You are my life (sequal to you completes me)

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is sequal to you completes me my other os on Akshan..

But you can read it independently..

Perv is arrested..Aj himself handed him to police..everyone is fine all are good...revti is safe and free ..siddhi ji is free...Rawat ji is helping us against perv ...everyone is at home ..but where is he..?

He handed perv 3 hours ago.. He should be here by now..but where is he..?

Guddan thoughts are all about him...she want to see him...here she was restless since he went out behind that perv..and here he is not coming home after all this...

Then he enters his house...his eyes were searching for her..one face he wants to see...she run towards him..he opens his arms and smiles she just hugged him.......and................. he was lifeless on her shoulders...she checked her hands ...blood...there was blood on her hands...and he..he is not responding...she cried his name for first time...."Akshatt"..…his name...all other people take him from her lay him down on ground...and called for Ambulance...she was just standing there...looking at him ..then at her hands ...his hand was on her head ..all his blood was filled in her hair line...drops are on her forehead...she touched her hairline..all others are not there for her...she don't know what to do...her dream about him...she told him to be careful...she was loosing him...how can she save him...clutch him to her so nobody can take him from her...what she do to bring him back...

She was moving with others...looking at him..he was lying on stretcher..her hand was in his hand....he told her he will never leave him...she trusts him..he never lied to her...she was not responding to others...they do not exists for her...the only one matter is him....he told her...when he will come back he will open his heart to her...she knows that he was going to accept their relation with whole heart..

She don't know where is she...she was just looking at him...nurse came...others came ..they separate them...she was not ready to let go his hand...some one pulled her with force and his hand ....he ...Doctors take him to the OT...

she just stand there her eyes were fixed on the doors...all are trying to compose her...talk to her...but she was unable to listen them...their voices are unreachable...she can hear only one voice....HIS... Before he fainted...he told her in their hug that he loves her...he confessed his feeling just before he fainted.....his voice..his face ...only these things are in her mind...her "Akshat"...she want to tell him ..that she also loves him...only him....for this ...for her love ...for their new life...he has to come back...she will snatch his life from death...he can't leave her like this....she will do everything to bring him back..she went to temple and sit near kanaha ...she was not saying anything just was sitting there lifelessly...

After an hour...

Angad: bhabhi....Bhabhi...bhaii ..Bhaii thk hai...apko bula rhe hai chaliye...

She looked at him...but didn't speak a word to him and went with him...

He  was back stabbed by prev while their fight...people told him to go to the hospital but he was so stubborn...and want to come to her...and when he realize that he was really hurt badly...he was more than half way to home..so he drives with difficulty..but reached home..he thought what if something happens to him so he confessed his feelings to her...

When he open his eyes..she was not there..all are talking to him and thanking god for his life..but his eyes were only searching for one face...HER..

She enters his room...her eyes were red and lifeless..she was not looking at him...he failed her..he promised her that she will not bear any pain from now...and what he did...his carelessness brings him here...how had she coped with all that..? He can't imagine her on his place and he make her feel all those fears of her..

All went out from there and left them alone...

She slowly looked at him.,..and he said...

Aj: Guddan...mai thk hu..

She run to him and hugged him by lying on his chest and clutched his shirt in her fists..she cried..and cried until all her pain is not out from her heart...she slowly stop crying but didn't speak she just closed her eyes and remain there..

Aj: mujhe pta hai mne bht preshan kr diya tumhe...tum jo saza dogi mujhe manzoor hai..ek baar meri tarf dekh lo..mujse baat kro guddan...

She slowly gets up from his chest..she watch him for minutes she touched his face..his hands...he was really here and he is fine..he is not going...she knows he never lied ..and he kept his promise...he was staring at her ...her happiness..the life in her eyes is back..he knows..his guddan is back...she took his face in her hands and kissed his whole face...he was happy from her love shower...he knows she will punish him for this...but she has forgiven him...she hugged him again and he shifts to make place for her..and she fits in her place..like always..he placed his hand around her...and she peacefully sleep on her favorite pillow..HIS CHEST.. 

Tell me if you noticed something..in this OS..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ye wala os you completes me ka continuation hai na

Its amazing thanks avni πŸ€—i was missing Akshan today plz ek os guddan ke accident ya fir uske goli lagne pr likh do na plz plz ho ske to kl hi likh dena

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: 123g

 I will try..😊

Plz likh dena bcoz kl v weekend hai πŸ˜›

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Posted: 4 years ago

It's amazingπŸ‘

Do write more

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome πŸ‘πŸΌ

Penned beautifully πŸ‘

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Avni.😳

Very simple and heart-touching. Loved how desperate Akshat is to confess her feelings and the last scene was❀️

Do write more.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: 123g

This is sequal to you completes me my other os on Akshan..

But you can read it independently..

Perv is arrested..Aj himself handed him to police..everyone is fine all are good...revti is safe and free ..siddhi ji is free...Rawat ji is helping us against perv ...everyone is at home ..but where is he..?

He handed perv 3 hours ago.. He should be here by now..but where is he..?

Guddan thoughts are all about him...she want to see him...here she was restless since he went out behind that perv..and here he is not coming home after all this...

Then he enters his house...his eyes were searching for her..one face he wants to see...she run towards him..he opens his arms and smiles she just hugged him.......and................. he was lifeless on her shoulders...she checked her hands ...blood...there was blood on her hands...and he..he is not responding...she cried his name for first time...."Akshatt"..…his name...all other people take him from her lay him down on ground...and called for Ambulance...she was just standing there...looking at him ..then at her hands ...his hand was on her head ..all his blood was filled in her hair line...drops are on her forehead...she touched her hairline..all others are not there for her...she don't know what to do...her dream about him...she told him to be careful...she was loosing him...how can she save him...clutch him to her so nobody can take him from her...what she do to bring him back...

She was moving with others...looking at him..he was lying on stretcher..her hand was in his hand....he told her he will never leave him...she trusts him..he never lied to her...she was not responding to others...they do not exists for her...the only one matter is him....he told her...when he will come back he will open his heart to her...she knows that he was going to accept their relation with whole heart..

She don't know where is she...she was just looking at him...nurse came...others came ..they separate them...she was not ready to let go his hand...some one pulled her with force and his hand ....he ...Doctors take him to the OT...

she just stand there her eyes were fixed on the doors...all are trying to compose her...talk to her...but she was unable to listen them...their voices are unreachable...she can hear only one voice....HIS... Before he fainted...he told her in their hug that he loves her...he confessed his feeling just before he fainted.....his voice..his face ...only these things are in her mind...her "Akshat"...she want to tell him ..that she also loves him...only him....for this ...for her love ...for their new life...he has to come back...she will snatch his life from death...he can't leave her like this....she will do everything to bring him back..she went to temple and sit near kanaha ...she was not saying anything just was sitting there lifelessly...

After an hour...

Angad: bhabhi....Bhabhi...bhaii ..Bhaii thk hai...apko bula rhe hai chaliye...

She looked at him...but didn't speak a word to him and went with him...

He  was back stabbed by prev while their fight...people told him to go to the hospital but he was so stubborn...and want to come to her...and when he realize that he was really hurt badly...he was more than half way to home..so he drives with difficulty..but reached home..he thought what if something happens to him so he confessed his feelings to her...

When he open his eyes..she was not there..all are talking to him and thanking god for his life..but his eyes were only searching for one face...HER..

She enters his room...her eyes were red and lifeless..she was not looking at him...he failed her..he promised her that she will not bear any pain from now...and what he did...his carelessness brings him here...how had she coped with all that..? He can't imagine her on his place and he make her feel all those fears of her..

All went out from there and left them alone...

She slowly looked at him.,..and he said...

Aj: Guddan...mai thk hu..

She run to him and hugged him by lying on his chest and clutched his shirt in her fists..she cried..and cried until all her pain is not out from her heart...she slowly stop crying but didn't speak she just closed her eyes and remain there..

Aj: mujhe pta hai mne bht preshan kr diya tumhe...tum jo saza dogi mujhe manzoor hai..ek baar meri tarf dekh lo..mujse baat kro guddan...

She slowly gets up from his chest..she watch him for minutes she touched his face..his hands...he was really here and he is fine..he is not going...she knows he never lied ..and he kept his promise...he was staring at her ...her happiness..the life in her eyes is back..he knows..his guddan is back...she took his face in her hands and kissed his whole face...he was happy from her love shower...he knows she will punish him for this...but she has forgiven him...she hugged him again and he shifts to make place for her..and she fits in her place..like always..he placed his hand around her...and she peacefully sleep on her favorite pillow..HIS CHEST.. 

Tell me if you noticed something..in this OS..

Kya notice Karna thaaa.....

Vaise I loved itt.....😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘

Write another one tooo.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

It's awsm .....😍😍😍😘😘

Par notice kya Karna tha...

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Posted: 4 years ago

And she peacefully sleep on her favorite pillow,his chest.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

In my os guddan did not speak one word...which is impossible in original serial😊