MishBir One Shot: One Against All - Page 2

Originally posted by: samyuktha0411

Nicely written. Do write more.

Thankyou! I hopefully will write more.

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Well penned ... would love to read more 😊

Thank you! I would love to share more.

Originally posted by: vssdp

Beaitiful post

Really loved it

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

Nice one 👏👏

I wanted to know what was in the letter though :)

Thanks. I couldn't come up with the exact emotions for that note. Plus it wasn't for Mishti but Kunal, so I conveniently skipped. 😛

Let's keep it a mystery rather. 🙈

This was a very soothing read and the word flow was very good! I loved it.

And I am those people who like a slow angst, and a steady road to the realisation and confession so that part was great too.

Originally posted by: Itsflora

Lovely os..

Hi 5 on the misti not realising soon point..Nice to find someone who also want this journey to be slow and steady.

Thank you!

Hi-five! I just don't know, I didn't feel like she should realise it once he goes missing or once she feels the sudden jealousy. At least not now when she had to go in search of Abir. Didn't think she could have thought of anything but Abir. Not even evaluate her feelings towards Abir.

I want it to be more like having hints here and and there about how they mean so much more than just friends to each other. But that is only after she doesn't have to stress about Abir's whereabouts. Like she scrutinize her restless and impulsive actions after having delt with all of this.

So yeah!

Edited: damn! Sorry, I didn't realise, I blabbered a little too much.

Originally posted by: mridhu

This was a very soothing read and the word flow was very good! I loved it.

And I am those people who like a slow angst, and a steady road to the realisation and confession so that part was great too.

Thank you so much. I am glad you feel that way. 😊

i totally loved it. i can totally see this happening. i wish it does now

Originally posted by: ShenzK

Thank you!

Hi-five! I just don't know, I didn't feel like she should realise it once he goes missing or once she feels the sudden jealousy. At least not now when she had to go in search of Abir. Didn't think she could have thought of anything but Abir. Not even evaluate her feelings towards Abir.

I want it to be more like having hints here and and there about how they mean so much more than just friends to each other. But that is only after she doesn't have to stress about Abir's whereabouts. Like she scrutinize her restless and impulsive actions after having delt with all of this.

So yeah!

Edited: damn! Sorry, I didn't realise, I blabbered a little too much.

Hi 5 on that too..

I blabber a lot whenever i can :-)

Its a good thing.

Frankly I want the same thing.As I said before I love the ahista ahista love story but it feels like they wont drag that much.

Yrhpk doesn’t drag something for long.That much i know from all those 75+ episodes.In any other show it would have taken so many mu,x,y,z & other thing to convey the leads feeling.But here they did it effortlessly.

And Misty got the fact instantly .She was no clueless damsel in distress.

Also the way Abir disclosed to misti they have seen each other since the kulz time on ketki's gordhana,I was actually impressed.There was no draging about that fact too.Abir casually informed misty THEY know each other for longer and misty took it normally.

There were no kismat or destiny speech like typical itv shows.

So I think they will present the realisation in a normal way too.

Originally posted by: vssdp

Beaitiful post

Really loved it

Sorry to use your post dear. Coz this system is not allowing me to reply directly. Don't know why..

Anywz Shenz, Congratulations for this write up. Very very well written. I loved it.

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