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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ahhhh... So cute

Bestest thing I have ever readed

Please it's an request keep writing for ever because after reading this I think writing is you best hobby or passion so never stop writing you write so well

How cute this was awww.....

A big hug to you from my side like samina ha ... Bus vo wali feeling nhi aayegi I know and you too feeling alag Hoti hai Hur hug Mai

Last para was superb

Actually starting se lekar end tk each and every line was so cute

I na love you for giving us this cute , adorable , loveliest , and full of emotions 😍😍😍😍😍😆😄😄😄😄😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 update

At last THANKU for this update

Snehapandey12 😃😄😆😉😋




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Posted: 6 years ago
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🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️

These are my feelings after reading this adorable, beautiful n cutest OS. Lots of hugs to you!! 🤗

It's so beautiful that I can't describe in words. And your writing style is wow! I had a smile while I was reading it. I just loved it. ❤️

And the song "Are Kash k hum hosh me ab aane na paaye" is one of my favorites. Thanks for choosing this song and writing such a cute OS. ❤️

I just loved parent Samaina. The mood swings of Naina, her demands, the clueless Sameer, obedient husband - everything was awesome. And Saina and Zeo -- beautiful names. I loved how the little girl was teasing her daddy. 🤗🤗

And the last line - "Zindagi agar gham deti hai toh usse beshumaar khushiyan dena bhi aata hai" is so true. ❤️

Thanks for making my day 🤗😃 Loved it. ❤️

Edited by shwta16 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Such a cute and lovely os..☺️

A cute little samaina family and that song just added cherry on top..

Great work🙂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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First of all, Twinnie, what's with your stories and making me crave for a particular food. It was Pani Puri before, now it's the Blueberry icecream. I only have Butterscotch and it's not giving the same effect. I am mad at you now. 😆


Aye Kaash Ke Hum is one of my favourites so it was very pleasant to sing along whenever you entered the lyrics.


Such a sweet OS! The twins was a surprise! ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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That's such a beautiful OS octo..

Loved it so much..

The perfect blend of emotions, the scenes and lastly Saina and zeo

Daddy is afraid of Mumma is very true..🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome OS Hash!

Thank you so much for this one.🤗

The first thing for which I am happy is that it had a happy ending because Saathi Re literally left me in tears and after reading this one, I had a smile on my face.😃

So Naina was pregnant but hadn't told Sameer about it and was angry because he hadn't picked up her call 😆. She was on literally on fire and I liked it very much.

Our Bechara Sameer came back home only to meet his angry wife. Biwi ko gussa dilaya hai to anjaam bhi bhugatna hi tha.😆

I loved that you gave such beautiful Samaina scenes in your Octo friendly way. You really take care of all your readers. Thank you so much for that.🤗

The scene in the hospital was Dil le lo. Naina got her little Sameer and Sameer got his little Naina. And the names of their children were so beautiful - Zeo anf Saina .

And the last part where Saina asked Sameer to choose between Naina, Zeo and Saina was amazing. Sameer chose Naina and the reason of him choosing Naina was beautiful.❤️

And Mr. Maheshwari is afraid of his wife, hmmm achcha hai achcha hai 😆. It was pyaar wala darr and therefore I liked it very much.

And what to say about the song. Hash, I applaud you for your amazing writing and your choice of songs. The songs chosen by you are always apt for the stories of your One Shots. You really are a wonderful writer.👏

"Ae kaash ke hum

Hosh mein ab aane na paayein

Ae kaash ke hum

Hosh mein ab aane na paayein

Bas nagmein tere pyaar ke

Gaate hi jaayein"

Such a beautiful song it is. And I just lovvvvvveeee this song ❤️. And just like Saathi Re, now even this song reminds me of your OS every time I hear it.

Please do write more One Shots like these in future.

Keep smiling,

Prachi 😃

Edited by TheGirlWhoLived - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Hey, that was such a sweet OS😳

The pregnancy tantrums of Naina😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome os, loved it very much be it Naina's pregnancy mood swing or the last part where she pretended to be angry.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Awww...So Cute & Beautiful update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Octo

Beaitifully you have carved out their journey of parenthood along with a melodious song. Naina's craving and Sameers Love all summed up in a short and sweet way.

Luv

Sajida

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