Love flourished in college{Akshan FF- Chapter 17 Pg 35 01/07/2019) - Page 17

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Wow...just wow ...

Read whole story in one go ...
Must say you are a super writer...
Plz add Akshan romance in panchgini...
Durga mam yaha b fool he hai.hope she don't create hurdles in there story...
Update soon

Haaye haaye
how can one read this in one go! mujhse toh na ho pata
Well I have been a fan of Shinchan from my childhood toh us andaaz main by scratching back of my head
Abb main itni bhi kuchh khass nahi!
bass abb chane ka ped aur weight bardassht nahi kar payega
So I will end this here
Haaye scenes mile toh .
This is Akshan's story we will think about Durga mam later...
I will update it on 25 or 26
Thanks! and keepliking this story.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks! and welcome to the forum if you are not new to forum then welcome to this college story...
and keep enjoying
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Posted: 6 years ago
I know kajal you want to read this but sorry your wait ends on 25 or 26
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti24

I have read all the chapter of this FF and they r awesome plz plz update soon,want to see some cute, romantic moments in the trip betweem akshan

Plz continue soonnn...😊

Thanks glad to know it was worth of reading
Even I want to let's see main kitna de paati hoon
Sure
I will update next part probably on 25 or 26
Do tell me how will be it?
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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry I know aap sab mujhe zaroor pitna chaah rahe honge as I promised to post this on 25 or 26 but what to do mujhe yeh indiaforums ki nayi process samajh hi nahi aa rahi thiaj bhi badi mashakkat baad I could do this and bohot Sorry isiliye bhi as I know many of us are expecting more Akshan scenes in this trip but even after lots of thinking I was able to just get hardly 1 or 2 so sorry for the disappointment....

Chapter 14

As Akshat slept staring Guddan's face who was in deep sleep.Guddan's hand encircled his arms she was still in sleep and her head rested on Akshat's shoulders. As the night passed her grip on his arms tightened.In between her eye got opened accidently but as she was too tired and was still in deep sleep.

Guddan saw Akshat sitting beside her and her head resting on his shoulders she smiled and thought "How beautiful this seems". Kaash yeh saach main hota encircled her hands around his arms and slept.

In dawn Akshat's sleep broke as the water bottle fall straightly on his face from the bag which was exactly on top of his head and he noticed Saru who was standing infront and trying to take some stuff out from her bag but due to unavailability of legspace she struggled too hard for it.

Saru(hesitatingly)- in low voice- I am extremely Sorry sir I didn't intended to disturb your sleep or make you wake but I just needed some stuff from my bag and you both were in too deep sleep and yahaan space bhi kaafi kam hai toh,but still I am sorry.

Akshat- who was in anger but had no option- It's fine, I can understand and I know it very well that you idn't did it intentionally and why would you?

Saru- Yaah!

And one more thing sir Sorry for the inconvenience of the last night.

You had to sleep here so uncomfortably just because of me but now I am feeling fine so if you want you can have your own seat.

Akshat whose heart ached from the thought that he has to get away from her.

Akshat- Are you sure,and waise bhi I don't have any problem,if you are still feeling dizzy you can take my seat.

Saru-No sir,i am absolutely fine now this remedy actually worked.

Now for sure Akshat has no option but to leave his seat and get back to his own seat. He left his seat and occupied his previous seat.

In morning-

Guddan woke up,and saw Saru's face.

Guddan- Saru,tu yahaan?

Saru smiled and said- Who else will be here other than me.

Guddan questioningly remembered the last night she saw his face .

Saru- Tell me Guddan.

Guddan- No one

Guddan( in her mind)- Tu bhi na Guddan jab you know it so wel that it was just a dream then why are you committing such a huge mistake of expeting it to be real.

It was a dream! dream for sure,I am definitely sure

In this mean time the bus reached the hotel.All of them got departure from bus carrying their own luggage.As an official of college Akshat has to make sure all had departed.As an gentleman he offered hand to every one who was not comfortable to downstair the bus as the gap between the last stair and ground was huge.

And most of them who needed help were girls almost all as due to their feminine attires like sarees,mini skirts,etc and then fashionable footwears. Durga,Saru and other girls happily handed over their hands to him and proceeded towards lobby of hotel.

Guddan was the last one to depart from the bus.

Akshat offered his hand to her but Guddan will be Guddan.She refused.

Guddan- It's Ok I can manage this myself.

Akshat- OK! As you wish.

As she proceeded her piece of long skirt got stuck in her heels and she closed her eyes in fear.As she opened her eyes she was in his arms.

He was glaring her irritatedly questioning her.

Guddan- Uttariye hume,Aise kyaa dekh rahe hain.

Akshat-OK!

and he made her stand on her feet.

Akshat- Sahi kehte hai log,aajkal bhalaai ka toh zammana hi nahi raha,ek toh help karo an what you get in return is arrogance.

Guddan- Oh hello I didn't ask you for help.

Akshat- That's what I am saying ek toh you didn't ask for it then when I voluntarily offered you refused and when I saved you still you are showing tantrums.Miss Tantrum.

Guddan- Did you just said me arrogant and Tantrum queen?

Akshat-Hadn't you listened that idiom"Samajhdar ko ishaara kaafi".This made Guddan mad at him and she irritatedly took her luggage and stepped in lobby and joined all of them. later Akshat too joined them.

The hotel wasn't big either it was more just like a restaurant and has 3-4 big halls which got divided between all of them Girls were having 2 halls and boys were having 2.

Akshat announced.

Akshat- So guyzz as you all know finally we have reached Panchgani and as it's around 10 so get ready,get fresh even take rest we will have our lunch around 2:30 and will start exploring Panchgani around 4.

So be at sharp 2:30 for lunch.

OK! Sir all of them exclaimed...

So finally they have reached Panchgani. What turn this expedition will give to their lives and our story?

Waiting for all of your takes,

Stay tuned.

Aur plz zyaada jute mat maarnaaa.

Note- Maybe I will be not here for the next whole month So Sorry in advance but will definitely be here whenever possible but if I won't be able to make this possible please bear with me. Sorry and Waiting for all of your takes....

Thank you!

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Posted: 6 years ago

beautiful update dear

loved it

aww akshat was angry at saru for making him go away from his guddan

will he confess his feelings to guddan

i hope durga doesn't create a problem for akshan

do continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wonderful update

Akshat wanted to stay beside Guddan but had to leave because of Saru bechara

Nok jhok between Akshan was cute🙂

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update pehle to 26 tarik bolkr itna imtezaar krwaya bt ur update was wait worth

Here guddan is showing tantrum and Aj is helping her continue soon and plz update ur other stories too

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing

Loved it

Update ASAP

Waiting for the next part

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