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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m

Dhamekedar.. Fabolous..
Ayan family thinking so saddd
Geet looking for maan n ayan.
N knowing abt marrige with maan on same date it frustated ger more n she drag maan n their all convooo sooo lovely thikhi n namkeen nok jhok..
Bt glad mohinder agre for maann geet maarige :)
Waiting for nxt
Thnx for pm :)

That's a very cute comment Tammana!!

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Originally posted by: paponecon

so before maan telling anything, his parents gave th proposal..everyone from ayans family against geet due to his fathers position...geet is already gone case n maan is in teasing mode...waiting for nxt


Hmm Is Geet a gone case or it's more Maan who is the one!!😉
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: manjeet6

Awesome update

Geet is confused what's happening with her life
Loved Maaneet's nok jhok
Specially knife wala part
Aayan family is really creaper
Loved the Precap
Beautifully written

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree




Amazing, lovely n wonderful update


Originally posted by: priyasree




Loved Maaneet scenes, especilally knife wala scene
Nobody told Geet about the marriage, poor her...it is her marriage after all


Originally posted by: priyasree



Precap is interesting and funny





Very much glad that you found the update wonderful along with the Knife scene!!!

It's not about telling her, she obviously knew iot...But the situation was really complex along with short timing!!!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful updates with fab.gif...geet was confused about everything messed up as not getting marriage with maan not ayyan on fixed date only...awe when she saw maan entry she wanted to do something to him which he came to know her trick & dragged her in her room with love but loved the way geet pointed knife to him while pinned him to wall and his reaction as awesome .. then both were very much affected with each other that her sherni awatar vanished with bhighi billi exist... fb showed how ayaan & family were selfish by rejecting marriage as geet's family became bankrupt ... its not fair to judge people with their wealth only.. happy as maan's mom who was ready for maaneet marriage...when geet was blabbering about his character & he trapped geet with her knife to hurt him which she tried to free from him.. wonderful VM ... excited for maaneet marriage ceremony ... thanks for pm...!!


I am glad that you liked the GIFS...

Maan just anticipated that his fireball must be upset with him for not calling her in last two days!! hahahah loved your comment about the bhigi billi context!!! 😆

Thanks a lot for this amazing comment!! hope you enjoy rest of the story too!!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

@Chapter 7

Interesting update dear
Liked it!! Well penned.
Beautiful gifs
Aftermath Maan's departure Geet's state reflects her muddled up thinking and was not coherent with the happenings taking place around her. Her stubborn self didn't let to bend down before her father and was at dead end to find what's happening in her life. Before she could approach elders to find answers to her questions Maan came to her rescue more to stop her from approaching them. Liked Maan and Geet's ferocious banter and sarcasm. Hate Aayan's family members thought. They are flip floppers and have vacillating and avaricious thinking. This shows the reality of the society and their perspective which depends on money. Glad that Maan's parents came up with a wise decision of getting Maan married to Geet solving Maan's problem. Maan would have been the extremely happiest person with his parents decision as he got one more chance to make Geet his. Geet likes Maan but it's her stubborn attitude which makes her do things. Geet surely likes Maan unlike Aayan. Geet is trapped by Maan in her own game. Liked knife scene...
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Originally posted by: anu5

Awesome precap baby.

Loved your editing skills and the scenes were apt for the song.
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Thank you so very much!! Love you comments as usual!!! Ecstatic that you liked the VM!! Love you baby!! 🤗


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Chapter 10 : FindingThe Name





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After a few more wedding rituals and lazy talks, a lot of teasings it was finally the hour for a nervous Maan to finally approach the night with his new bride!!

Having millions of thoughts jumbling inside the head, Maan entered the decorated room where his beautiful bride awaits!!

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One more step indoors and his nostrils welcomed the intoxicatingly alluring fragrance inside the room. His eyes grow despairing searching for the elixir to quench his soul.

There Geet was, dazzling like a star with her bashful gaze cast downwards.

Blooming like a sunflower in the center of the bed. Beautiful and divine like the moon!!

Meanwhile, Maan's labored breath mounted higher as he touched the flowers scattering around their bed.

Geet gaped up towards him through her heavy lashes. Entranced, Maan was lured into his breathtaking bride's eyes.

"Aahmm... Sensing dryness taking over his throat, Maan cleared his windpipes.

Without a word, Geet promptly sat up and forwarded the water which was kept aside. Then abruptly she shied away and hid herself again under that painfully long veil.

Drinking the water slowly, Maan smiled at her cat-like characteristics. Placing himself exactly besides her, his eyes situated on her beautiful toenail which was painted in henna same as her hands.

Amidst, the heat was getting better. Maan felt the need to rid of the uncomfortable heavy wedding attires, starting from losing the buttons of his sherwani.

Well, it's a long tiring day after all!!

"Geet... Keeping the turban aside called her name in the meekest tone possible!!

"Hmm... Came her effortless reply!

"Kaisi ho...?? Not knowing what to say further, Maan halted for a second before adding, "Bohot der ho gayi...Tumne theek se khana toh khaya tha na??

That's a new one!!! Why does he even care!!! Don't fall for his charms Geet!!!

"Hmm...Kha liya... She kept her answers concise and specific, not wanting to be charmed by Maan's care!!

"Great!!..ermm... And he was stuck like a loop, at the mirage of continuation!!

"Woh...Kafi...Thak gayi hogi na tum...
Change kar lo...Ye kapde bohot uncomfortable honge...Somehow mumbled, ordering his eyes not to get lost in her everlasting beauty!!

"But aunty told me there is this rasm! She shouldn't sound such innocuous which makes him beam like a love-struck fool, "You have to unveil this long veil...And Mehendi...Aur bhi kuch tha...

"Oh..Haan...Sure... Holding the fabric by both hands, Maan unveiled his bride who was not less than any euphoric dream!!

"O M G... He whispered in a shocking tone while Geet gazed up in befuddlement!!

"Kiya huwa...I am looking really bad hain naa..." As she cribbed furiously her innocence killed him more, "I will not leave that beautician!!! Bola tha m a i n e. . . While she stiffened at once perceiving Maan's desirous eyes.

"Tumhe bohot shikayet thi na mujhse??
Kitna gussa ho gayi thi mujhpe...
Kyun ki maine tumse kabhi ye zikar nahin ki na??
Lekin aaj dastoor srif mera hain...Tareef ka...Haq bhi...Maan let his words caress her earbuds at a slow pace, his orbs locked on hers!!

"Ji?? An unnerved Geet raised her eyebrows in puzzlement, "What are you even saying...Human language, please...So that I can understand!! Kis pe gussa thi main?? Which Maan loved more!! Specially those two big hazels which were glowing like stars in confusion!!

"Bohot khubsurat ho tum...itna khubsurat hone ka haq kisi ko nahin hona chahiye... Inclining closer, he dripped a whisper staring at her mesmerizing features!!

"Offo woh?? Aap bhi na Maan...Waise kitna aattitude diya tha mujhe ek simple se sawal par ke main kaisi lag rahi hoon!!!" Geet babbled, letting out a nervous smile, "Chalo issbar...Bridal get up mein hi sahi aapne mujhe notice toh kiya... Trying to sound as normal as possible but her palpitating heartbeat must be audible to that devil by now!!

"Dulhan ho bhi toh tum srif meri na...Aab toh meri puri zindegi tumhare naam ho chuki hain...Sara dhayan(attention) bhi...
Main aapni khush-nasibi pe kiya kahoon... Splashing the whispers those roaming eyes fixed at her plump lips, "Jo tum meri dulhan ho... His genuine affection pierced her fluttering heart.

Reprimanding inside her head for the endless times, Geet reminded to gather herself fast before losing to this enchantment!!

Aspiring to sound rude, "Aap sach mein itna hi khush hain Maan?? Ended up more like a perplexed soul!!

"Unexpectedly yes...Soch se kayi zayada... Came his hoarse voice, eyes still fixed on her lips!!

"Accha??? Khud ki barbadi pe?? Trying her best to project a crooked smile!!

But his words of that warm incantation left her undone, "Barbadi kahan, aabadi hain ye toh...
Kali lambi raat ke baad asmaan jaise khush hota hain subha ko dekh ke...Aur barish ke baad dhoop jaise kho jata hain sathrang(rainbow) se mil kar... He was in some other land while his eyes turned blank expressing all the stupor!!

Waving her palms in front of Maan's dazed face, Geet curved her lips a little, "Lagta hain Galib ji ki aatma aa gayi hain aap mein...Shayeri pe shayeri mar rahe ho...Aur... His gazes found their life back on that angelic creature who paused getting the heat, "Aur isstarha mujhe maat dekhiye... Shifting her hazels sideways, not wanting to be enslaved by his mystic orbs!!

"Kyunnn??? A destitute whisper was thrown!!

"Aise hi... Her coy smile couldn't escape as he grasped her chin, coercing her to look at him, "Bolo na kyun!!! His voice melted in husk while Geet locked her eyes back inside his dark browns!!

Their worlds seemed to have stopped in those gazes. Maan couldn't recover himself back from her kohl applied hazels. Now He could swear he has seen how angelic eyes must appear!!

Gradually but inevitably, Maan was falling in the bottomless pit of love with each passing moments.

Drifting closer, he viscerally cupped Geet's face. She shuddered with his delicate touches which sent jolts in her body. Her eyes lay their focus on his lips. Those perfect shaped lips which had the most perfect defined cupid's bow!!

Following her gaze, Maan grasped his bride is ogling at his lips. The craving in her hazel lamps was vivid. But isn't it him who is thirsty! His eyes mimicked her actions and her plump lips invited him immediately!!

It was just one breath away as his soothing voice enchanted her, "Can I...Kiss...Hmm... That immense innocence gleaming in her eyes made him shy for a moment!!

Hence that kiss was plastered on her forehead. Slightly above beneath her left eyebrow which she raised immediately after the purity of his love lingered upon the ambiance.

Controlling her breathing, she cursed at herself for expecting that kiss on her lips!!

"I don't know what I am doing...But...I truly couldn't be happier that... Finally this beautiful doll... Maan's thumbpad whisked on the delicate skin of Geet's cheeks as his gazes changed focus frequently to her lips till eyes, "You...
Are my bride...My wife... He spoke huskier than the Zephyr, plastering innumerable kisses on her knuckles.

Burning in his passion, a shy Geet tried to get away from Maan, only to be pulled back by her own necklace. Widening her hazels she noticed how her necklace loved being glued to his Sherwani's button!!

"See..Even your jewelry don't want to endure any distance hmm... He has already started loving to make his cute fireball blush profusely!!

Getting pestered, Geet didn't reply rather focused on Maan's sherwani golden button where her necklace was sticking out.

A silent Maan watched all the struggles she had with her shaky hands to free the tangle while resuming her talk about the rituals, "Umm...Woh...Mehendi ki rasm ke sath...Aur bhi kuch kaha tha aunty ne...Kuch pilana hain aapko... She has to evade the incantation of that dangerous sorcerer of a husband!

Otherwise, death is certain!!

Quickly racing her mind to elude how smooth his lips felt against her skin, Geet mumbled, "Haan...Yaad aaya...Suddenly sounding excited with a rise in the tone!!

"Hmm kiya?? Maan furrowed his eyebrows in anticipation.

"Doodh... Blurted in hurry, almost sounding intangible!!





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Chapter 10 : Finding The Name





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"Doodh... Blurted in hurry, almost sounding intangible!!

"What!?!?? Asked innocently thinking he has heard it wrong!!

"Milk...Milk... Looking at his confused expressions, repeated once again when the airhead in her had to show up, "Cow milk...Aur kuch galat mat samjhiye..." Definitely didn't had to add this!!!

Maan scrunched his face, "Excuse me???"

"Mera matlab hain woh milk hota hain naa cow jo deti hain...Suhagrat pe dulha woh...Rasm..."
Immediately realized how awkward it might be sounding!!!

"I know what cow milk is...But ismein galat kiya samajhna?? Definitely that's an amusing expression on his face!!

Ullu ki patthi!! Gadhi!! Stupid!!! Ye kiya bakwas kar rahi hain tu!! Ye Mr sharafat ko dusht danav mein convert hone ke raste kyun dikha rahi hain!!!

God knows what Maan has planned for the night!!! His eyes are already trying to kill!!! Dekh kaise muskura rahe hain Devil kahin ka!! Pata nahin mann hi mann kiya gandi types samajh rahe honge tujhe!!! Waise bhi aaj danger zone mein hain tu...So koi aur gadbad nahin!!! Jaldi se rasm puri kar aur so jaa!!

Mentally cursing herself she applied the damage control before he would start with his infamous teases, "Haan wahi...Ye...Aapko pina hain abhi..." Snatching the milk glass from the table, Geet hurriedly hovered it in front of Maan who seemed to be irritated as hell just by the look of that glass alone, "Mujhe maat ghuriye...Ye rasm Maine thodi banayi hain!! Rather his amused expressions were now found on her face!!

"Par main... Hesitating slightly he shook his head negatively, "Mujhe nahin pina...

"Ohh...Mujhe aunty se subah dant khilaneka accha plan hain...Lekin pina aapko padega aur woh bhi ye pura glass...Geet narrowed her eyes, not buying his denial!!

Suddenly a child could be seen in him, "Nahin Geet...mujhe milk bilkul nahin pasand...It irks me off...Even am so full right now...Please try to understand!! He tried to explain only to be cut in the middle, "Nahin pasand??...Aha...woh sab mainu ni pata...Aunty ne kaha hain so you better drink it up Maan... Her adamant self was back in form, particularly enjoying Maan's plight!!

"Phir tumhe bhi adha pina padega...Pura I can't... He twisted his lips helplessly, throwing a scared glance at the poor little glass!! It also stared him back innocently!!

"Pehle aap rasm puri kijiye toh sahi... Seeing his cute expressions Geet stifled her giggle and forced the glass on his lips, "Ye zabardas..mm.. Her soft hands cupping his cheeks in a way where there is no escape!!

"Chaliye chaliye...Baas ho gaya... As she spoke with gleaming happiness, inwardly Maan too was actually happy being served by his little fireball!!

"Hehehe...White white muche ban gayi...hahahaha...It looks so funny on you Maan... Looking at the thin white line before his neatly trimmed mustache, Geet giggled like a child!!

Forgetting everything she rubbed his upper lips and not thinking much ended up testing the fragments her fingers were laced with.

There, Maan was, captivated, looking at his world beaming like the sun after so many hazy clouds moving away. He could never forget that distinct melody of Geet's innocent giggling. Or those two cutest dents her cheek formulates!!

Sensing silence from the other side, Geet came back to her old self realizing his dark browns must be in the scanning mode!!

Embarrassed, her gaze fallen down, lips adorned with silence once again while Maan admired her blushes to the fullest!!

The symphony of her bangles and ample jewellery she is adorned with, tinkering of the anklets, everything chimed melody in his eardrums. Focusing at the henna embellished on her hands, Maan took off her bangles one by one.

It was only a matter of seconds when he found his name at the corner of her sensitive palm yet he pretended not being able to find it.
With a frown, Geet perceived how attentively Maan was inspecting both her palms, where his name was vividly visible!!!

Is he blind or simply dense to take so much time???

"Ek naam dhoondne mein itna waqt...?? Pata nahin aapne exams kaise clear ki hongi!! She scrutinized at Maan, doubting his deduction skills!!

"Toh ye exam hain??? He smirked at her impatience, "Ye..Mehendi...Bohot khubsurat hain aur complicated bhi..Thoda waqt toh lagega hi naa... But her sensitive palm is tickling by all these new feathery types of torture he decided to inflict!

"Nahin...Aap janbujh ke der kar rahe ho takey... She sibilated this time, trying to take her hands away from his clutch, "So that??"

Rather all those movements made Maan hold her hands tightly. Throwing an amused stare at her pouty face he embedded his lips on the middle of her palms.

That beautiful raw smell of henna enamored Maan as he imprinted warm kisses of admiration.

"Hmm...Not bad...You understand me quite a lot... Don't you?? Saying so he kept planting kisses all over her palms, not letting her form any words to counter!!

Soon Geet was pushed inside the little oblivion of desires. Those kisses traveling from her palms reached the end of her arms. Feeling drowsy her eyes squeezed shut while she searched for some air, not even realizing Maan was hovering on top of her as she is trapped inside his arms a long ago!! The softness of a pillow brushed against the back of her head as a delirious Geet clutched the bedsheet in her palms!!

A mesmerized Maan quietly drank all the beauty his occasionally shy bride was pouring down, "Tum aaj kuch zayada hi nahin sharma rahi ho?? Kiya irada hain??"Smiling serenely, he stroked the back of his fingers on her delicate cheek, as if painting the art of love there!!

He was so undone by this night!!

Killed with unspoken desire yet resurrected by the first strokes of love.

But she too was in a burning mess. The touches of his soft lips caressing all over her face pushed off all the sanity she had gripped close.

"Maan...Please... As his countless pecks crossed her cute chin to travel further deep, Geet cried a gasp out!!

"Hmmm...?? His sweet voice captivated her more than ever.

There was no strength left in Geet to battle with that strong sorcerer of a husband of hers!! Rather she was shackled by her very own heart.

All those enchanting kisses Maan showered on her face rendered her restless and starved than ever. Opening her dazed eyes the first thing she noticed was those long eyelashes complementing his beautiful eyes.

As their silence talked to each other, he kept reading into her hazels lovingly. Not long before kissing her little nose tip, Maan enveloped his cutesy wife who flushed in beetroots.

Soaked under that vigilant gaze, Geet dared to touch his cheek, caressing through his perfect stubble. Moving his greek face he kissed her same fingers, earning another sensual gasp from her!!

As the lingering increased, Maan tried his best to read his precious before declaring his rights on her shivering lips.

But there she was, staring at him with her hooded eyes as if affirming through silence. He captured the mirror of his image inside her dilated pupils.

Slowly sinking forward Maan found the softness his lips were at thirst of. With his enthralling lips sending jars down Geet closed her orbs again, letting out a muffled groan while her petals were sealed effortlessly!! For a few moments, they remained enraptured like that!

Suddenly the warmth of his lips disappeared hence she opened her eyes, finding herself holding his sherwani in a demanding way. He eyed towards her with immense love brimming out.

That gaze was enough for an enchanted Geet to pull him towards her as she landed on a pillow behind her while he was wrapped in her embrace. Kissing her lips for the second time!!

That's right. This man has already stolen her...Their first kiss. What is he doing to her senses??? Each of the nerves seems on absolute fire!! Erasing all the scopes of denial!!

This one was not something innocent like the first kiss. It had a demanding passion burning from both sides. Their breathings topped, moans of unfamiliar pleasures and new desires filled those very first hours of their wedding night.

Loving the sweetness of his lips, Geet started licking his bottom lips while he sought entry to invade her mouth. Soon pushing his tongue inside he searched more of her sweet nectar, sucking her whimpers in. The seductress in her was not far behind as she twisted her tongue with his wondering one, letting him have the taste of heavenly ambrosia!!

After the kiss turning into a wild breathless mess, both gasped for air. Yet not wanting to leave each other. Briefly, they shared another eyelock before smooching each other over and over again!!

As moments passed immeasurably in passion, the new strong need building inside her increased!! Turning her on, aching for something more sinful!! But the gentleman in her husband was still too cautious about touching her intimately even when he was lost in their kisses, wrapped in her hug!!!

Restless with desire, Geet's hand traveled through all over his hard body atop the heavy sherwani. Marveled, she thought she can never get enough of that masculine body of his!! Stumbling across the buttons of his attire she didn't waste a second before opening them one by one!!!

Getting immensely affected by her touches Maan detached his lips while staring at her closely, moved the strands falling on her face. Leaning on, he inspected her sultry expressions!! Wanting to know what is accumulating in her restless mind!!






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