Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 5 years ago
Welcome back.
 Awesome views.
Please give updates of your FFs.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Forget Baby yeh channel walle nahi sungay. About ur request for retelecast. They just sleep how much you bash them.πŸ˜†



Try karme mai koi problem nahi hai na..I wanted to watch again in TV,and on behalf of other country fans too I requested and they replied!!!Atleast I am happy that I took sm steps to make my wish come trueπŸ˜ƒ
Any few Maaneetians,even in very few numbers mailed them and req to re-telecast😊 But we must consider the channel's pov too...just coz 3-5 members are asking for re-telecast they can't do it!!!If atleast 1000 requests come,they may consider our req!!

The unity among fans matter the most..which  I think...😳



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Posted: 5 years ago
Hi Priya 

Its good to see you posting

Its very true when a girl gets married she leaves her world 
she leaves the protection and comfort of her parents and now 
she has live her life with her husband and his family 
that fact surely is not easy on any girl 
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Posted: 5 years ago
pddd
yeh kya hai
new hai toh bhool ja mein nahi padne wali
aur mein tuje jakthi bhi nahi
ja
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Posted: 5 years ago
Welcome back buddy 
Congrats on the new story 
but old bhi complete kar dena hehe 
will b waiting fr updates
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Hi priya good to see you 


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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: PurnimaSharma

Welcome back πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘


thanks πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: IMA9167

pddd

yeh kya hai
new hai toh bhool ja mein nahi padne wali
aur mein tuje jakthi bhi nahi
ja


koi new nhi hai
its just random scenes
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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 1

Note:  first of all, I want to clear one thing, this is not a any proper story which going ends at happy or sad note... this is just some random scenes which I joint at one platform... hope u like it to read this...

 

She sitting at one corner of bed and seeing own husband in mid while typing on laptop... she sadly smiles to see him, how peacefully he sleeping , here am trying to control own emotions ... this loneliness which I get in gift of marriage from him... he is not proper wrong , he is right my heart knows... today at early morning he gone for training and come late... he is tired I know this... but my heart, my stupid heart to hold him close, chat with him... I just want...

Tears slipped from her eyes...

Kitni ajeeb hoti hai na ye khamoshiya

Jo chubti hai insaan ko aksar tanhaiyo me

Kitna dard deti hai ne khawaishen

Khud ke sapne jb yu adhure rh jaate hai

She again and again said ownself, he is tired please understand my heart...

Par kya kare

Dil hai ki manta nhi

.

This problem is with every other house wife... if I said truth this is not an actual problem but raised by your partner ...

Sochti hu mein aksar

Jb mein inke sath rehne ke liye

Lamhe chura sakti hu

Toh whi ye kyun nhi kr sakte

Kyun ek baar try nhi krte

Kyun inki tarif se koshish nhi hoti

Sometime I feel I just pushing my own self upon him

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This is normal day like another day but each day I just wait for him and he not able realize this...

Koi hai jo tumhari raha dekhta hai har pal

Koi hai jo tumhe chahta hai har pal

Koi hai jiske aankhon se chalak jaata hai pani har dusre pal

Koi hai itna behram mere sanam

Jisse kuch nhi dikhta siway khud ke

Kisse kahe hum ye dard

Kehne ke liye alfaaz bhi toh nhi

.

She just closes the laptop and placed at side table and lay down beside him ... she touched his face and place few packs on his cheek...

Kash ye aankhen kholte aur mujhe dekhke ek pyaari si smile dete

Kash ye hath pakadke mujhe aagosh me lete

But it rarely happens, always I take first step... why

Sometime I want he did same

But it's just dreams...

 

 

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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 1

how are you Priya?

amazing update! terrifically written! 

of cos she feels lonely! she wants to spend a few minutes with her husband! 

her thoughts well portrayed! 

sad that he does not understand or give her time! 

she knows he is tired... 

she wishes that he takes the initiative...

thanks for updating! πŸ˜Š