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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshi234

Yeyeyeye superb superb  👏👏👏

Sakshi confused for Arjun behaviour change  sakshi still not believe arjun fully ?? 

Canteen scene was awesome the way Arjun pulled  pulaav box (just imagine Karan  expression) 😁😁😁

And that  spoon part was  😍😍 

Sakshi and her brother conversation was so sweet love it that bonding ❤❤

My favourite scene  in this update car scene wow Arakshi Chupke Chupke 😍❤❤❤❤

This silent Romance was 🔥🔥

 Arakshi friends BUT not friends  but actually friends ufff arakshi so confused  🤣🤣🤣🤣

Arjun and sakshi Dono ko Kuch Kuch Hota Hai but both confused for their feelings  😋😋😋

Wow all are going Ooty Daman interesting  eagerly waiting for that 🤗🤗🤗

Really arjun such a sweet guy 

Awww finally sakshi see arjun soft heart side   

Thank you  thank you so much for this lovely update 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚 

THANK YOU SO MUCH CUTIE.... KEEP LOVING ❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Awesome update

Damn excited for the rest update

THANK YOU SO MUCH🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushikeepsmile

Wow what an amazing update..

I loved it.. Arakshi equation has been changed..

Arjun ate pulaav before Karan and praise her 

Abbas Bhai Sakshi convo was awesome.. both teasing each other..

Arjun droped her and kept her scraf

Arjun become GS.. they are planning for trip..

Arakshi has same choices.. they are going ooty 

Loved the way u describe whole sequence

Riya's mock was😡shreya ko bhi bigaad rahi haii

Arjun told Shree to hack camera.. bechara help Karke kud phas Gaya..Sakshi following them and rescue from those guards..

First I thought Arjun planning for Sakshi after reading everything I felt happy..

Arjun is really sweet.. Sakshi uski smile pe fidaa hogayii..

Waiting for their trip..

Continue soon and thanks for beautiful update and PM😃

THANK YOU MUCH DEAR.. 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25

Very nice dear 

Arjun start feeling about sakshi ...

Hhmmm.... drinking tea😜😉

Sakshi behaviour is kind ... looking forward 

THANK YOU MA'AM. 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

HELLO FRIENDS.smiley1

I AM VERY HAPPY AND GLAD THAT YOU ALL LIKE THIS STORY AND GIVING YOUR FEEDBACK BY COMMENTS. IT MEANS A LOT TO MEsmiley31smiley27

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LOVE AND APPRECIATION ❤️

HERE IS THE NEXT PART.smiley20

CHAPTER 11

RECAP ::: 

[SCENE CUT TO SAKSHI]

                Sakshi yeh sunne ke baad believe hi nahi kar paa rahi thi ki yeh wahi Arjun hai jo sab ko attitude dikhata hai, darata hai, daant lagata hai. she just looked at him,actually she looking his smiling face. And his smile makes her smile too.

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               Arjun turn lete hai and jaane lagte hai. sakshi still looking him, as place is quiet sakshi jab pad ke piche chupne ki koshish karti hai uski bangals awaj karti hai and Arjun yeh sunkar uss aur dekhte hai. he recognize that it is whose bangal’s sound.

ARJUN: sakshi

SAKSHI (mind):isse kaise pata chal gaya ke me yaha hoon

ARJUN: Sakshi i know tum hi ho, bahar aauo

SAKSHI (Mind): ab to main gayi (she gulped)

                Sakshi bahar aati hai. Arjun become restless seeing sakshi here.

ARJUN (mind):sakshi yaha hai matalb usne sab dekh liya hoga, had hai. itni baar bola hai mere mamlo se dur raho par sunti hi nahi hai.

                And this thought makes him angry. He looked at sakshi angrily.

ARJUN: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

SAKSHI: vo actually main bas...vo... haa rasta bhul gayi thi

                Arjun uske pass jate hai.

ARJUN: Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai college ke main gate se tumhara ghar right side pe hai, aur yeh jagah college ke left main back side pe hai, tum apne ghar ka rasta bhul gayi,isn’t it strange?

                Sakshi kuch nahi bol paati.

SAKSHI: vo main actually vo

ARJUN: such bolo sakshi

SAKSHI: vo maine sun liya tha jab aap vo 2 boys ke saath baat kar rahe the

                Sakshi looked at Arjun. Arjun raised his eyebrows.

SAKSHI:jaanbhujkar nahi suna tha, Galati se sun liya tha. Mujhe laga ki aap sorry ka revenge lena chahte ho, phir apne shree ko bulaya to mujhe laga ki aap usse phasana chahte ho but shree to ghar chala gaya. Aap abhi tak nikale nahi the so main just check kar rahi thi ki aap kya kar rahe ho

                        Arjun hold her upper arm tightly and push her to the wall. Sakshi looked at him.

ARJUN (almost shouting): Matlab kabse tum mera picha kar rahi thi? How dare you sakshi? Kitni baar kaha hai mere matter se dur raho, samj nahi aata tumhe? And for your kind information mujhe sach main guilt feel ho raha tha, koi natak nahi kar raha tha

SAKSHI: vo aage bhi apne aisa kiya tha to i thought...

ARJUN: to kya? Well i don’t care ki tum mere baare main kya sochti ho but yes mohit wali baat leak nahi honi chahiye samji tum?

                        Arjun’s hold is too tight. Pain is clearly visible on sakshi’s face.

ARJUN: kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki mohit ko main help karta hoon, jo bhi tumne dekha usse bhul jaauo, agar iss baar tumne kuch bhi gadbad ki to main jo kuch bhi karunga mujhe uska koi guilt nahi hoga samji yaa samjaun

                Arjun leave her harshly and turn opposite side of sakshi.

SAKSHI: I think apne mujhe galat samj liya. main to bohat khush hoon, Don’t worry main kisi se nahi kahungi, infact main to kehti hoon agar apko meri koi help chahiye to jarur bataiyega, main bhi help karungi.

                Yeh sunkar Arjun ka gussa shant hota hai and he take deep breath. Sakshi Arjun ke pass jaati hai and put her hand on his shoulder.

SAKSHI: Aap uski help karke bohat accha kaam kar rahe hai, i will help you trust me

                 Arjun turn and usko dekhte hai.

ARJUN: i am sorry, main bas itna chahta hoon ki mohit ka career barbaad naa ho, uss ne bohat mehnat ki hai.

SAKSHI: don’t worry, vo bohat accha score karega, uske bhaiya uska itna saath jo dete hai

                she smiles. Arjun ki nazar sakshi ke hath pe jaati hai, due to his tight hold unki fingers ke nishan sakshi ke hath pe dikh rahe hai.

ARJUN: yeh toh...

SAKSHI: it’s ok,yeh theek ho jayega

ARJUN: tum chalo mere saath, car main medical kit hoga, main dawai laga deta hoon

SAKSHI: no thanks, iski koi jarurat nahi hai

ARJUN: mujhe mat samjauo kis ki jarurat hai aur kis ki nahi, chalo chup chap.

                Do no parking main pohchte hai. Arjun car ki lights on karte hai and sakshi ko passenger seat pe bethne ko kehte hai then medical kit main se dawai nikalte hai. he hold her hand and start applying ointment on sakshi’s hand. sakshi keep staring him when he applying cream. One loose strand of sakshi’s hair comes on sakshi’s face. Before sakshi do, Arjun hold her hair and fixed it behind her ear. During this they lost in each other. Sakshi ka phone bajta hai jiise dono snapped hote hai. Arjun apna hath piche le lete hai and khade hote hai.

Arjun: tum baat kar lo, main car start karta hoon

                Sakshi nodded in yes. Vo phone pe baat karti hai. in meantime Arjun car strat karte hai. pure raste dono koi baat nahi karte, both are embarrassed. Arjun sakshi ko ghar drop karte hai and phir apne ghar chale jaate hai.  

[AFTER 1 WEEK]

                During this week all are busy in preparations. All students are very excited for this tour. Kal sab ooty ke liye nikalne wale hai so aaj sab bohat busy hai

[AT DEAN’S CABIN]

                Arjun and full team dean ke cabin main hai.

DEAN: amazing Arjun, tumhara idea such main accha hai, hamare naye students kaafi excited hai

ARJUN: thank you sir.

DEAN: preparations ho gaye hai na? i mean bohat saare students hai and yeh ab hamari responsibility hai ki unka dhyan rakhe, waise to kuch staff members aa rahe hai phir bhi...

SAMEER: don’t worry sir, sab acche se arrange ho gaya hai and party ke liye bhi hamne almost sari taiyaariya kar li hai, baki ka waha jaake dekh lenge

DEAN: tum sab se mujhe yahi umeed thi and main khush hoon ki tum logo ne apni team main naye students ko bhi jagah di hai

                        Sakshi, aisha , shree and liza smiles.

ARJUN: sir ek meeting karni hai sabhi class representative ke saath, agar apki permission hai to ham arrange karte hai.

DEAN: why not,tum sab jauo main peon se kehker notice bhijwata hoon.

ARJUN: thank you sir

                        Unki permission lekar sab bahar aate hai.

KARAN: chalo ab meeting room main jaate hai.

AISHA: bhai mera class hai so main class main jaati  hoon

ARJUN: theek hai

            Ayu class main chali jaati hai and baaki sab meeting room main jaate hai and sab CR ko apna apna work batate hai. After 30 min meeting khatam hota hai.

[ONE CORRIDOR]

          Aisha apne friends ke sath baatein karte hue jaa rahi hoti hai...usse ke hatho main books hai...

KASHISH: wow ooty, it's my dream land Yaar. Finally main Ooty jaa rahi hoon

KAVYA: Ayu your bro is awesome. Kya place select ki hai...

Aisha smile kar rahi hai...

NISHA: haa yaar...maine Ooty ke bare me bohat suna hai... Bohat hi acchi jagah hai... Bohat Maja ane wala hai..

KASHISH: me to bas wait kar rahi hoon ki Kab me ooty jaau...

KAVYA: Waise Congrats tera bhai toh GS ban gaya..

AISHA: thanks

KAVYA: Yaar Ek baat sacchi bolti hoon tera bhai kya dikhta hai. Me toh usse dekh kar hi flat ho jaau.. Hayee..

AISHA: kavya...

KAVYA: Accha thik hai kam se kam ek baar mila to de...friendship toh karva de...

Aisha smile karti hai...

NISHA: Haa yaar ek baar friendship karva de...

KASHISH: Hum tere friends hai na... Please Apne friends ke liye itna toh kar hi sakti ho na..

Aisha Has ne lagti hai..

NISHA: ab has kyu rahi hai...

AISHA: Kuch nahi.

NISHA: Yaar please itni si help kar de...

AISHA: I will try...

KASHISH: What try?? Vo toh tumhara bhai hai na.. To Phir try kyu??

KAVYA,KASHISH,NISHA: please...

AISHA: Accha thik hai...

Tino smile karte hai...

KAVYA,KASHISH,NISHA: Thank you

AISHA: Maine sure nahi kaha… try karungi aisa kaha…

                        Tino upset ho jati hai.. ayu unhe dekh smile karti hai…

AISHA: Accha accha thik hai.. main milwa dungi ab apna face thik karo aur chalo.

                 Iss aur sameer apne Mobile pe kisi ke sath baatein kar rahe hai, Aur Vo Aisha ki aur hi jaa rahe hai. Sameer mobile pe bohat Jyada busy hai. Iss aur Aisha apne friends ke sath baatein karne main busy hai.  Ek point pe aake dono takrate hai. Aisha ke hath se books gir jati hai. Vo gussa hoti hai... Sameer abhi bhi call me busy hai toh unhe pata hi nahi chalta...

SAMEER: Sorry

               Do no Ko pata hi nahi tha ki asal main vo do no takraye kis ke sath hai.. Vo jane lagte hai... But Aisha, She is Damn angry...Vo books lene ke liye bent down hoti hai.

AISHA: Andhe ho dekh ke nahi chal sakte Ya ladkiya dekh apni aukat pe aa gya

              Sameer aisha ki voice sun ke rukte hai Aur turn lete hai. Do no ek dusre Ko dekh shocked hote hai..

AISHA: Tum...

               Aisha sameer ko dekh aur jyada gussa hoti hai...

AISHA (in one breath): Tum apne aap ko samjte kya ho Jab dekho tab mere piche pade rahte ho Kya chahte kya ho tum?? Uss din bhi tumne mere sath vo ganda majak kiya, usse din ma’am ke sath batmizi kar rahe the aur ab phir se mujhe preshan karne chale aaye…khud ko kahi ka hero samjte ho ki jab dekho tab herogiri karne lagte ho aur uss ki wajah se tumhe football…

                  Vo age kuch bole usse phele hi sameer aisha ka muh bandh kar dete hai. some time eye lock between them. Aisha ke friends un do no ko dekhte hai Aur ishare main ekdusre ko puchte hai ki yeh chal kya raha hai. ass pass students ki voice se dono ki eye lock break hoti hai…

SAMEER: Kitna patter patter karti ho…thodi der chup nahi reh sakti

                Aisha kuch bolne jati hai…

SAMEER: Meri baat abhi finish nahi hui hai…

                Sameer usse ke pass jate hai aur usska hath pakd lete hai. aisha glared him.

SAMEER: pheli baat andha main nahi hoon tum bhi dekhkar chal sakti ho. Dusri baat main koi aisa ladka nahi hoon ki ladkiyo ko dekh apni aukat bhul jaau. Main apne apko yaha ka student samjta hoon. Mujhe tumhare pich padne ka koi shokh nahi hai aur tum jaisi attitude wali ladkiyon ke piche padne se bhi koi fayda nahi hai. Galati ho gayi thi meri uss din ke maine tumhare sath majak kiya. uss din ma’am ke saath prank karne ka mera koi irada nahi tha lakin friends ke samne muhje yeh karna pada.tum jaisi ladkiyon ko pareshan karne se to accha main jake sanyas hi le loon Aur haa main koi hero nahi hu na hi herogiri karta hu. phir bhi Agar tumhe mujhe hero samjna hai to samj sakti ho I don’t have any problem. Last and important thing mere career pe baatein banane ka koi haq maine tumhe nahi diya so aage se mere career ke bare main kuch bhi bola na toh….

              Sameer sense ki aisha bohat gusse me hai vo sameer ka hath zor se chod deti hai aur uss ke  aur close jati hai sameer ki ankho main dekhtihai. 

AISHA: Bohat ho gaya tumhara. kab se sunaye jaa rahe ho. kuch bol nahi rahi hoon iss ka matlab yeh nahi ki tum mujhe itna suna do Aur yeh kya attitude laga rakha hai. Main jaisi bhi hoon tumse toh acchi hi ho samje tum.

                 Vo dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai..

AISHA: aur kya bol rahe the tumhare career ke baare main Kuch bhi bola na toh? Toh What?? Apna sentence complete karo, Bolo?

                 Sameer kuch nahi bolte hai.

AISHA: Kya hua? Bolti kyu bandh ho gayi bolo

     But still vo kuch nahi bolte.

AISHA: Agar dhamki hi deni hai na toh puri do warna mat do aur yeh dhamkiya kisi aur ko jaake dena mujhe nahi samje yaa samjaun. Aage se Aisha rawte ke raste main aane ki koshish bhi ki na toh main vo haal karungi ki spane maine bhi nahi socha hoga.

                  Aisha sameer ke pair pe jor se pair marti hai.

SAMEER: Ahhaa..

                  Sameer ko aise pain main dekh vo has ne lagti hai. Sameer usse dekhte hai.

SAMEER (mind): smile karte hue yeh kitni cute lagti hai

                     Sameer usse ka smile face dekh ke apna pain bhul jate hai. Aisha has rahi hai. Sameer usse hi dekhe jaa rahe hai. Aisha feel gaze on her.

AISHA: kya hua? dard hua? Yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai. Aisa samjlo k ek chotta sa trailer dhikhaya hai maine. Aage se mujhe dhamki ya pange lene se pehle soch lena ki main kya kya kar sakti ho. Aur na main apna sentence pura bhi karti hu aur jo bola vo karke bhi dikhati hoon. samje yaa samjaun.

               Aisha sameer ko then girls ko dekhti hai

AISHA: Let’s go girls.

                          Vo apne friends ke sath waha se chali jati hai.

SAMEER: Kasam se yaar yeh ladki thikhi mirch se bhi jyada thikhi hai. Kitna bolti hai. iss ladki se to dur hi rehna better hai. Aaj pair toda hai pata nahi aage mera sar hi phod de. Aur gussa.. vo toh daily naak pe betha hua hota hai. Arjun kaise sambhalta hoga isse. Lakin hai badi cute.

                     Vo smile karne lagte hai. Iss aur aisha boha thi jyada gusse main hai.

AISHA: Usski itni himmat ki vo mujhe itna sunaye. Muhje dhamki de. Aisha rawte ko. Aaj toh sirf pair toda hai aage se mujhe se panga liye na toh sar hi phod dungi. Bhai ka friend hai iss liye warn karke aayi hu.

KAVYA: Chill yaar. Itna gussa mat ho.

KASHISH: Haa shant ho jaa.

NISHA: Chal canteen chalte hai.

Aisha deep breath leti hai aur shant hoti hai.

AISHA: Hmm. Chalo..

Phir vo tino waha se chale jate hai.

[AFTER SOMETIME]

sab log Arjun ke class main bethe hue hai.

RIYA: aaj ke din to kuch zyada hi work hai.

SHREYA: right

                Karan jo phone pe baat kar rahe the vo phone cut karte hai.

KARAN: friends bus wale ke saath baat ho chuki hai. vo kal subah  5 baje college aa jayega.

SAKSHI: what? 5 baje, yaani hame 4 baje tak college pohchna hoga?

KARAN: haan kuch problem hai?

SAKSHI: nahi vo bas

LIZA: isko jaldi uthna padega yeh soch kar hawaiiya udd rahi hai iski right?

                Sakshi glared her.

SAKSHI: main jaldi uth sakti hoon, koi problem nahi hai

ARJUN: accha hai because ham yaha 3 baje hi aane wale hai

SAKSHI: 3 baje?Kyun?

ARJUN: Kyun ki hamne sab kaam ki responsibility li hai so hame aana hoga

SAKSHI:  ok aa jayege. (mind) 3 baje?Yaani mujhe 2 baje uthna padega, to main soungi kab? Aaj jaagran hone wala hai,oh god kya hoga mera (pout)

SAMEER: Arjun tumne bataya nahi hame, kon sa kaam kise dekhna hai

ARJUN: haa batata hoon.

KARAN: shera main sab students ke bus sittings dekh lunga ki kon kis bus main hoga

CHOTU: but karan akele kaise dekhoge

KARAN: akela kaha sakshi hai na mere saath, hai na sakshi?

                Sakshi kuch react kare usse pehle hi,

ARJUN: no vo nahi aayegi

KARAN: but kyun shera?

 ARJUN: vo maine usko dusre kaam ke liye appoint kiya hai, sakshi hamari bus ke students ki attendance manage karegi. Is that Clear sakshi?

SAKSHI: yes don’t worry i will.

KARAN (mind): yeh shera bhi na, mujhe sakshi ke saath rehna tha, mujhe wait karna chahiye tha ki shera kya kaam dene wala hai, koi baat nahi kaam khatam hone ke baad pure raste to main sakshi ke saath beth paunga. Bohat maja ayega.

CHOTU: to karan ko kon help karega?

ARJUN: shreya tum karan ke saath rehna.

SHREYA: ok i will

SAMEER: Hotel main sab settle karne ki zimedaari main leta hoon

ARJUN: ok sam, main bhi tumhe help karunga.

AISHA: bhai mujhe koi work nahi milega?

ARJUN: ofcourse, tum tumhari chiki ke sath rehna, vo attendance dekh rahi hogi tab tum sab ke signature le lena

AISHA: great

                Sakshi and Aisha iss baat se bohat khsuh hai. Arjun sab ko apna apna work batate hai. 

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THAT’S IT FOR NOW. smiley1

I KNOW YOU ALL ARE WAITING FOR "OOTY TRIP" AND TRUST ME I AM ALSO VERY EXCITED FOR THAT. WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE, I WILL TRY MY BEST TO GIVE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.😊

HOPE YOU LIKE IT. smiley20

THANK YOU SO MUCH.smiley27

BYE. KEEP SMILING. smiley9





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Nice update 

Continue soon 

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Loved it dear

Awesome part

Thanks for PM 

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Nice update 

Continue soon 

Thanks i will try my best to update soon😊

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Loved it dear

Awesome part

Thanks for PM 

Continue soon 🙂

Thank you so much.. 🤗😳

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Super update

Beautiful and nice concept