

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Tanu tumne mere thinking ko right Kar he Diya....

I was thinking about memory loss only but jaanbuch k nahi comment Kiya q k Sab ko secret pata chal jata na....

Waise mujhe suchme me Aisa kuch track chahiye...

But very well written dear...

Ab kuch mithe aur hasin lamhe dikhana Akshan k...

Waise b akshat k touchse guddan ko kuch kuch nahi hua na to hum Sab ko bAhot kuch ho jayega....

Continue soonnnn .....

Plz yeh memory loss jyada mat khichna.....

Chalo,tumahri thinking ko Sach Kar Diya.😆

Btw, thanks for liking it😳

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Ekdum mast

Hope show mein v kuch aisa hota to maja aa jata😛

Continue soon

Thank you so much partner for liking it🤗

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