Teddy Bear (OS)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Idea taken from captain's recent post.


Guddan is back from the hospital and is totally unware of Akshat's confession.


Guddan calls Jindal saab.


Guddan: hello Jindal saab in a crying tone.


Akshat: guddan what happened why are you talking like this. Are you feeling well? Did someone say anything to you at home?


Guddan: no Jindal saab nobody told anything to me and i am feeling totally well.


Akshat: then what happened?


Guddan: i am getting bored at home.


Akshat: should I come back home?


Guddan: no. Should I tell you something,will you agree?


Akshat: what is it guddan? Tell me.


Guddan: can i change the decorations of our room. Please.


Akshat: that's it. Ok do it but please keep my taste in consideration also.


Guddan: ok. I will try to.


Akshat: I will send the driver alongwith my card. He will pick and drop you back home. I don't want any argument on this.


Guddan: ok bye.


She does the shopping and comes back home with a lot of things and heads straight to her room. She changes into a comfortable trouser and shirt, ties her hair into bun and starts her work.


Guddan: beta start now.


She firstly starts from the bed and changes its cover and pillow covers too.The new cover is white with small teddy bears made on it and one big teddy bear on each pillow cover. She then moves to the balcony and removes the swing with the help of a servant. It is replaced by single hanging chair with a cushion inside it. She puts a wind chime on the balcony door.


She then puts a huge teddy bear on the bed with one heart cushion on each side. After this she stands on the bed and puts shining moons and stars on the ceiling. She then scans the entire room to see if something is a miss.


Guddan: that's it guddan. If I do anything more Jindal saab will throw me out of the house.


Maa: guddan come downstairs. What are you doing their since so many hours.


Guddan: coming maa.


Maa: what were you doing?


Guddan: nothing maa i was getting bored so I was changing the decor of the room.


Maa: ok come sit. You might be tired.


Guddan: no I will change first, Jindal saab can come anytime.


Maa: it's ok sit.


After sometime, the doorbell rings and AJ enters. He spots his mother and wife in the Hall and heads towards them. Guddan stands up seeing him and runs to her room. AJ is shocked seeing her outfit and is staring at her retreating figure. She comes down after changing and he is a bit upset cause he didn't see her properly in that outfit.


After sometime guddan heads to the kitchen and AJ goes to his room. He opens the door and is terrified seeing the light coming from ceiling and shouts. Guddan comes their and turns on the light.


Guddan: Jindal saab what happened?


Akshat: nothing when I opened the door light was emanating from the ceiling.


Guddan: ohhh. It's because of those stars and moons (pointing to the ceiling). They glow when their is no light in room.


Akshat: ohh so that's the decor you did?


Guddan: you liked it.


Akshat: it's ok.


After sometime he spots the teddy bear on the bed and gives a horrible look to guddan.


Akshat: guddan what the hell is that thing doing on my bed?


Guddan: that's cute no?


Akshat: but why is it on our bed?


Guddan: because it's going to sleep with me from now on. Now we won't need the pillow wall anymore.


Akshat: what?? You will sleep with him?


Guddan: yes I had this habit before marriage too..


Akshat: (murmuring) the pillow wall was better than this.


Guddan: you said something?


Akshat: no😠. I will go and change.


Guddan: what happened to Jindal saab asuddenly? His mood was so good when he came?


Akshat comes out of the bathroom and sees guddan is not in the room. He takes it as an opportunity and picks up the teddy bear and throws it on the hanging chair and smiles to himself.


Akshat's Inner Thoughts


What the hell is wrong with you akshat Jindal? You are being jealous of a teddy bear. A lifeless creature. Yes, so what she is my wife. I only have the right on her. Guddan what have you done to me.


Akshat is exiting the room when guddan enters. He reaches the stairs and guddan shouts for him and he comes back to the room.


Akshat: what happened?


Guddan: why have you moved him from the bed?


Akshat: because I thought his absence would make my room look less like a toy room.


Guddan: Jindal saab what is this??


Akshat: guddan we already have so many teddy bears on the bed. What difference would the absence of one make?


Guddan: ok as you wish and leaves the room.


Akshat: (to himself) no argument strange.


Post dinner guddan leaves for her room while akshat is still talking to kishore and vardaan about some deal. In the room guddan changes into her night suit and brings the teddy back on the bed and hugs sleeping it.


Guddan: Jindal saab now what will you do?


Akshat comes to the room stressed and is shocked to see how guddan was hugging the teddy bear. She had grabbed him under one arm while her face was on his face and one leg was above his leg.


Akshat's Inner Thoughts


What does she think of herself? Is she so naive? Can't she see that I love her? Can't she understand? How can she sleep with a teddy bear like that and in my presence? I can't see her sleeping like this.


He goes and tries to take the teddy bear from her hold but she tightens her grip. He gets frustrated and snatches it with full force and throws it on the floor and even kicks it.


On the other hand guddan in her sleep starts looking for the teddy bear with her hand and akshat immediately goes to sleep by her side. Guddan thinks it's the teddy bear and makes herself more comfortable by placing her head on his chest and wraps one hand around his stomach. He too wraps an arm around her and sleep peacefully.



THE END....


Hope you people enjoy it.

Edited by Akshan5148 - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
#2

Wow

It was amazing

Hope show mein v aisa dikhne ko mile 😛

Do write more

And continue ur other stories soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#3

Shaan, this is so cute😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#4

Awwww 😍😍😍

So cute and somewhat funny reading akshat's inner thoughts

And last when he kicked that teddy bear 😂😂

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
#5

Hoyee hoyeeee jealous Jindal saab woh bhi teddy se 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
#6

aww such a cute os

as cute as a teddy bear

aur jindal saab bhi teddy bear se kam nahi hai

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yeh meri iccha hai ki humare AkshAn show mei bhi ek baar cuddle kare...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#8

super cute

But poor teddy bear, bekar mein hi Jindal saab ki maar kayi cause Jindal saab got jealous 😆

I bet now poor teddy will have to endure Pervy's jealousy too since the teddy took his hisse ka pitai from Jindal saab 🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
#9

Hehehe jalkukda Jindal Saab

Maza Aya

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
#10

Such a cute and lovely OS. Hope we get cuddling scene of Akshan in show.

Bechara Teddy bear got kicked by Jindal Saab😒

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