REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 67

Because of new lay out all gone wrong

Better you wait few days before update

Part 40

G-Nahi wo...mujhe raat ko akele darr lagta hai…isliye…

He walks into his bedroom carrying her and then slowly puts her on the bed

M-I see

She bites a portion of her lip while embarrassed

He pulls the blanket over her and then touches her lip

M- You keep doing that and you are going to draw blood one day

G-Huh?

M-Go back to sleep

He pats her head and gets up

G-Nahi....its morning...I should get up

M-Its 4am…its night enough

G-oh...I’ll go to my room

M- You can sleep here, I’ll be over there...

He says pointing to a desk and chair in his room

G-Why?

He gets and walks away sitting down on the chair

M-Why what?

G-Why are you there? Won’t you sleep?

M-I had to do some reports…forgot about them last night

Geet let gai

G-Wake me up at 6…ok

He nods

Ache se bliss so gai

Maan chupp chap kaam ka raha hai occasionally sneaking glances at her

Soon enough its 6 am

Maan ne Geet ko awaaz lagai ki

M-Geet uthjao its 6

Geet pehle zara bass...umm..emmm..karne lagi

G-5...5 min

He lets her sleep for another 5 minutes

He goes out in the meanwhile gets the newspaper puts tea on the stove

Comes back in

M-Geet uth jao its 6

She opens her eyes

G-ummm...I hate getting up....

She complaints like a kid

M-Well…then don’t. Go back to sleep. You dont have to.

Keh kar kamre se bahar chala jaata hai

Geet uth jaati hai aur cute si pout ke saath dishelved baalon ke saath haath mein rajai pakadte hue drags her legs towards her room

M-I made tea for you!!

He shouts after her as he sees her walking past

G-Comingggg

Maan bread butter or chai lekar baith gaya newspaper padhne

Geet jaldi se bhaagke aayi hair tied in a bun mooh dhoke

Full speed mein naashta and tiffin banana chalu

M-You can slow down...train nahi choot rahi tumhari. Baith kar chai to pii lo

G-Aaiaai...pii loongi

She takes sips while she works

M-Geet?

He calls her looking intently at her

G-hmmm

She answers without looking

M-Geet babyyy....

She frowns hard...ki isko kya hua

M-Sweet honeyyy

She turns

M- Knew that would surely get your attention

He points to the chair

M-Sit

G-tch!

She clicks her tongue and turns around again back to her work

M-Sweetcakes....caaraaa

G-Shhhhhhhhhhhhh

M-cheriiee...queridooo...

G-Kya bol rahe ho?

M-Baith jao

G-Chup raho! Banne do

M-Ma cher

He gets up silently puts his hands on her shoulder and drags her back to the chair, applies enough force to make her sit

M-Kuch khalogi to train nahi chutegi

G-Banega tab to khaungi. Hato! Jal jayega

He offers her the tea which she wasn’t drinking

M-Tch..piilungi…pii rahi hoon main banate hue

Maan stands in her way of getting up

M- Is it that bad that you can’t sit and enjoy it?

G-Ufffffff

Geet has to sit

G-Ziddi!

M-Main? Huh!Mi querida son increíblemente dulces

Maan smiles as he says to her knowing she doesn’t know Spanish and he can say what he wants

G-Haan haan thik hai

Geet jaldi se finish karti hai aur jaldi sabziyan daalti hai pan mein

M-Be careful with all that bustle

He goes back to reading his paper

Geet jaldi se speed mein kaam karti hai

As Maan comes back from shower ready for office breakfast table par hai aur tiffin bhi par Geet aas-paas nahi hai

He sits down and starts munching on the breakfast

Maan takes a quick breakfast, picks up his lunch, and yells for Geet

M-Geet!Main jaa raha hoon! Bye! Breakfast was nice! Thanks! Kuch chahiye ho toh cal lkar dena, aate time le aunga

As bike pe baithta hau toh jaldi se aake Geet peeche baith jaati hai

G-sorry sorry I am late

M-Where are you going?

He asks not starting the bike

G-Embassy

He nods then starts the bike

G-Mujhe bass auto stand tak chod dena

He drives quickly and drops her off at the embassy

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I posted this part to check if IF has become better or not. But no. It still has issues like:

• When I copy paste stuff text from word then it randomly vanishes space between words for each line
• Cannot figure out how to add people to buddy list
• My signature is not visible
• Cannot update the Topic name
• When post is edited then the formatting is automatically lost
• No forum search available
• Cannot send PM to more than 10 people (Its the most frustrating part for a writer!)

It becomes very difficult for a writer to post anything like this. so frustrating. If you have found any work around these problems please help. And most importantly, enjoy the story

Yes things not so better now ... it's frustrating 👹👹👹

One can add buddy from lappy not phone

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Yes things not so better now ... it's frustrating 👹👹👹

One can add buddy from lappy not phone

Specially for writers. Downgrading good features. As if IF hates us. Kahan group PM ek baar mein bhejne deta instead of 50 ki limit. Ab limited to 10 only

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Specially for writers. Downgrading good features. As if IF hates us. Kahan group PM ek baar mein bhejne deta instead of 50 ki limit. Ab limited to 10 only

About pm limit , Vijay said it will be solve soon ( not don't trust him )

Today IF not letting me post OS...saying abusive content .. 🙄🙄🙄🙄 they gone mad

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

About pm limit , Vijay said it will be solve soon ( not don't trust him )

Today IF not letting me post OS...saying abusive content .. 🙄🙄🙄🙄 they gone mad

You are right...dont trust him...

News!!!! found another bug! Half of my posts are gone (IF has now become Thanos)

Another one, IF not posting my posts/replies randomly

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

You are right...dont trust him...

News found another bug! Half of my posts are gone (IF has now become Thanos)

Thanos😄😄😄 so right ...

Half part gone oh no ... leave it .. don't post today

I guess today IF more messed up

I updated few days ago ... all were fine

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Thanos😄😄😄 so right ...

Half part gone oh no ... leave it .. don't post today

I guess today IF more messed up

I updated few days ago ... all were fine

Half part nahi, half of my total posts gone

Another one, IF not posting my posts/replies randomly

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Half part nahi, half of my total posts gone

Another one, IF not posting my posts/replies randomly

New bugs .. inform in global thread... actually I have no hope from IF now

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

New bugs .. inform in global thread... actually I have no hope from IF now

Yeah me too...lets find some other place