MG FS : Love happens || LAST PART Page 15 | March 24, 2019 - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: suhaaana


I will try to update today 😛



Do update Suhaana..😉
I'm eagarly waiting for Geet's reaction lol 😛😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223



Do update Suhaana..😉
I'm eagarly waiting for Geet's reaction lol 😛😆



Me too Suhaana...😃
Wonder what will this lady Gundi Geet do to Maan...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma



Me too Suhaana... 😃
Wonder what will this lady Gundi Geet do to Maan...😆


Truly speaking I haven't written geet's reaction last time
I have to write her reaction now seeing you all waiting😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Congratulations for your new stist...
Interesting...

Loved the concept...

Geet here is fiesty n knows how to handle any situation...

Not afraid of anyone...

Maan is just the same...

She taught Sam a very nice lesson... I enjoyed what she did with Sam ...

She ruined maan's certificate...

N Maan inturn kissed her ...



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Congratulations for your new stist...

Interesting...

Loved the concept...

Geet here is fiesty n knows how to handle any situation...

Not afraid of anyone...

Maan is just the same...

She taught Sam a very nice lesson... I enjoyed what she did with Sam ...

She ruined maan's certificate...

N Maan inturn kissed her ...




thank you, dear,
i am glad that you are loving this different flavor of maaneet
i hope you will enjoy the coming updates too
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87
~LOVE HAPPENS~

PART 3


Maan left her but instead of crying or anything she tear off his certificate and left from the place making Maan to look at her going figure. she was damn cute yet angry, innocent yet bold and he liked this wild tigress who was ready to fight for her rights and face everything like a true competitor. He looked at her retreating figure, he could still find her alluring with her long wavy hair cascading her back. He never saw a girl who could make him loose his control. Maan looked at his team mates, the guys who were commenting previously on Geet had their Jaws dropped seeing The Maan Khurana finally smitten by such a beautiful girl who could make him dance on her tunes, while Arjun was looking at Maan with a smirk and before any single word could have grace Maan's act, a not so cool glare stopped the words that were forming in Arjun's mouth.


It was almost three days that Geet had not seen Maan. Maan knew that the last act in the college could make her shut in her home but knowing her he knew she was planning for something big.


He smiled, it was the third day he found his lioness, all-ready in in white dress this time, and a frown adorning on her beautiful face. She was late running to get to her class, she must have woken up late, he thought, and her curly wet hair tied with two hair pins were telling him the entire thing to be true. Instead of seeing her again in desi avatar he saw her in white and golden frock which was till her knee's small sleeves and a gold chain with a diamond pendant and what amused him that she wore Jootis of golden pattern and a knee length legging complimenting her frock. He had seen many girls, but she was the only one carrying herself so gracefully.


Maan had gathered all the information about her and the reason of her outburst was quite justified, she goes to an orphanage and spent her four hours with the blind and the notes Sam had spoilt were for exams and she really had worked hard. Maan who himself share same personality with her couldn't help to admire her. Though she was running late but couldn't help to stop in between and greet whoever she found she was not aware of him staking or she would have broken his head till now.


A week later he was sitting alone after his practice all the members of his team left just he was there practicing when he heard the soft melodious tune of anklets he looked at her and found her coming with something in her hand..Maan was deliberately not looking at her but the next moment he found her sitting next to her.. And made a guilty face she looked at him and his face was filled with some excitement that made her to glare at him.


Maan: hmm so you came to see me. I must say you are an efficient student khud hi aa gayi


Geet was confused and made a pouty face she looked at him with big doe shaped eyes.


Geet : huhhh... What are you saying? She asked getting confused with his words.


Maan who was faking his innocence and making her to jump on the spot or say precisely she bounced on him showing him her big eyes and making a cute face that was filled with anger.


Maan : haan don't you know how to kiss wahi seekhne aayi hona hai.. Don't worry I'll make you perfect.

He winked and she was ready to punch him, but he just pulled her with his hands caressing her length of arm she gasped for air parting her lips slightly. He just brought her closer slightly licking her upper lip with his tongue today no one was there to see them. His one hand was holding waist and his other one supporting her shoulder the next moment he made her comfortable on his lap and she was frightened she looked at him with those terrified eyes she knew that what it could lead to she wriggled and whispered in his mouth.


Geet: leave me... she pleaded as she felt the unknown sensation filling her, he was just teasing her with his lips and his hands were again on her waist caressing the soft flesh above. As he found her getting comfortable, she was getting lost with his perfect ministrations, she held his shirt in a fist and let him take the command. Her eyes were closed, and she felt his lips leaving her lips and kissing the corner of her lips, teasing her again. This time, it was Maan who was surprised as he felt her soft lips capturing his initially and giving in to her demand initially after taking the control, evoking new sensations and feelings in her she felt herself lost until he proceeded to slow the kiss and started to make her drown in the pool of budding love and appreciation for her.


Maan slowly let het to take the lead when he found her slowly melting.


Maan: that's correct. Waise my wild cat why are you here?

He whispered making Geet's senses muddle and she snapped, and she looked directly at him... Slowly getting up and with guilty eyes she handed him an envelope. Maan looked at her with curiosity he opened it and found his certificate. He was thoroughly confused but found her words more soothing than his confusion.


Geet: Sorry. I didn't know that it was Sam and I poured my anger on you.


Maan was amused she knew to apologize too. Her apologetic face was making him fall for her even more, but he couldn't help to tease her a bit.


Maan: but I am not at all sorry.


Geet: come again I didn't get you or your words.


Maan: that milky kiss the perfect one with one of the most gorgeous beauty. And even I don't repeat Sam's mistake again.


his words and teasing were making her loose her temper and with angry eyes Geet was about to tear the new certificate too, but she composed herself.


Geet : shameless flirt... Sharm nahi aati..


Maan : aati hai na.. Wo bhi bahut isliye I promise I wont kiss you in public after all my image will get spoil na. waise this court isn't it good that no one was here today.


Geet was getting frustrated and Maan was enjoying teasing her.


Maan softly pushed her strands of hair and whispered in her ear.


Maan: you know that was the first kiss of mine aur wo bhi itni sweet... I don't mind having you in my life and making you my dulhan Maan ki dulhan..


Blush crept on her lips and her lips curved into a smile. Second meeting and this jerk is making her loose her sanity. He was a shameless flirt, she concluded.


Geet : don't talk rubbish I will marry someone who will be ready to look after me and help me in my work.. Tum kya karoge? You will later join your family business. And then will put restrictions on your wife... She was going on and on. And he was amused he too knew about him but least she knew that he will establish himself.

Seeing, only herself speaking Geet continued,


Geet : why I am saying you this.. Main bhi pagal hun.. Chodo mujhe.. Mere bache mera intzaar kar rahe honge..


she thought that he will be shocked to hear but he was a step ahead.


Maan : just wait a second let me change phir chalte hain.. Let the bachas meet their daddy to be.


Maan was hiding his laughter but she was embarrassed and left immediately.

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Readers review awaited


NEXT : FINAL PART

Sorry for the delay guys, i was busy reading my incomplete stories😛
Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
hello suhana... how are you?

thanks for updating.

Part 3

Incredible update! amazingly written!

Geet's reaction was reasonable!

Maan cannot help but stare at Geet! not surprised that Maan is falling for Geet! she is indeed special and unique! liked how Maan's cool glare shut Arjun up from making any comments! he has met his match!!

at least Maan knows why Geet is not at college and is planning something!

Finally he sees her again... of cos he is bowled over seeing her simplicity and beauty!

nice that Maan has gathered info about Geet! Geet is a wonderful person! great that he admires her work ethic!

wow Geet went to meet Maan!

liked Maan teasing Geet! he again kisses her... but she is affected by it!

as expected Geet apologized to Maan! wonderful that she gave him a certificate!

yep he is indeed a shameless flirt! he loves to annoy her!

Maan ki Dulhan as a nice ring to it.😃

seems like Geet knows much about Maan!

Geet though to scare Maan when she told him her children are waiting for him... but Maan wants their bacha to meet their dada to be...😆

he is one step ahead of her! poor Geet!

enjoyed reading this update

next part is the last part😲



Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bache?? Kab kaise kaha??? Maan knows her better
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Bache?? Kab kaise kaha??? Maan knows her better



read again you will know bache

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