Samaina SS: My Dark Lover closing note p56 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Labhya

Is baar mai second aaaya😎

Sims,

Itni jaldi update expect nahi ki... It was such a suprise dr.. update was so so good and emotional because of the way you described Naina's pain. Its not so easy to shift to a different city and start a career without much of family support, be it of any age, the first time is always difficult and i was able to totally relate with Naina crying on the street after tossing her bag, but still not giving up. I love the independent Naina so much and would love to see more of her being independent and Happy with herself in Delhi..

Coming back to Sameer, i m still not over the Delhi phase and going back to tat place or reading about Sameer in Delhi is just like a horrible dream for me. I dono how much horrible it must be for him to stay at such a place for years but still not make a peace with tat family and reading about horrible dadi doesn't make me happy at all, but i surely hope tat you will definitely make it worth it.

Eagerly waiting for your next update dr

Originally posted by: shwta16

Thank you for your detailed response. 😃 I am 93 born so decide what you want to call me now. 😆🤗

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Shweta di it is then! 🤗 (I am 95 born and 23 like Su)

haye meri aankhe bhar aayi the way you keep mentioning me😭

oh btw unresed on page 29

Well Well .. This update was indeed " slow poison " every little detail in it screamed the game of destiny and special mention to unforgettable memory of their meeting after 6 years and that magical hold where nothing mattered except of the fact that they finally were together .. In a sense but their is a long journey ahead that will lead to their togetherness and I'm all in for it😎

" maybe it was the heat or the tears that constantly dripped from get eyes " ise kehte hai pehli ball pe sixer 👏 the way you beautified a mere aimless walk of naina with your description about the surroundings and her inner turmoil is praiseworthy .... " cause toh kabhi chudiya nahi pehnti .." Unknowingly just like before she once again had put an extra amount of effort in getting ready for sameer 😆 and this worked and how 😳 sameer became a love sick puppy well let me not go their otherwise I'll again give my reviews over that scene !! Naina is hopelessly effected and I'm loving it .. She just can't get over the fact that she literally was in his arms just a while ago , her constantly remembering about the beauty of that small moment has my heart .. How wonderfully you've once again made us relive that moment with naina .. It takes effort to again and again write about the same scene and yet have the same impact on the reader's mind and heart .. I connected to naina criticising and not getting the place in order it happens with me all the time 😆

Naina addressing sameer as " musafir " did something to my Heart .. Its really heartbreaking to see their equation and opinion changing about each other at this extent but that's the beauty of this story ! If we see from naina's perspective sameer was indeed a mere " musafir " who came in her life tought her what it's like to fall in love and then disappeared like cloud .. I dont know why but Sameer being addressed as " musafir " was the highlight of the update for me .. This one word actually summarized the whole concept for me

The power of destiny is stronger than any other power and in samaina's case it has always played an important part from and this time also destiny had played its game I didn't expected it to to be like this and this soon but seems destiny and you were in hurry 😆 and I loved it !! Poor souls have waited for 6 years and now at least they deserve to be near each other

" maaf kijiyega pyas lagi thi" no matter how many years he spend with his mother she can never understand and see the real sameer.. My heart went out to sameer .. He is living in a house and not a home where he can call anybody as his family .. The forgotten first aid gave me the idea what all he must have gone through over the years ... Infinite number of sleepless nights loneliness and suffocation .. I can't decide whos condition is worse with each chapter this feeling will only increase

" tum kis kahani ki pari ho naina " this line is my forever favorite indeed she is his pari and no one can love him the way she did only I'd he apply his brain he can once again have his Angel in his life

The whole paragraph about heart controlling the body and sameer not knowing if the death will come to him or he'll go for it first until he saw naina today this whole paragraph gave us a briefing about how lifeless his life would be and how deep his love is by just seeing a glimpse of her and holding her for few moments made him feel lively

" fool himself that the drops on his face are of water " advantage of taking shower well it's actually true

So naina got some amount of idea about his miserable life .. Not a single photo of sameer in the whole house well what more to be expected from them .. Naina constantly chattering " pighal mat " was cute .. The girl is gonna have a hard time

You know when you said on leaving the update in a cliffhanger I did a mistake to take it lightly .. This was not a mere cliffhanger but a torture now how will I wait and you've no idea in what direction my thought process is going .. Sameer wrapped in nothing but a towel and naina in all her innocence and shock that must have made her look a lot note sexier

Don't need to say that I'm in love with this story and " EGEARLY " waiting for the next part .. And please give us hahk update too I'm missing it

I hope I've not blabberd too much

Love

Laalchi reader

Hi

Wow what a beautiful update. Its really amazing dear.

Hi Sims,

Another beautiful and emotional update. Naina was not coming out of the shock that she has face sameer. She was again in dilemma whether to give up or not.

Naina and Deepika's cute little conversation was beautifully potrait. Finally naina successful in entering somani mansion whether it was accidental. Seeing no photos of sameer in house make her heart wrench and ours too. She very well know how lonely sameer was there.

Regarding sameer I think he will soon forget his resolution may be forgotten. He needed naina badly. You stopped on cliff hanger very excited for next update. Naina will entered in sameer's room and don't know what will happen. Reading precap I already blushed.

Originally posted by: Sania98

Hey! Sims🤗

Actually my name is Aishwarya you can call me with this name, I use Sania just for the forum. I've been silent reader for a while hesitant to review any story but after some time I started to do so as I couldn't stop myself from appreciating the work. Loved reading your stories ❤️

As you mentioned about the fight between their inner demons would be more interesting and to know what's next in the store.

And I'm yet to read the next chapter. Would be doing that in sometime 😊

Thank you for loving my stories dear. Its always good to see silent readers breaking out of their shell and interacting here.

Do read the next chapter and let me know how you find it. If possible before thursday because that's when the next update will be coming your way. Keep the love coming! ❤️

Bundles of love,

Sims

Hey Sims, another super one dear.again.and Dil le lo for this quickness,the prompt updates particularly when I know u are not very comfortable in time deserves a bow..So a hug for u for such quick updates 🤗🤗🤗🤗this one ss of yours screams passion ,n u are so good at it..All I say is that I read your updates with bated breath ..This Sameer n Naina of yours are so well presented that I can visualise them n feel half their emotions..Happy to know that we are getting another one by next Thursday..Can't wait n I hope meri hi nazar na lage..😎😎😎wish all the love u are spreading gets back to you as well..lodzalove n tc.Pragya.

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Meri Pyari Choti 🤗,

Your comment took me back to the initial days of our friendship in the comments section of HAHK and made me realise just how much I miss your lengthy detailed reviews on my work. Tumhari excitement aur utawalapan dekhkar I am even more motivated to make this story as good as I can make it. Yes I have been very ill but thanks to the LTG's and my family's love and support I am on the mend now and much better.

I am glad you agree with Naina leaving Sameer. My biggest fears with this concept were: a. readers would feel disconnected with Sameer's character for what he has done. But its good to see people understand the complication and flaws in Sameer. He is by far my favourite character on ITV. He is a man of many shades, layers, and complexities. And despite being flawed you cant help but love him for the way he loves Naina. Because he has been constantly abandoned his entire life and its just Naina's unconditional love that gives him a sense of stability and to have that taken away would mean a very dark Sameer. Which is what I am trying to explore: that darkness, that deewangi.

Second fear was that people wouldn't agree with Naina's choice of giving up on Sameer because in the show through her character it has become pretty evident that she wouldn't actually give up on Sameer so easily. That she would wait for him is shown so beautifully in the Delhi Track. And because she understands Sameer to the T she would never doubt his love for her. So I had pretty difficult time balancing her variable emotions and attitudes. Which is why I brought in the letter because she feels that maybe for sometime even if Sameer didn't love her he had felt something towards her and the reason for her moving on is not that she is not his forever rather he is not her's anymore.

Since the two have come face to face now, things are going to change and feelings are going to pick up. Of course they will meet again and again and everytime their yearning will increase. I hope I do justice to the premise I have set out to explore.

Bundles of love,

Sims Di

yes diii i too remembered those days......

and be ready for chapter two there is a response on the way🤗