❤ Life is beautiful with my ANGEL ❤ - MG OS - Completed - Page 13

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

I unressed. Surprise 🤣

Pleasant one though...Tum bhut chalu ho...but I love all your chaluness...

wait let me read your comment now...🤗

Love certainly more beautiful with Geet

Maan understood it way before bas Geet thora slow tha lol

At the end he did realise..love his sudden confession ... He pour his heart out .. he was sad devasted but true of his feelings .. true love

How can Geet not see it .. lovely ending

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Aww baby such a lovely os this is.. As someone new to writing you have done a tremendous job. Kudos 👏 Please do write more.

Coming to the os - I loved the simplicity behind this story very much. And also this one is a lot different than your first attempt. That was humorous and this has deep layers.

A simple tale of one sided love from Maan's perspective. Loved how he described her and him. Lol mostly distinguishing between their variations. Geet of course accha hi gaayegi aakhir uska naam hi hain na Geet 😘
But then I laughed loud at that bathroom singer line..hahahah 😂😂

So Maan is quietly in love with her as they work in the same office. It seemed to me that Geet senses that Maan loves her, specially when she dragged him out to have fun on the trip but alas that was not the case. Good that Maan proposed at last since Geet was absent for days. She is yet to grasp the bomb dropped onto her. But she did that gladly by telling him that she loves him. Good that she took time. However what about her engagement? Oh well idc..Maaneet are together that matters only.

Thanks for sharing this lovely sweet story baby. Proud of you 💕

Thanks, Baby...I sure hope to write more too...this Maaneet magic doesn't let us keep our imaginations to ourselves...

Thanks for the kind words, dear...I am glad you liked my attempt at some deep romance for Maaneet...

Umm about Engagement...I had a plot in my mind regarding that...let's see if that gets written or not...

Thanks again, Baby...love you

Originally posted by: kuhu18

😊res

Waiting for the unres, eagerly now...🤗

Originally posted by: sanum23

Lovely os

Thanks, Dear...I am glad you found it lovely 🤗

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Truely... keep writing 😊😊😊

I sure hope to write more too...🤗

Thanks for all the love, Sabina 😊

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Love certainly more beautiful with Geet

Maan understood it way before bas Geet thora slow tha lol

At the end he did realise..love his sudden confession ... He pour his heart out .. he was sad devasted but true of his feelings .. true love

How can Geet not see it .. lovely ending

Thanks for the lovely words, Dear...

Yes Geet thodi slow thi but chalo late hi sahi, she too understood his love...😉

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Thanks for the lovely words, Dear...

Yes Geet thodi slow thi but chalo late hi sahi, she too understood his love...😉

That was the best part

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

I sure hope to write more too...🤗

Thanks for all the love, Sabina 😊

You should try writing ss now... be it tiny miny one .. do try

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

You should try writing ss now... be it tiny miny one .. do try

Hopefully Soon...👍🏼